@kingdomfire7
Active 1 year, 11 months ago-
KingdomFire7 commented on the post, Make Promises, Not Traps: How to Write Honest and Engaging First Lines 3 years ago
Oh, wow! this is seriously genius! my opening line (which I don’t care for at all lol) shall have to be revised XD
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
You’re correct! I’ve been a bit hasty with my own assumptions XD and I apologize for that.
You really know the word, and that’s awesome! Like, very impressive! And yes, the truth doesn’t care about our feelings; but God does. God is the Truth, but He’s also love. He’s a good Daddy! If your kid thinks, say,…[Read more]
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 3 years, 9 months ago
This is what I will say: I think everybody, especially @obrian-of-the-surface-world , is sort of overreacting and reading too much maybe into each other’s statements.
I think Brian you’re really angry at all the horribleness in our world that you’re perhaps too quick to assume the worst in people? Also I don’t think it’s quite fair how…[Read more]
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic From Earth You Came (fantasy Short Story) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Thank you so much for the critique!
Ah, yes- good point. I’ve been guilty of abrupt resolutions before. XD In fact, in just about all my recent short stories. xP
So that was really good advice, thanks! God bless you! ;D
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic From Earth You Came (fantasy Short Story) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
yeah, sorry this thing is so darn long it’s not reasonable to ask anyone to read it 😂
God bless!
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic I’m so excited to be here in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Yes, hello! welcome welcome! I’m pretty new here too and it’s been really great! So much good writing advice all over the place!
If you want to chat, I’m up for it! XD (only thing is we’re going on a trip so totay’s prolly my last day on the computer for about a week :/)
God bless ye! ;D
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KingdomFire7 posted a new activity comment 3 years, 10 months ago
Okay, thanks! yeah, that’s what I thought. 😀
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KingdomFire7 started the topic From Earth You Came (fantasy Short Story) in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Okay, so I was writing a story for the contest and got some critiques and made some changes and I’m hoping to know whether they helped or hurt the story. XD
The story is called From Earth You Came (4255-ish words), but I’m considering changing it to Burnt Sky/Red Sky/The Sky Burns Red or something like that. If you’d like please tell me which one…[Read more]
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KingdomFire7 posted an update 3 years, 10 months ago
Soooo… I’m thinking of submitting a story to the contest, but I’m not sure if it’s quite good enough. Would it be okay to post it here for critiques?
( @daeus-lamb, @briannastorm [just tagged you bc I thought you would know the answers xPxD])
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Yes, you’re allowed to get feedback from other writers on our forum. 🙂
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Okay, thanks! yeah, that’s what I thought. 😀
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KingdomFire7 commented on the post, Yesterday’s Self 3 years, 10 months ago
Wow! that’s an incredible story! so powerful! Awesome job!
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
Okay, so I finally got around to making a recording. XD We’ll see how this goes.
Moniker: @KingdomFire7
Words: (1493); Minutes: (9:49)
Recording: Through the Eye of the Needle
Text:
I shot upright, sweat beading on my forehead. My heart smashed against my ribs so loudly I could hear it. I stared into the…
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KingdomFire7 posted a new activity comment 3 years, 10 months ago
You’re welcome!
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KingdomFire7 posted an update 3 years, 10 months ago
I just put some movies me and my brothers made on our website! http://quantumofthebear.wordpress.com/
( @noah-cochran you showed interest so I’ll tag you xPxD)-
Thanks for tagging me, I’ll check it out.
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You’re welcome!
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Hey, everybody! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
That’s cool! I use fifteen-beats structure, it works well for me, but I’m very much a plotter. I tend to start with a rough outline, break that down into chapters, and then before each chapter I write out everything like a script before actually drafting it. It’s a lot of extra work but it makes my drafting time a lot less, so it works out!<…
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Hey, everybody! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Where can I find information on that one? It’s far past time that I took part in a writing contest. xD
XD It’s on this website: Kingdom Writers Guild – Kingdom Writers Guild
The info on the summer contest won’t come out until the Spring one is completely over, but if you become a guild member (it’s free- all you have to do is be a Christian and l…[Read more] -
KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Hey, everybody! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Hi, @ragnarok ! Love your profile pic!
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Hey, everybody! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Are the contests about quality of writing or word count? I haven’t joined any official ones. Are there any that you would recommend?
Quality of writing, though they do (some of them) I think have wordcount limits. But it’s not like NaNoWriMo or anything.
Recommend? Um, the Kingdom Writers Guild has a flash fiction contest every season (the s…[Read more]
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
@sparrowhawk
Scene Questions
1. Is there anything that stood out to you as intriguing about this scene?
The whole mystery surrounding the Resolve was really cool! After reading @obrian-of-the-surface-world ‘s comments I also became intrigued about why Crin just allowed some of his resolve to be stolen…. very inter…[Read more]
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KingdomFire7 replied to the topic Depicting God in Fantasy in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 years, 10 months ago
(also very late to the party XD)
But yes, I just wanted to say that I LOVE your passion, man! Showing that deep, raw side of God in fantasy is something that hasn’t been shown very often, and I think it’s a good thing.
I’ve wanted to write/help write such stories myself, so this really resonates with me.
So my answer is: Write it, man! Trust…[Read more]
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KingdomFire7 joined the group Poets 3 years, 11 months ago
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