I am part of Christianwriters.com, which is a great writing site with many options for both informal fellowship, and constructive critique etc. Please check it out–I would love to meet some of you on there!

@e-n-leonard

I’m so sorry I took so long! I completely understand if you’ve moved on and don’t want this anymore, but for the sake of promise-keeping I’m going to answer anyway. 🙂

So, this is more of a writing tip than a structuring tip, but make sure that you show the characters and theme developing instead of just showing it. I could see a…[Read more]

@lady-grace do you want to give me your email or shall I give you mine?

@E-n-leonard @lady-grace Joelle and I are already doing an email thread, I’d be happy if you joined! @e-n-leonard , please don’t feel obligated to join unless you want to. We’d be perfectly happy to have you, though!

And thank you all so much for your patience and participation. 😀

@everyone (I’ll tag you all later if you don’t see this),

Looks like Discord it is! I am not getting an account at present, but if I ever change my mind I will come knocking at your server door.🙂 Calidris and/or Ethan created a server, so however you join that, go ahead.

I am still planning on doing an email thread. If anyone wants to join that…[Read more]

@Calidris perfect! I had ideas of overlap, too, so I’m glad you mentioned it. 🙂

I’m subscribed! waiting for the 22nd!

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Okay, from now until 8pm Eastern Time (USA) November 19th, I’m having a poll as to where we want to hold the writing group: over email or on discord? If you don’t reply by then, I will assume that…[Read more]

On the choreography note, it may be helpful to physically go through the motions of your fight either by yourself or with a friend.

<p style=”text-align: left;”>The problem with fight scenes is that in real time they take so short, and take so many words/so much time to describe. So you lose your readers because all pacing is thrown to the winds in an effort to give them a clear picture.</p>
I try to keep the scene as short as possible. Try to make every word count. Don’t try…[Read more]

@noah-cochran we’d love to have you. No, no consensus on times. So far, not even a consensus on how we should proceed–via email or discord. I’ll be setting up a sort of poll soon so everyone can voice their opinions.