So Julian is one of Ellie’s best friends. (one of three, but he’s my favorite out of all of them, mainly because he and I have a similar personality) We’ll both control him like he’s one of our characters. Here’s a quick description of him:

He’s very sarcastic, but also very smart and loyal.

He’s about the size of an 8 year old even though he’s…[Read more]

(Mmm… Ok, have an idea. I’m keeping it a surprise for you to find out later though 😝)

The rider got closer, there was no time react. He or she rode up to their shelter and jumped of the horse which was covered with metal armor. The rider was also in a metal suit, and had something over his face which made it almost impossible to tell anything…[Read more]

Anddd I forgot to tag you again *facepalm*

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Wow, I’m pretty sure you helped me more than I helped you…oops XD

That is a pretty good one!

You’ve got internal thoughts of the MC. You’ve set up a degree of loss, feelings of failure, disappointment, contrition, and an odd juxtaposition of her mother and sister as spectators in her prospective torture and death.  You’ve introduced tensio…

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(for real, should it be a good guy or bad guy? lol)

“ugh, what do we do? he or she will be here in just a moment. my only idea is to hide and that probably won’t work.”

(if you’re wondering, if it is a bad guy they will just hide if not they’ll have an ally so you decide)

@rose-colored-fancy

Thank you! I will have to try that.

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thank you for your help! I might do my fantasy but a ton of people have asked me about me new suspense novel I’m working on so I may do that. I also responded to your thread about opening lines for suspense/thrillers, but I forgot to tag you so idk if you got…[Read more]

“Dang… I didn’t think of that. What do we do if it is? There’s no time to do anything, he’s on his way over. This is all my fault!” she rambled on in her proper tone while pacing back and forth and twirling the end of her side braid between her fingers.

@rose-colored-fancy

Woahhh you’re accent is so pretty!!! I LOVE it!!!

I’m not sure if I’ll do this or not, but what app did you end up using?

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

I know this is in fantasy, but does it actually have to be from a fantasy WIP? (and sorry if you’ve already been over this) I’m not sure if I’ll be able to do this (I need…[Read more]

Hello Brain! Thanks for tagging me! Sorry about the delayed response though, I’ve been busy with work work and work here at home…

Anyway, I am still in the process of plotting out my suspense novel, but I have had this opening line thought out for months. I haven’t told it to anyone so it might be absolutely awful on paper rather than in my…[Read more]

“Interesting choice of words…” The rider looked to be searching for what direction the arrow came from, but it was hard to be sure with the distance and rain between them. “Hey, over here!” the rider for sure heard her because he was now heading in this direction. “How is he not being hurt by the rain?” she asked Kallun.

She opened her eyes to see that the rider had stopped. “Luck must be with me today. I don’t know how I did that.”

Yeah for sure. Do you want to pick up where we left off? I never got anything saying that you had responded to my last post of the rp

Yeahhh multiple of mine did and I saw several other that were there before but aren’t now. I hope they got the problem fixed so it doesn’t happen again.

Hmm…. I checked my emails a few times but I don’t see anything. This has been a little aggravating