@kate @wordsmith @taylorclogston @noahlitle

I’ve been workshopping my synopsis with a dedicated Facebook group and making some improvements. Below is what I gave them, with some small tweaks based on the feedback I got. The second synopsis is a complete retake based on the feedback I got. I’d love your opinion.

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A thousand years past, the…[Read more]

You could base the cast system on intersectionality where the sins of the fathers damn their sons to the lower casts and you’re guilty until proven innocent. 😏

@naiya-dyani Really? I’m not experiencing anything. Is it all over the site or just on certain pages?

@nuetrobolt Josiah has stated he thinks he knows what the problem is and will hopefully have it fixed in about an hour.

So I posted the blurb on Realm Makers. Verdict was it didn’t have a clear enough plot! (People also wanted a little stronger sense of the world it was set in.)

I’ve buckled down and tried a rewrite. What do you think?

@taylorclogston @hope-mcclellan @kayla-skywriter @cassandraia @snapper @sarah-inkdragon @noahlitle @literatureforthelight @wordsmi…[Read more]

I was actually putting my stock in that last one. 😏

Let me make sure it wasn’t just poor wording because I feel like the concept is on target. Do any of you like “ heroes are born to dream, but some dreams come to haunt them” ?

@taylorclogston @kayla-skywriter @r-m-archer @noahlitle @wordsmith