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sparrowhawke replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 days, 3 hours ago
Thank you @Dakota!
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Dakota replied to the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 days, 4 hours ago
@sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. 🙂
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sparrowhawke started the topic Poetry Critique Wanted in the forum Poets 5 days, 5 hours ago
Hi guys,
I just finished a mini collection of five poems inspired by The Scarlet Letter. I am submitting it to a young authors contest for my homeschool group, but the contest isn’t that intense or anything (as far as I know, only a few other people have signed up). Still, I would like to get some feedback on it. I mainly want to know if the…[Read more]
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Kylie S. Pierce replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 2 weeks, 5 days ago
That was really good! I enjoyed it a lot, and I say that you have a knack for writing poetry. The fact that it was based on something on LotR helped too. 🙂
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Thank you, Kylie! That means a lot! I actually got it published on Kingdom Pen last month: https://kingdompen.org/the-party-tree-a-poem/
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Kimmi replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Thank you Ms. @sam-m . <3
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Oops, forgot that I had written a poem for my book and posted it on my profile. Sorry!
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Hi! I’m glad that you like my poem! This is the first piece of poetry that I’ve written and posted (not including the one for a collaborative story I did) on here. And I’m really glad that my poem made you want to read The Wingfeather Saga even more, as it is my absolute fav book series (as you can probably tell from my username and q…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic Silent in the forum Poets 2 months ago
Your poem felt powerful. Also, tragic, important, and well-written. I especially found the repetition of the word silent to be strong and impactful.
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Kimmi started the topic Silent in the forum Poets 2 months ago
Silent
Silent, as the country crumbles.
Silent, to the pain all ‘round.
Silent. For one doesn’t know what to do.
Silent, to the fathers’ cry.
Silent, to the burning of right.
Silent, to the death of liberty.
Silent. For one doesn’t want to fight.
Silent, as hearts are hardened.
Silent, as tongues fly.
Silent, as the souls a…[Read more]
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Sam M replied to the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 2 months, 1 week ago
I like your poem. 🙂 I’ve heard of the Wingfeather Saga, but haven’t read the books yet. Your poem makes me want to read them even more!
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Kylie Wingfeather replied to the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 2 months, 2 weeks ago
That…
Was…
Beautiful.
Thank you for putting that up. Definitely made my day. Thank you!
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Kylie Wingfeather started the topic The Throne Warden in the forum Poets 2 months, 2 weeks ago
A Wingfeather Saga poem about Throne Wardens. Not that great at poetry, but I’m working on it.
The Throne Warden.
Courageous, loyal, true,
Protector of his siblings’ life and freedom,
Learner of the Word,
Keeper of not just pen, but also sword,
Hearer of the sea dragons song,
Warrior against Gnag’s wrong,
Artham with his wings,
Janner…[Read more]
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Kylie S. Pierce joined the group Poets 2 months, 2 weeks ago
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MyClipboardIsMyViolin replied to the topic The Party Tree in the forum Poets 2 months, 3 weeks ago
@jennythefaun Couldn’t tell the LoTR reference from reading it, and it would be fine anyway. I published a poem that was even more directly inspired by The Handmaid’s Tale a couple years back.
I really like the title, and great concept. My advice is to drop the rhymes. As one of my creative writing professors once said, the best poems don’t r…[Read more]
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Thanks for your advice, @myclipboardismyviolin!
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Kimmi replied to the topic Grief in the forum Poets 3 months, 2 weeks ago
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Sam M replied to the topic Grief in the forum Poets 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Great job on your poem, Kimmi! There was a lot of strong emotion in it. It felt very raw and real and true. Keep up the good work.
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