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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 36 minutes ago
Well snap XD I did the same thing as @rusted-knight did lol. I didn’t see the latest post. Let’s see…
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The lad shook his head. “Oh, no, you didn’t wake me up. And please —please, stand. Save your bows for the One True King.” Dharin stood, a bit confused, as the boy went on: “My name is Luke, anyways. Prince Luke.” He stopped, lo…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 45 minutes ago
@everyone
Here’s a slightly different version of my earlier bit, since Dharin doesn’t totally understand the French spoken by Isaac:
(Italiacs meaning he’s either thinking or speaking in a language besides English [that they call the Common tongue])
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Dharin glanced down at Jaylin as the boy asked, “Hey, you want to explore what’s beh…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle posted a new activity comment 56 minutes ago
Aaaa got it. I shall modify Dharin’s response, then.
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 hours, 35 minutes ago
M’kay, here’s a quick little bit! Hopefully I kept y’all’s guys in character XD
@rusted-knight By the way, what does Isaac mean by “feint French”?
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Dharin glanced down at Jaylin as the boy asked, “Hey, you want to explore what’s behind some of these doors?”
He smiled, and was about to reply when a man stepped…[Read more]
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Isaac is speaking in French assuming the others are Europeans
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Aaaa got it. I shall modify Dharin’s response, then.
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 day, 8 hours ago
I totally understand! Thank you for joining, even if it wasn’t for long!! And may you have lots of motivation and time to do everything you need to do 😉
@tal 😀 Glad I’m not the only one! And I don’t forget my MCs… but King whats-his-face is one who I kinda just mentioned in passing in my book so it’s not like he’s terribly…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 1 hour ago
I’m pasting in Dharin’s description and a couple quotes from my book here so if any of the newcomers don’t wanna go back digging to find it, they don’t have to 😛
Dharin:
Tall and handsome. Wavy brownish-red hair that he keeps shoulder-length. Facial hair of the same color, but he’s clean-shaven most of the time. Green eyes, probably has some s…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 1 hour ago
Oh. Wow. Ok so I love that?? Just the whole feel of it and how observant Isaac is.
I like Luke! And his kingly clothes will certainly make Dharin confused lol. He’s gonna think Luke is King [*cue me forgetting my own character’s name*]’s son XD
It seems that Dharin is up to reply… However, I’m about to be in a video call…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Help! My POV character hates the world! in the forum Characters 2 days, 2 hours ago
Thanks for tagging me! I have only one suggestion, and this is something that I think would work for myself, personally, so it might not work for anyone else, BUT! Give her some aspect of yourself that you like in yourself. So for example, I like the fact that I’m very hard to insult. I just don’t take offense to much. So I might give my…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle posted a new activity comment 2 days, 2 hours ago
Ahh, I see! Cool. *nodnod*
XD You’re good! I tend to info dump, myself, lol -
Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 2 days, 2 hours ago
You’re welcome! 😀
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Livi Ryddle posted a new activity comment 2 days, 13 hours ago
Halloa! Welcome to SE! I’m Livi, and I write fantasy, a bit of sci-fi, and some poems 🙂 I also enjoy playing the violin, mandolin, and piano. (Just as a small introduction 😀 )
Ooh!! Your novel sounds awesome!! I love the idea of the different quadrants with the different views. Glass half empty, glass half full, glass of water. Nice. 😀 And the…[Read more]-
@anne_the_noob14
Thank you Livi! Yes, good questions. I already know some of the answers to them about the book (Great questions and thank you for asking them!).The scientist, he’s not looking for world domination. He was rejected in his scientific community when he published his ideas and set out to prove them. He is bitter inside because of…[Read more]
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Ahh, I see! Cool. *nodnod*
XD You’re good! I tend to info dump, myself, lol
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 14 hours ago
@tal Welcome! 😀
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 14 hours ago
@beth20 Yes!!
Oh wow! Just now read your forum signature after Beth commented on it. I love it too!!
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Where do I go from here? in the forum Mystery/Suspense/Thriller Writers 3 days, 6 hours ago
OOOooooooo ok so I really love this?? That was really good!! 😀 😀
As far as suggestions go, I agree with what Claire already said about the different questions you could ask yourself. And reading through it again, Judy hit me as someone who could be pivotal, if you wanted her to be. She seems like she could know things. 🙂
Great job!! 😀
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 days, 6 hours ago
There we go!
@claire-h @kristianne-hassman @beth-20 @ariella-newheart @everyoneelse
We’re all good again, y’all! 😀
I’ll try to write something soon…
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 days, 6 hours ago
Maybe it doesn’t like the link?
Let’s try again…
Ooo, Isaac sounds interesting! And I love his introduction!
Um, about Dharin’s hilt… Of a rather Italian style like this, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/File:Rapiere-Negative0-19-19(1).jpg , but not the same, since his world doesn’t follow our styles exactly, and his was…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 days, 6 hours ago
Ok so that worked. Hm…
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 days, 6 hours ago
Ok so it’s not showing that I’ve posted?? I’ve tried twice now. This is a test run post I guess.
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Livi Ryddle started the topic Sci-fi novella: How to write? in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 days, 10 hours ago
K, so I have this idea for a sci-fi piece that I’m thinking is gonna be a novella. Thing is, there’s quite a lot of stuff that the readers need to understand before the story makes sense. Before the story really even “starts”. Cause it’s sci-fi. And I’m a little unsure how to go about giving the readers the info they need without info-dumping, ya…[Read more]
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Livi Ryddle replied to the topic Whats the title of your book and explain it in 3 sentances @Everyone in the forum Sci-fi Writers 5 days, 10 hours ago
@katthewriter @everyoneelse
M’kay, so this is a WIP that isn’t even on paper/computer yet except for the basic outline, but it’s sci-fi, SO!
Title: Don’t have one yet lol. There’s lots of things it could be, so I’ll have to decide later on after I get the plot more developed.
Premise: Um, basically, people have been Pavloved to not feel emotion…[Read more]
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