@jared-williams That’s totally fine. I was having trouble stepping into Avin’s character and my ( erroneous) post helped, so that was cool. And your last post was totally cool, so don’t worry. 🙂

@noah-cochran @hannahrenner

I knew I kept you around for some reason! 😉✌️

As Camirvablahblah said! Moneymoneymoney *gremlin ominous grumblings* moneymoneymoney…

Yeps!

That was awesome! 😂

They were gone. All gone, finally. Jade was torn between dropping to the floor in uncharacteristic hysterics or… “Well, Castle, what next?” she asked.

Rosemary laughed at her sour expression. Nothing ever threw Rosemary. Not even the eccentric group around them. Jade had seen moderately dyed hair before, but never…[Read more]

@hannahrenner

And I have another doc that’s 34,000 words… but some of those are rewritten scenes back to back. Does that count?

Nice. So do you write chronologically (starting in chapter 1 and ending at last chapter)?

BTW I’m still pulling together an outline for Lost City of Dragons, if you want to critique it, you can give me your email addre…

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then Avin saved me by using an elixir (either mine or you borrowed Enydd’s) and I then went to save Ku….

@emily-waldorf

ooh… should have been more clear. (pouty sad face.) my bad. Yeah, I save you two in my post when you dove into the water, cause the bugs would have swarmed above you (so my rationale went) and you could only hold your breath so long, so I swallowed you up by transforming into a massive, huge worm, then broke a hole in the wall…[Read more]

Oh boy, there’s a lot to go over here. Let’s dive in, shall we?

If you want a character to lose a lot of blood, not die, and have a decent chance for survival, go for gut/stomach wounds. That area will bleed a lot but not enough for someone to bleed out (usually.) If you want them to be shot several times, you can go with either upper arm or…[Read more]

Hello!  I have a few questions regarding gunshot wounds

I have a character who’s going to be gunned down in an act of revenge, and I’m trying to balance that fine line between drama and realism.

For a little bit of context, this is set in a fictional Cold War setting, so medical technology, ambulances, telephones, etc. are all present.  This c…[Read more]

@rose-colored-fancy no I got confused. I didn’t realize that Jared had brought Avin and Enydd to where the others were.

@jared-williams

ah. sorry, rose-colored-fancy, didn’t see your post till after I posted mine.

Don’t worry, same here 🙂 I like your idea better though! We can go with that one, I didn’t have anything planned beyond “Get the characters moving again”

ah. sorry, @rose-colored-fancy, didn’t see your post till after I posted mine.

but for those new on here, here is a photo of Abirami without his robe on, and below that is Ku’Aya. Both are generic but close renditions of what they look like.

Whoa… hang on I think I got confused XD Enydd, Avin, and Abirami are already with the others, Just ignore that bit XD

oomph…. yeah. Lol. Abirami saved you guys. lol… so, my post, I was shooting ice at the bugs to keep them at bay, then I transformed into a large worm, swallowed you guys up in the water and then transported you safely into the room everyone else was and spat you out, froze the hole I had made in the wall closed so the insects couldn’t get…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Ophelia

“No problem! I can change my dreams!!” The boy blurted. He had a sheepish, awkward grin.

He tilted his head like an inquisitive bird and added,

“Well…I can change where I go in dreams like when dreams have like this plotted out path you’re supposed to go but I can go anywhere I want!! But if I try to change to…[Read more]

@emily-waldorf

Haha, thanks!! He’s one of my favorite POVs to write he’s just so adorable!

I’m hoping to start writing his comic sometime soon this year, I have a newsletter for it but I am not a reliable updater XDDD

@this-is-not-an-alien I love Ehud. He’s so awkward and lovable and dwaa!

*ginormous grin* Grosssss!

I’ll take ten!!!

“Ooh, I do!” A perky voice replied. “I don’t even understand it the second time but sometimes I know what’s coming!”

She said. She looked like a girl who had just stumbled out of an anime academy. Ehud instantly felt a connection, they were the same brand of weird, it was stunning and epic! After…[Read more]

“You remind me of someone I used to know…” Someone spoke, not loudly, but not in a whisper. “Nathair, at your service.”

Nithel glanced over his shoulder, brows quirked. Is he speaking to me? ‘Snake’ or ‘Serpent’ was looking at Nithel; Nithel wondered about the parents, that would name their child such. Nithel nodded to him, slowly. “Nithel,…[Read more]