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For All Those Who Want to Help but Don’t Know How

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  • #142608
    Dakota
    @dakota

      Hey sister there a lot I could say
      Bottled up inside of me. A well over flowing, never empty
      But I can’t. It just seems like there’s no way
      Words are just too weak. My phrases fail to meet the need

      I’m burning with desire, all consumed with this fire
      Of wanting to do something to help
      I’m standing right here watching as you struggle
      And wishing there was something I could do
      What can you do?

      When the storms roll right back in
      When the battles begin again
      When it looks like you’re standing out all alone
      When it all collapses to dust
      When heroes fail your trust
      When agony cuts right through you to the bone
      What can you do?

      Hey brother, there’s a lot you’ve been through
      Broken time and time again, always fighting but can never win
      And I can’t know just how it feels to live
      Lonely, seemingly unseen and these struggles make you bleed

      I’m drowning in my tears, yet uncertain with many fears
      Of wanting not to make it all worse
      I’m standing right here watching as you struggle
      And wishing there was something I could do
      What can you do?

      When the storms roll right back in
      When the battles begin again
      When it looks like you’re standing out all alone
      When it all collapses to dust
      When heroes fail your trust
      When agony cuts right through you to the bone
      What can you do?

      I’ll take on the runaway train
      And if I could take away the pain I would
      Any of your enemies will find themselves withstood
      And if my blood, my death would save the day,
      I’d gladly give it away
      This is what I would do
      But what should I do?

      When the storms roll right back in
      When the battles begin again
      When it looks like you’re standing out all alone
      When it all collapses to dust
      When heroes fail your trust
      When agony cuts right through you to the bone
      What should I do?

      What does He say?
      What is His way?
      To weep with those who weep, rejoice when they rejoice
      Love is more than a feeling but a choice
      To bear all things,to believe all things and to hope all things
      And lay down it’s life

      No greater love
      No greater love
      Than laying down one’s life for his friends
      Until it comes to that end
      What I can do

      Is when the storms roll right back in
      When the battles begin again
      When it looks like you’re standing out all alone
      Pray and point you to the Rock, the Anchor, the Cornerstone
      When it all collapses to dust
      When heroes fail your trust
      When agony cuts right through you to the bone
      Pray and point you to the Light, the Way, the God who knows all your pain
      It’s what I’ll do

      These words aren’t stubble on the wind
      They’re drawn from deep within my heart
      And who knew that saying Only God Can would be so hard
      But for now that’s all I can do
      And pray for you
      I’ll be here waiting
      Praying, hoping, ready
      Willing to do anything I can
      And leave the rest in His hands

      When the storms roll right back in
      When the battles begin again
      When it looks like you’re standing out all alone
      When it all collapses to dust
      When heroes fail your trust
      When agony cuts right through you to the bone
      He’ll always be there! His word will light the way
      And by His grace I’ll be here to stay
      It’s what I will do.

       

      So . . . what do y’all think?

      Psalm 119:11
      Your word I have hidden in my heart,
      That I might not sin against You.

      #143276
      Sir Leeds
      @sir-leeds

        Hey @dakota , this is definitely uplifting in a worship music song lyrics kinda way. Is that what you’re aiming for?

        "We are far too easily pleased." - C. S. Lewis

        #143309
        Dakota
        @dakota

          @sir-leeds Well, it was meant to be lyrical. Most of what I write is meant to be song  . . . someday. But sometimes, like this one, it was just me processing what I wanted to say to someone but didn’t know how. A song that was meant to be sung to someone but probably never will be.

           

          So, in short, yes. Though I’m not really sure it would classify as a worship song.

          Psalm 119:11
          Your word I have hidden in my heart,
          That I might not sin against You.

          #143454
          Anne of Lothlorien
          @anne-of-lothlorien

            @dakota I can easily see this as a song because while I was reading it, I started fitting it to a tune in my head! Some poetry does that for me, where I can easily come up with a little tune in my head as I go along. I think it’s very open and honest, and it’ll make a great song. 🙂

            I'm short, I like words, and I love people.
            No, I didn't draw my profile pic.

            #143520
            Dakota
            @dakota

              @anne-of-lothlorien I do the same thing, though sometimes in reverse. Like a piece of instrumental music will inspire lyrics in my head.

              Psalm 119:11
              Your word I have hidden in my heart,
              That I might not sin against You.

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