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Brian Stansell replied to the topic SE Forum Eulogy Project (anyone in?) in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 year ago
Hi @caledris,
I just wanted to let some of y’all (Texas slang for “you guys and gals”) that Kaytlin Philips has a pretty good monitored Forum type blog site at:
https://www.writers-vision.com/…if any of you want to try signing up there (yes, it’s free too).
They have writing games and contests, challenges, and writing topics too.
Spread the…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell commented on the post, How to Introduce a Large Cast of Characters without Confusing Readers 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you, Sarah! This is very helpful and something I struggle with. I am already doing some of these with my current WIP, but you have given me some more tactics to use too.
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Battle Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Battle Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Battle Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Battle Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Battle Scenes in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Hi Noah! @noah-cochran
There used to be a tradition of studying the masters when it comes to art. I think some of the same principles apply to studying authors who do fight scenes well.
One of the authors I think does this in a spectacular way is Louis L’Amour. [Yes, the western writer] What many do not know is that the man wrote many of his c…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Cleanfunny exclamations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 year, 11 months ago
Hi @jasmine , here are a few more…
Sour expression – She made a face that could pickle a cucumber.
Dim-witted – If brains were gunpowder, he wouldn’t have enough to blow his nose.
His ears are so close together, a single thought can barely pass through the narrow hallway between them.
Cold – She had the warmth of a snow pea.
His heart is so…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Cleanfunny exclamations? in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 year, 11 months ago
Hi Jasmine (@jasmine),
Oh, girl! This question is probably going to get me in so much trouble for my answers…but, here goes…
Insults:
Fool – That guy is two sandwiches shy of a picnic.
Ugly – She had a face that could curdle milk.
Smelly – That smells like the south end of a northbound mule.
Too Young – I have cheese older than he…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic For Those Who Don't Get It & Those Who Do in the forum Poetry Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Hi Tenshi, (@tenshichispa)
There can be a number of factors related to what may
Sometimes a poetic allusion can be obscure or not be as accessible from culture to culture. This may be related to limited exposure through education, or background. Some professors in colleges and universities may go off and do their own thing, or pluck out s…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Writing growth ruts and what to do about them in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 12 months ago
Hello there, Rose! (@rose-colored-fancy)
First off, I have a few questions that may seem unrelated, but I will tie them back in after asking.
What kinds of books have you been reading for fun, lately?
What kinds of books have you been reading for research (story related) lately?
What kinds of TV or movies have you been binging on lately, if…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 1 month ago
@calidris You are very welcome! 😁
Scripture illuminates scripture.
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 1 month ago
Hi @calidris,
I think too often we miss the central issue of what Peter was saying:
He is pointing to the importance of having a beautiful soul and not just superficial and showing dress and outward adornments.
Some people may be coiffed to the nines, have a sharply cut and tailored suit, golden cuff links, a $200 haircut, clean shaven, with…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 2 months ago
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
For any of you who have at least two small children, you know that when the two siblings get into a dispute each one tries to outrun the other to get to the parent first to deliver their version of the conflict before the other gets to weigh in.
They do this because the kids know that the first to tell their version too often becomes the lens of…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Hi, Noah (@kingdomfire7),
Many of you may think I am being hard on Lona. I figure she is tough enough to have a debate where she and I both have some passion without letting that debate sour into true animosity for one another. I have no such ill will toward Lona (@lonathecat), even though I may make her uncomfortable in my probing into her b…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Hi Noah (@noah-cochran),
I do compare versions regularly. Check out the online Blue Letter Bible which has a selector giving access to all versions including the Textus Receptus and KJV.
Each verse has a Bibles link that shows a linear comparison of verses in each of the prominent translations. There is also an Interlinear which is c…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Good morning Noah (@noah-cochran),
Here is the passage containing an example of a deaconess:
I commend to you our sister Phoebe, a deaconess of the church at Cen’chre-ae, that you may receive her in the Lord as befits the saints, and help her in whatever she may require from you, for she has been a helper of many and of myself as well. [Romans…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 2 years, 2 months ago
Lona (@lonathecat)
Here’s what makes me wonder about these things:
Typically one who considers themselves to be “woke” or a political “progressive” has a victim mentality worldview where they believe anyone who disagrees with them is “persecuting” them. This seems to be manifesting in you, so I wonder about the lens through which you view the…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Male characters question in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
Here’s the (More on that later)
I am probably about 30 years older than most of you guys and gals. I was born during the Vietnam war, back when the modern perversities had not taken as much hold on American culture, though there were the drug culture elements beginning the moral decline. Most of us still went to church and honored God’s day by…[Read more]
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