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Gracie replied to the topic Battle Cry in the forum Poets 2 days, 7 hours ago
Thanks Beth, 😊 .
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Battle Cry in the forum Poets 2 days, 9 hours ago
Hey, I love that!!
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Eitan replied to the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 2 days, 20 hours ago
Thank you two! (:
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Gracie replied to the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 4 days, 5 hours ago
That was beautiful Eitan.
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Gracie started the topic Battle Cry in the forum Poets 4 days, 7 hours ago
A poem I write today. @rusted-knight , because I’m interested in what you think. I’m sorry, if you didn’t want to be tagged… Let me know, and I won’t again. (:
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Battle Cry
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Flags being torn,
& flags going up.Red and blue,
lines drawn across
the field of brothers.Words of hate,
and words of pride. Pushing, shoving,
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Sam M replied to the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 5 days, 7 hours ago
@eitan I love this poem. 🙂 I specifically like, “O my Lord, heal my heart, and let your love be in me.” Thank you for sharing this!
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Eitan started the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 1 week, 1 day ago
Hi everyone!
I haven’t been around for a long time… High school and stuff 🙂 It’s a poem I wrote today. It’s a rewriting of something I wrote earlier today, while and after a really hard time. I hope it will encourage, help, or just make you smile 🙂
As always, I’m totally open to any kind of criticism, whether grammatical or artistic…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic A poem – Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets 4 weeks, 1 day ago
That was beautiful @eitan .
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Sam M replied to the topic A poem – Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets 4 weeks, 1 day ago
Hi, Eitan. I’m sorry that you had a hard day.
I think the line should be “how lonely and miserable I became” instead of “what…”
I always love your poetry. I love how much you focus on God’s love and goodness. Thanks for posting this! This poem was relatable. 🙂
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Anne of Lothlorien replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@eitan This was beautiful, thank you. I’m sorry you went through this time, but it’s beautiful that you have come out the other side of this with hope in your heart and new strength in Jesus.
From a grammatical standpoint, I spotted one line… “There are no cold and horror – I do not shiver” should be “There is no cold and horror – I do not…[Read more]
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Eitan started the topic A poem – Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets 4 weeks, 1 day ago
So, today was hard… But in the end, God gave me hope and rest. I’m even a little cheery as I write those lines 😉
This is the translation of the original Hebrew. I hope it’ll help, encourage or just make someone smile 🙂 Any critique, grammatical correction, or anything else is welcome.
Your love and Your faithfulness
You gave my heart…[Read more]
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Computer again…
I found this poem. (It has thee’s and thou’s) But has rymne and meter.
It is true.Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
Where JESUS answers prayer;
There humbly fall before his feet,
For none can perish there.
Thy promise is my only plea,
With this I venture nigh;
Thou callest burdened souls to thee,
And such, O LORD, a…[Read more]-
(The poem without thee’s and thou’s)
Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
Where JESUS answers prayer;
There humbly fall before his feet,
For none can perish there.
Your promise is my only plea,
With this I venture nigh;
You call burdened souls to You,
And such, O LORD, am I.
And such, O LORD, am I.Bowed down beneath a load of sin,
By Satan s…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 1 month ago
@sam-m Thank you!!
Oh, just a typing mistake… Like, I know how to write know 😉 *embarrassed, but thankful*.
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Sam M replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Hi, Eitan! I really like your poem. I love the hope and truth that you pour into your writing.
Also, (because you’re really serious about grammar), I think you meant: I can know this for sure.
I look forward to reading anything else you post. 🙂
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Gracie replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 1 month, 1 week ago
Beautiful Eitan! Truly. Thank you for sharing.
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There are no cold and horror – I do not shiver
I believe, (sense you asked), grammatically it should be ‘there is no cold and horror’.
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Thank you!! And thanks for the critique 🙂
Will edit if possible 🙂
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Good question. (I almost didn’t say anything because I don’t have any grammar rule I know to quote.) Then I mentioned it anyway… *wince* My brain, my /self/, why dost thou do this to thyself!!
Anyways…
Yes; it is plural.But ‘is’ /does/ go there. *Knowing I’m doing this horribly…I should ask my mother.*
It sounds wrong with ‘are’. I’ve nev…[Read more]
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(I hope this makes more sense to you, than it does to me…)
‘The subject is “there”.
“There is” is the subject and verb.
“cold and horror” is the direct object(s)’But, at least I know I’m not crazy…. in the complete oblivious sense of the word…
Post Script: It was ‘Tal’ who answered my question…not my mother. (:
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Eitan replied to the topic A Poem, I Guess in the forum Poets 1 month, 1 week ago
@inkspiller
Hmm. I read it now. I didn’t understand everything, but what I did – It’s amazing! Like, really. You really poured you heart to this… It’s full of sorrow, yet hope. True, He will never forsake us, no matter what, and how painful would be our fall. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
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Eitan started the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 1 month, 1 week ago
(Tagging other poets – Sorry if I bother you, won’t tag again):
@anne-the-noob14 @anne-of-lothlorien @the-inkspiller @kimlikesart @urwen-starial @emberynus-the-drgaonslayer @dakota(Sorry if I missed someone).
So, I went through a difficult time in the last few days, but God used it amazingly to teach me something, and to get rid from a lie I…[Read more]
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