Dakota

@koren-the-starlighter

Your characters sound super cool. Love the names!

@dakota Hiya sis

Would your character rather give even though you knew the gift wasn’t appreciated/was being wasted or would you hold back?

Bash: I’d hold back the gift. People already have so many gifts and they usually waste them.

Gray: I’d give the gift anyway. As l…[Read more]

@koren-the-starlighter

I’ve always preferred crafting darker story lines.

That’s cool! My sister @dakota plays guitar as well. I’m a super outdoorsy/tomboy type. I love things like hunting, fishing, forging(like blacksmithing stuff tho I don’t do it alot), trucks 😆 But I also do things like crocheting and reading on occasion. So yeah I…[Read more]

@dakota @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @sam-m @kayla-skywriter @bigideaskc @kari-karast @abigail-rebekah

@abigail-rebekah  @dakota  @urwen-starial   @naiya-dyani  @banana-peacock-warrior   @kayla-skywriter  @w-o-holmes  @sam-m @esmeralda-gramilton  @thewirelessblade

Hey anybody else want to help revive this thread?

@mayacat

Great answer btw

Would your character rather kiss a frog to break a curse, or have to become the frog to break the curse?…[Read more]

How interesting @dakota! what is your fanfiction about?

Here’s  the first description(s) of my MC’s love interest, it’s a fast-paced scene so I had to scatter her descriptions around a bit. (if you want to read the whole story, I posted it here: Forum – Sci-fi Writers – Story Embers the topic is Sci-Fi short story).

A woman shouted, “Dro…

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@emberynus-the-dragonslayer

I had been kind of wavering on my end; I’m about to start classes for my conservatory, and I’m also working and balancing other life stuff. I’m not sure I’ll have much time to commit, and I’ll probably only keep having less. So… I think what I might do is find a way to pull my characters out organically. I don’t want…[Read more]

@urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @naiya-dyani @dakota

If you all want to have a meeting and look at this thing and where we want it to go. I’m down. I think we really should all discuss it together. And any ideas you all want to put on the table are welcome.

@kayla-skywriter

As the instigator of this madness, I have to say that I’m…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer  @esmeralda-gramilton @urwen-starial @mayacat

Hi guys. Unfortunately I think I have to step out. I really enjoyed this and I’d love to continue, but I don’t have the time I wish I had to give to this. So I’m officially leaving this project.

@dakota I know we were in the middle of a collaboration, and if I could…[Read more]

@urwen-starial @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @kayla-skywriter @dakota @kayla-skywriter

Hey everybody. I know it’s been a really really long time and I apologize for that. Between getting a job, trying to finish my senior year of highschool and a adding a boyfriend to the mix, things have been pretty crazy for me. But I wanted to rally the troops…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown *clapping* Yes! Don’t let all the humans die…we’re not perfect, but we’re fascinating.😉

@dakota *trying not to cry* Love this so much. Now I’m itching to touch the darker side of the Outrider’s arc…

@rose-colored-fancy Liorah, yes!😄   This Liorah girl sounds like someone I’d like. My favorite characters are the f…[Read more]

@dakota

That’s much better! (To me, at least XD)

Depending on how fast-paced your scene is, you could add a few action beats between the description. If your POV character is more confused than actually scared, this will definitely work, but if you’re in the middle of a chase scene, you could split it up more by moving the “I need a place to…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Totally forgot to reply! *Facepalm*

Nonono that is not too much detail and there is no such thing as “too much detail” if you incorporate it in an engaging way and that was fun to read! It showed so much character and really brought me into the scene.

Thank you so much! I’ll definitely use this piece!

@dakota

Sure! Awesome…[Read more]

@dakota Ooh, nice job! That actually kinda reminds me of the song “Twenty-Four” by Switchfoot: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c6oCFVGuSyQ