@the-inkspiller
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Writing Sprint Group in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I like Discord, but I’m equally at home with email or collaborating over google docs
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Writing Sprint Group in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@emily-waldorf, Discord is a pretty useful platform. It’s much less like traditional social media and much more like a chatroom with options for everything from mass voice and video calls to screen sharing, even shared music bots (like a group jukebox), and the option to set up multiple channels in voice or text for specific kinds of discussions.…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Writing Sprint Group in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@ethan-leonard, @calidris, my handle is Fully Automatic Waffle Press#5356.
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Writing Sprint Group in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
@rose-colored-fancy, @calidris, @ethan-leonard
I wouldn’t mind being a part of this, although I’m writing this as I’m coming off an insane 12 hour shift at the hospital. I have a lot of free time when I am off though. And ye, I have Discord.
And my email if we do it that way is jdwong188@gmail.com
I have pigeon brain right now
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Morally Ambiguous Characters in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 4 months ago
As someone who writes almost exclusively morally gray characters, I feel obligated to comment. Not to defend the mainstream use of morally gray characters, who are mostly just buttholes who happen to be shooting at socially designated bad guys, but in defense of complex, flawed characters.
The truth is that most people, even Christians, are or…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller posted an update 2 years, 4 months ago
@deeprun
Hey Deep. I know it’s been a long time, and I don’t know if you’re still around on the forum. I treasured your friendship and your mind once, and I wouldn’t mind being friends again, if we can have that still. -
The Inkspiller replied to the topic A Poem, I Guess in the forum Poets 2 years, 4 months ago
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Depressing Poetry LOL in the forum Poetry Discussions 2 years, 4 months ago
Apologies for necroing this thread, but since it’s here, I too have a depressing poem to share.
Heart of Glass
I was born with a heart of glass
Which glitters in the morning
And magnifies my mourning
Bared to wind and woe and weald
Transparently I loved her
I stored up for her my love’s treasure amass’d
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
You’re very welcome! While this topic is normally about technical or clinical subjects you don’t want showing up in your search history, it’s absolutely expected that queries will branch off into tangents as knowledge is shared. If you have more questions about world-building, history, politics, psychology, whatever random questions you…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
@miller sorry I forgot to tag you in my reply
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
If you want an example of how to brainwash children and young adults, look no further than the Army. Not to speak negatively on the brave soldiers who volunteer to serve and protect, but hear me out. Your average middle class American Joe Schmoe is not that violent of a person, nor that mentally tough. Part of the reason casualties in disaster or…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Prose Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
It’s important to find your the right fit for your writing style! Not everything I say or give to you as advice is going to necessarily work with your vision, it’s simply my judgment based off the experience of what has worked for me for the stories I’ve tried to tell.
1. Semicolons
It’s true, I have been several times convicted…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Prose Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Part two! Here we go!
So I have to amend my previous statement on ‘and’ & ‘then’; the main case for using them together would be to add the sensation of a tangible pause in between the two conjoined actions. However, that can be achieved by other means, such as by a semi-colon or by additional description.
(A) The young woman’s mouth worked…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Prose Questions in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I may not be the foremost expert on prose, but I’ll take a gander at answering your questions and lending my own verbose expertise, whatever its meager worth might amount to. I by no means wish to hijack your style, but invariably my suggestions for rewrite / revision are probably going to very much reflect how I personally would…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 11 months ago
A random aside, horses love the taste of beer, as it essentially resembles pre-digested barley / wheat / hops, their preferred feedstock. Horses also have an extremely high alcohol tolerance, even accounting for their comparative size (3-8x the weight of an adult male human), as their gastrointestinal tract is specialized in digesting…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 11 months ago
@Erynne, No worries! If anything, writing about the negative effects alcohol had on my life is a healthy reminder of why I stopped drinking and why I don’t want to drink alone again or ever walk back into that position of dependency. I’ll still drink with friends, who can watch me and keep me from having too much, but I will never keep alcohol in…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 11 months ago
Pneumonia is a significant possibility due to aspirated water – that is, if he inhaled any water during the initial splash, or if he was under water long enough that he involuntarily gasped for air and inhaled water instead. Natural water isn’t purified and there isn’t really any telling what…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 11 months ago
Yes! Midwives have known for thousands of years “the kiss of life” to revive newborns who weren’t breathing well on birth. While some overly academic physicians might have “interesting” ideas about resuscitation (such as covering the body in hot coals or pouring hot tea down the throat), your average barber surgeon / village healer…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 11 months ago
@erynne Howdy! Nice of ya to stop by.
So, it’s been a while since I drank – I quit a couple months ago, as alcohol was just making me depressed, less productive, and draining my wallet – I had stopped drinking for fun, and had by that point just been drinking as a crutch for mental pain. But that’s its own story.
I cannot say I’ve been black out…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Research of less-than-desirable topics (wounds, wound complications, etc.) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 11 months ago
So, you’re probably aware of this, being stabbed in the back is not healthy. The torso in general doesn’t have a lot of “good” places where the injury would not be too severe or long lasting. It may be counter intuitive, but the best place would be on the victim’s right side and upper back, piercing the lung. Particularly since you…[Read more]
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