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    Emberynus The Dragonslayer
    @emberynus-the-dragonslayer

    @dakota @esmeralda-gramilton @mayacat @trallion @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter

    Hi Peoples!

    I started this thread to post some of my depressing poetry that i like to write. Typically it is lyrical poetry. It’s not very good so you will have plenty to call out a critique. If anyone else has any depressing poetry to post you are welcome to join me in this thread. I’ll post a short one to kick things off. It’s horrible I know but hey! I never claimed to be a good poet. LOL!

     

    Last Chance

    Give me one last

    Give me one last chance

    I need a little more time tonight

    To prove myself to you

    I need more time to fight

    I know I failed you last time

    But I promise you I won’t this time

     

    Give me one last

    Give me one last chance

    I need a little more of you trust

    To prove my love to you

    Before I turn to dust

    I know I am a dirty wreck

    But I promise I will do better this time

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    If you have any questions or suggestions, feel free to comment.

     

     

    Sold souls and dead promises

    #123809
    Urwen Starial
    @urwen-starial

      @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat @esmeralda-gramilton @dakota @naiya-dyani @kayla-skywriter

      I have a short excerpt from a song I wrote around October. Hope you enjoy.

      I feel like there’s too much space,

      Not enough love, not enough grace,

      To help me rise from my broken down state.

      I’m tired of living, the same old stuff every day,

      But I’m afraid to die, so I struggle on anyway,

      No one ever seems to hear me when I say,

      There’s too much happening around me,

      And I’m feeling lonely,

      Are my friends here for me,

      Or will they leave me?

       

      I’m not okay, but I cover it up like a mistake.

      All this love of ours does is take,

      My face is a mask, and no one knows,

      That my mind is in a different place.

      I’m afraid of dying,

      But if it all faded away, that would be fine.

       

      “Tears sparkle like fallen stars, the world at our fingertips, We didn’t know, It wasn't happiness.

      #123810
      Emberynus The Dragonslayer
      @emberynus-the-dragonslayer

      @urwen-starial

      Good job! I like it!

      Sold souls and dead promises

      #123820
      Dakota
      @dakota

      @emberynus-the-dragonslayer

      Thanks for the tag!! If I come up with something depressing, I’ll chime in.

      Psalm 119:11
      Your word I have hidden in my heart,
      That I might not sin against You.

      #123836
      Emberynus The Dragonslayer
      @emberynus-the-dragonslayer

      @dakota

      cool

       

      Sold souls and dead promises

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