@kristianne-hassman Yeah okay good idea!

It’s my friend’s name lol! I have all my friends except one in there!

@eitan Oh just really saw your profile pic!! Awesome!

@beth20

Ohh ok. It doesn’t really sound like a first name to me. Is there a reason you have it as his first name?

And yeah, maybe you should write something more about McCain before the third chapter. I don’t think you need a prologue, but you could maybe introduce him in the first chapter (maybe he comes to visit or stops by for something).

@eitan

Okay!

Yeah, I just added ‘Darlene’ after Beth! It’s my middle name!

@beth20

Prologues exist to deliver necessary information you can’t deliver in the first chapter(s?), and also have to include another ”hook”, besides the one of the first chapter, so think carefully if you need to write one. Not every story have to include a prologue 😉

PS: Did you change your username?

@kristianne-hassman

I should write a prologue!!! Another prologue!

That’s his first name lol!

@melodyjoy

Hi Mel!  The more the merrier!

Yeah, um, let’s see where we’re at…

Ok, so basically what you need to do to catch up is to create and develop one or two characters (boy or girl, doesn’t matter) and the countries inside their planet.

For example, my character lives in Athenas on the planet Satirna.  (We’re playing off real n…[Read more]

Hey, haven’t been on story embers for a while. Could I still jump in to this AWESOME topic?

Please, if I can join, catch me up on the status of the story so far. Thanks!

MELODY

P.S. It’ll still be another week and a half before I can really start thinking about this in depth. I am out of town. Thanks!

@writergirl101 @winter_rose (love your…[Read more]

@writergirl101

😀 Cool, thanks! I’ll check it out!

XD Will do lol

@anne_the_noob14

Yeah, definitely!  Suggestions are great! 👍

I don’t think any of us are gonna be super involved, because me and Gracie are doing Camp NaNo for the month of July and @winter_rose is pretty busy, too.

But feel free to post anything that comes to mind!

@anne_the_noob14

Hey!  Well, RollForFantasy on fantasynamegenerators.com is the only website I’ve used, but I like it.  It might be a little challenging at first, but I think you’ll get the hang of it.  Here’s the link:

https://rollforfantasy.com/tools/map-creator.php

As for drawing, I’m not the best either, so… stick with the website! 😂

Isaac nodded his head. The places were not from Earth. His theory was confirmed. But other matters took precedent.
“Walk and talk.” he said as he started for the far entrance. “I’m Franz Fenrir. I don’t have a real home so all of Europe is, sort of.”
“What’s the rush?”
Isaac didn’t take the time to look back.
“That explosion was heard throughout…[Read more]

Teagen’s gaze had narrowed on the man with the sword, the second he’d entered. He spoke in a strange language that apparently the gun-blaster-man knew. Well, okay…

The man in the trench-coat nodded.

“What did he say?” Teagen looked to him, trying to make his voice sound a bit respectful and not too hard.

“He wants us to share our names and…[Read more]

@arindown @writergirl101 @winter_rose

Y’ALL. This sounds AWESOME!! 😀

…unfortunately, I’m trying not to get involved in anything right now XD Cause I’ve got more stuff to do at the moment than you can shake a stick at 😛 But I’ll be stalking this and possibly giving suggestions and input, if that’s ok XD

Ok… Let’s see…

_____

Dharin was still recovering from the sudden shock to his eardrums when he saw Franz toss an odd object to the man, calling it something in a strange language, it seemed.

“What’s that?” asked Dharin, rubbing one ear.

Franz looked at him briefly. “A gun.”

Dharin tried to remember if he had ever heard of anything called…[Read more]

Yikes XD Sorry! I kinda disappeared for a while lol. I’m just gonna kinda pick up at the explosion and see where it goes…

(gonna be quick)

(actually I gotta go lol but I’m leaving this tab open on my computer so I’ll see it later)