@rusted-knight @christlover

In my book someone gains Teagen’s trust, and eventual love (as one should a brother mind). But at this moment I have little idea how this could/would happen. Would you mind, terribly, trying to get Teagen to, I don’t know, to like/trust/care about one of your character’s fate…?

Not for any of our character’s gain…[Read more]

@christlover

1. If he feels that Vrahe is dangerous, would he take preemptive action to remove Vrahe from the scene.

No. He would remove himself from Vrahe. That, or depending on the situation, get close as possible to Vrahe…letting the man think he trusted him and was loyal.

Teagen can be a good acter when he wants to. Though flashes of…[Read more]

Questions for @christlover upon his return.

1. What color is Vrahe’s hair at the moment? I assume black (since he’s not on a job) but would like to make sure.

2. Does he say philosophical things? Like ‘Everyone is a murderer in their own way.’? Because, uh, he sort of did…

3. You said he was a good leader…What about a team player?

4. How…[Read more]

Teagen blinked a few times, then nodded with a closed lipped smile, “Cool…What’s an Ermordung?”

“It means murder.” Franz’s voice was stern, face taut.

Teagen’s eyes widened a bit, lowering his chin he looked Ermordung over, Okay… A chuckle died in Teagen’s chest, and his smile, though perplexed and wary now, stayed in tact.

What to do? What…[Read more]

@kylie-wingfeather

Irish Dancing! Yes!! So fun! (:

@rusted-knight

I’m sorry about your chest. I will be praying for it to go well. Can you tag me after it’s over?

I’m glad you’ll still get to join the Marines some day.

@wingiby-iggiby

Ancient Roman surgeons were trained to block out the screams of human pain.

Was surprisingly helpful. Thanks.

@rusted-knight

I just posted on the ‘Chronicle’. (:

But that was short-lived as Franz turned to face the demon. Teagen stepped over a carcass, forehead wrinkling, then several more until he stood behind Franz’s right shoulder. Waiting, hand still clutching his weapon.

As the stranger’s gaze glanced over Teagen, the twenty-five-year-old’s ire went up. The short calm vanished without a trace and a…[Read more]

@christlover

You’re good. Teagen did seem a bit too bold in his speech, but I can go with it. (I mean, he just had his second life or death situation) almost anything wouldn’t be that much of a stretch.

Oh, and if Teagen could speak he would thank you for the compliment (though uncomfortable with the thanks, and likely whispering. ‘Courage’ wow.…[Read more]

@zee

Yes, I’d love to help!

 The more eyes, the better!

Indeed mam.

I will do the same for you.

“you could give as much or as little critique as you felt in the mood for”

Thank you for offering to read my book.