@dakotaActive 1 month ago
WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?! . . .
Okay, it has.
Tell me what you all think of this poem.
Rainbow in Waterdrops
Come down…[Read more]
@sparrowhawke I like this! It’s raw and honest. I don’t think I would change anything in it. Keep writing! 🙂
Would you rather wear the same outfit every day (it’s clean, it’s just that all your outfits are the same) or wear a different outfit every day for the rest of your life?
Dayton: “I don’t care. As long as it is clean and professional in appearance, it matters little what I wear.”
Alan: “Bor-ing. I’ll rather a different outfit eve…[Read more]
@arindown Wow! Thanks. . . Guess that means it’s a good plot.
@arindown Oo, this does sound like fun! Lemme try . . .
Megyn: *at age six* “Why did God let Daddy die?”
Mrs. Morgan, guardian and mother figure: “We may not understand why He allowed it . . . But He loves you.”
Megyn: * at age 13 * “If God is my Father, why do I feel so alone?”
Douglas Griffith, mentor and spiritual guardian: “Is your…[Read more]
Yeah, it’s right in the middle of a chase scene in a fanfiction I’m writing. The POV is actually from “his” perspective.
No, actually, the artistic license was a good inspiration. So,more like this?
A teenage girl stood before him. Every ragged gasp heaved her thin shoulders as each nerve in her slender figure quivered. Tatters of stained clothing hung from her short frame. Stains from sweat and dirt covered her from head to foot. Her hands and…[Read more]
@rose-colored-fancy Can I join in on this?
So here is my description for critique.
Her clothes hung in tatters from her body. She stood before him – or rather below him for their difference in height-, with every nerve in her frame quivering. Each breath heaved her thin shoulders as they spilled out of her in ragged gasps. Streaks of dirt…[Read more]
And yes, I know that is song.
@naiya-dyani Yeah, I realized that after I wrote this. 😁
This one is another very personal to me. Critique and enjoy!
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]
@omi Cool! I look forward to it.
@omi This is just lovely!! I don’t see anything I would change in it. Good work. 🙂
Would you rather be a space pirate or a time-traveler?
Dayton: *ponders the question bit more serious this time* “A space pirate.”
Alan: “Oh yeah!! That would be awesome. I’m a HUGE fan of sci-fi!”
Rob: “Time traveler.”
Jim: “Yup. Time traveler.”
Megyn: *eyes sparkling* “I’ve always dreamed of time travel . . .”
@rose-colored-fancy LOL, right? And it’s a lot of fun!
This one is what my life is like sometimes . . . very. confusing.
Megyn, when like 10
*studying a piece of music, nose crinkled in a cute frown*
Candy (age 9): “What ya working on??”
Megyn: *Absent-mindedly* This piece.
Candy: *puzzled* Piece of what?
Candy: “What’s a…[Read more]
Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.
Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!
It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]
@sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. 🙂
@esmeralda-gramilton Great job!
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