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Gracie replied to the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 1 month ago
It was definitely worth the time. Thank you for sharing this. I think I am too scared to share my poems. After reading yours, and others’…It makes me want to be brave.
You are not alone in your doubts, your fears. We all have had trials and tears. You are strong, you are brave. You are called by name. He loves you. Don’t give up. I’ve been…[Read more]
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Gracie replied to the topic A Poem, I Guess in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Really good job. It was really good. It is amazing what God can say through poetry.
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Eitan replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
You asked me how am I doing. The general answer – I’m excellent! The detailed – well, yesterday I wrote this poem, after I’d had some hard hours, and in the end, God taught me a very important lesson.
By the way, your care and love are really touching. You showed me how Christians should care for their brethren. Thank you so…[Read more]
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Good job Eitan. (: It reminded me of David.
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I admire that you shared this. Generally, I’m too scared to share my poetry. My soul lifts at your desire to lift others, to show your love and doubts. It was beautiful.
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Thank you so much Gracie! I’m so glad God used it to encourage other believers.
Hmm, it’s likely that my poetry is inspired, consciously or not, from the book of Psalms. The poem contains a few clear references (Psalm 22:1, and Psalm 23:1), but maybe the whole style is inspired by the book. I don’t know, but it’s cool if it is! 🙂
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Eitan replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Thank you so much!!
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Evelyn replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
@eitan How beautiful. I only wish I could do it the justice of being about to read and comprehend it in it’s original language. 🙂
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Eitan replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Thank you so much!! I’m so glad God used it to encourage and help you 😀
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic A Poem, I Guess in the forum Poets 1 month ago
I just now saw this! I love the deep emotion filling it. The expression. You can feel the feelings you felt while writing it just from reading it.
Thank you for posting!
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Beautiful!!! I love it. This makes me wish even more that I could read Hebrew.
This is such a beautiful and meaningful piece. Thank you for posting it. It’s something we could all pray in our daily lives.
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Eitan replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Thank you! 😀
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
A very good poem! Even if I can’t translate it back to Hebrew and enjoy its meter/rhyme then, I love it with this more of a free-verse feel 😀
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Eitan replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
I’m so glad God used my words to encourage you! 😀
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Dakota replied to the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month ago
@eitan I’m so glad I found this. Thank you so much for posting this. 🙂
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Eitan started the topic Translated poem in the forum Poets 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I wrote this pretty long poem today while praying, and I felt like God is speaking through me (please don’t get me wrong, by no means claim my poem to be holy!). The original Hebrew poem was of course much better than the translation, with meter and rhyme. Anyway, I do think that God wants me to share it with others. If I encouraged even one of…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 1 month, 3 weeks ago
(Wow, I’m late to this thread…) This poem pretty muchly sums up how I’ve been feeling lately.
As everyone else has said, I have no negative critique. And I totally understand the “not 100% comfortable to share personal poems”… But I’m happy you felt strong enough to share it 🙂
Um… other than those couple thoughts, I don’t…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic A Poem, I Guess in the forum Poets 1 month, 3 weeks ago
Oooh, I really like this! Very nice! 😀 I don’t consider myself to be an expert on critiquing poems, but I see nothing amiss. (And I like the syntax as well 😛 ) Full of emotion and… *makes vague gestures at nothing in particular*… stuff. *nods*
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