@a_nna

Great question!

I wrote a lot as a kid. Tons of random stories. I never got very far with them. Sometimes not even a chapter. I love going through my notebooks (I HAVE TONS!!!) and reading all my “beginnings” of stories… haha

Here’s a couple of titles (or not haha) with small explanations:

The Secret Cave and the Magic Stone: LOL. I…[Read more]

Hey, haven’t been on story embers for a while. Could I still jump in to this AWESOME topic?

Please, if I can join, catch me up on the status of the story so far. Thanks!

MELODY

P.S. It’ll still be another week and a half before I can really start thinking about this in depth. I am out of town. Thanks!

@writergirl101 @winter_rose (love your…[Read more]

@devastate-lasting

Yup!

Thanks!

MEL

@devastate-lasting

Well, I usually write in first person and still use thoughts. I had this big long thing in my brain about like since I am writing in past tense and the thought is present. idk haha it was random

@beth20

It didn’t italicize the wreck sentence (lol) because I copied and pasted from my document and italics never transfer. I must…[Read more]

@beth20 @devastate-lasting @arindown @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @eden-anderson @emma-starr @wolverinerm @chalice

Everybody!

I’ve finished the first half of chapter 1 of my story. I’ll post it as another topic and tag ya’lls in it.

Please, comment and give tips. I wanna make sure it sounds good before I get to far into the writing. (I’m sure y…[Read more]

@arindown

Hello!

So, I’m still working on some details but after the car accident (and before too) she is kinda like one of those people who acts like God isn’t really there but she’s a Christian. You probably know what I mean. I’m going to make her really “fight” against God for a while after the car accident, then finally “turn” to Him when…[Read more]

@beth20

Hello!

I can definitely see the improvement on this chapter in comparison to the last one! Great job!

Kinda to copy what everyone else said (LOL LOL), lovin’ the suspense!

Hey, have you posted the 3rd chapter yet. No rush, I asked that mainly because I wanna make sure I didn’t miss anything 🙂

MEL

@beth20

Thanks!

@beth20

Hey! Great Job with your story!

I only had one comment (except for the fact that it’s amazing :))  :

I feel like sometimes when you put something in parentheses, it doesn’t need to be in parentheses… I hope you know what I mean. Sometimes commas would have been better in the particular spot.

Thanks!

MEL

@devastate-lasting

🙂 Thanks so much!

Yeah, I love guinea pigs! I used to have 2 of them (not anymore, sad…)

MEL

OK, so here is the basic “gist” of my story 🙂 :

Chloe Loran worked at a daycare till a horrific car accident seriously injured her. Struggling with depression, guilt, and many serious physical issues, she must turn to God for help with her relationships and her physical and emotional needs. 

I’ll try to post some of the story asap 🙂

Thanks!

MELODY

@eden-anderson

Hey! Thanks for starting this topic! Super awesome! 🙂 (And it really got me thinking)

Your story sounds so intriguing. And sad. I can definitely tell that it’s going to be very well written :).

@wolverinerm

It eats my posts like ALL the time so I have gotten into the habit of copying what I have written so that just in case it…[Read more]