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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 2 months ago
@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h@anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior
Here it is. Finally. The end of the matter. Basically Part 3 revised. I included the entire “short story” here. Enjoy!
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The tall buildings faded into a snapshot-perfect background, and her line of sight snapped into place. Her finger pressed gently against…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 5 months ago
@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h@ anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior
Finally…! Part 4 (end of Part 3 included for a little refresher 😉) Hoping to wrap this one up soonish. We’ll see. There’s potential for a longer version someday, but probably not what I’ll be focusing on. I just want to give this a satisfying finish. The next…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h @anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior
Next part! Enjoy!
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Thud, thud, whack. The heavy bag spun away from her and she wiped the sweat off her forehead with the back of her hand. She bounced on her toes and continued. Jab, cross, squat. Breathe, release, repeat. Kick, punch, kick, punch. T…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@melodyjoy Right now it’s a short story, but it could turn into something longer. We’ll see! I’m getting more excited about it as I work on it more!
@claire-h I’m curious about her backstory too… 😁
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h@anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior
Let me know what you think. Still don’t know exactly how this is gonna end. 😏 Next scene is under construction and will be up soonish. Maybe by tomorrow but I’m working so it might be Monday.
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Her doorbell rang and Liz jumped. Calm down! she scolded h…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@anne_the_noob14 I have no knowledge about beekeeping, lol! Notice I don’t explain anything about what she needs to do… 😆 I just wanted to include details about her “normal” life. Though, I have no idea if she could actually do legit beekeeping with a travel itinerary… do you have to take care of them every day, or can you kinda leave them t…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@sam-m @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @melodyjoy @claire-h @anne_the_noob14 @joshuapior
Sam, you just go right ahead and write your story. Don’t worry about where I take mine!! 😉 That being said, here’s the next part. There’s some clarity about theme and purpose now, but it’s still more of an as-I-go project. ☺️
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Liz stared at h…[Read more]
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Vic posted a new activity comment 3 years, 6 months ago
@theswordinthebook This is all so far! I have a few ideas for where it could go, but nothing is settled yet.
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Vic replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
@claire-h Great suggestions! Thank you! I’m also a violinist, so that’s where that comes from…. 😉
@anne_the_noob14 I hadn’t thought about Judy as being pivotal, but I like that idea. Thanks so much!
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Vic started the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
Hello!
I haven’t been on SE for quite awhile, but after taking a creative writing class this past semester I thought I’d jump in again.
Soooo, this was a random scene knocking around in my mind that I couldn’t get rid of and I thought I’d post and see if y’all had any suggestions for it, or for where it could go because literally this is all…[Read more]
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Oh. My Goodness. I love this!! I love thrillers, (my favorite genre), so this is up my alley! How much have you written so far? I would love to read more!
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@theswordinthebook This is all so far! I have a few ideas for where it could go, but nothing is settled yet.
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Vic joined the group Fantasy Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
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Vic joined the group Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 years, 6 months ago
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Vic's profile was updated 3 years, 6 months ago
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Vic replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice thanks for the welcome!
Yes, getting a Master’s is a lot of work, but I am really enjoying it. Lots of research, lots of persuasive writing. 🙂
The Scarlet Pimpernel is like a French-Revolution-era Zorro, really the first to introduce a “masked hero.” In England he poses as a spoiled rich kid but goes across the…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 3 years, 10 months ago
I don’t really know who to tag on this.
I haven’t read everything on this topic, but what I have read is really good. Thought I’d share one of my poems and get feedback from you all, what you like and don’t like! This one’s called “Amazing Grace”
Three crosses stood on a hill far away
For there was a price to pay
Two men were hung on either…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
@wolverinerm @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @kari-karast
Thanks for the welcome. I’m in a hefty class right now so I’m not able to keep up with this as much as I’d like.
I don’t read fiction as much as I used to or should, just because I’m normally reading some ginormous systematic theology book…. My favorite fiction books change with every one I…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Hello, @dakota! Thanks! I’d love to read some of your poetry and show you some of mine. I’m sure there’s a place for sharing that, but I haven’t had a chance to really explore the forum or how to use it yet! 🙂
Hi @abigail-rebekah! I taught myself a few guitar chords and I used to take piano lessons. Piano wasn’t my thing so when I got to colleg…[Read more]
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Vic replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
@joshuapior, hi! This is my first! 😬😳 I’m really excited though. It’s been my dream since middle school, so actually taking steps to making it a reality is really thrilling.
Yes, I absolutely love middle schoolers’ questions and genuine desire for truth.
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Vic replied to the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey, @caseybold! Thanks for the welcome! Yes, violin is beautiful…once you get the hang of it. Beginners don’t always sound that great! 😉😁
My story is one I’ve been rolling around in my head for a few years so I probably have too many character at this point. It started as a character-building skit for Sunday school kids. The basic premise is…[Read more]
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Vic started the topic Hello! I'm new… 🙂 in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 years, 10 months ago
Hey! I’m Victoria; my friends usually end up calling me Vic. I’m an introvert unless I’m talking about my imaginary world with people who seem interested in knowing about it. I am a Bible college graduate and I’m currently working on my Master’s in Bible. I play and teach violin on the side, and I love to act. I’ve written poetry for the past few…[Read more]
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