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  • K. A. Grey replied to the topic A Critique Request in the forum Poets 3 years, 11 months ago

    @e-n-leonard Hey there, fellow poet! Nice to meet you!

    This is beautiful!! Nice use of repetition.  My only critique might be to split it up into stanzas to make each “I am a …” stand out, and perhaps combine some lines instead of fragmenting it to make it easier to read.  But splitting up lines can also add more emphasis too, so it’s up to you.  I love the message!

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