Andrew Schmidt

Delton narrowed his eyes, studying the girl. “Oh…”

@his-bard, okay, thanks. 🙂

My sister Hope Ann is an INTJ; and possible one of my brothers, though they all say he’s an extrovert; he could possible be an extrovert though, but for some reason he seems more like an extroverted introvert. I’m not sure. Anyways, yes, INTJs are one of the rarest types… and I’ll do my best to avoid stereotypes. I…[Read more]

Julius slammed his sword into the bear’s hind leg. It roared, flinging him across the floor with a strike of its giant paws. He crashed against surface; then staggered to his feet.

“Well, don’t just stand there!” Julius shouted. “Delton, the door to your left! You guys escape there!”

“Well, I guess I can sorta just hold it together,” Delton said. “And now there looks like this angry bear is charging us.”

“I don’t know. Perhaps just following the map… and wherever Julius says,” Delton replied.

A big monstrous red bear pounced forward, bearing its razor sharp teeth in a deathly snarl. Its eyes glowed like red orbs in its face. And orange spikes protruded from its back. It roared, pouncing forward in an angry rush.

Julius lifted his blade, ready…[Read more]

Delton cast a glance at the dead lizard, then to Karim. Finally… there just better not be anymore monsters. But his hopes were dashed when a fierce growl lit the air.

Julius slammed his blade into the lizard’s tail. It let out a shriek, dropping Karim to the floor. Its venomous eyes stared into his, seething in hatred. Julius drove his sword into the monster’s eyes. It hissed, writhing in pain at the strike, flailing on the floor. Then finishing the job, Julius swiftly plunged the sword into its head.

Delton…[Read more]

Delton sucked in a breath of air. These monsters were as weird as his hallucinations! Soon he wouldn’t be able to keep track of what was real and not.

@kari-karast: Permission for Julius to kill the lizard?

Julius’s blade slashed through the air. He approached the lizard, his blade sharper than the sharpest metal on earth. “Scat! Away with you! These people are not your breakfast!”

The lizard let out a gurgled growl, hissing.

Julius cast a wild glance around. “Prepare to meet these monstrous brutes everywhere you go. This place was not meant for survivors.”

Delton rose an eyebrow. “Do you have to be so hopeless?”

“Just warning you,” Julius replied.

@anne-of-lothlorien, thanks! 😀

Okay, I’ll have Chloe name the Nameless Daughters. Xd

“You tore the map.” Delton held the two halves of the map. “Oh well. It’s just paper.”

Julius stiffened, staring at the boar. “Perhaps we could escape through one of those doors. This place is a maze, designed by Lord Deathrock himself. He used to let slaves wander this place for sport; to see who’d survive the longest. And there are hundreds of…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt, thanks!

@selah-chelyah, its okay if you don’t have time, I’m not forcing you to read it. But thanks anyway!

@kari-karast 🙂

@kari-karast: oh, okay. 🙂

Nicholas is severely mentally disturbed. He thinks he’s better than anyone. That all clear?

Also, (Question 5) about the info dumping, where exactly is this. Do you think Chloe sometimes uses unrealistically weirdly phrased words, when she uses ‘animals’ and such in her sentences?

@kari-karast: ooh, that’s a good idea! I didn’t think of that. 😀

@kari-karast: no worries! I asked, and you gave me the answers… so, that’s that. Thanks for responding. 🙂

As for the Nameless Daughters, so far, the only thing I made to tell their difference is their hair color and their physical appearance. Do you think I should make them clearer from each other?

@hope-ann @selah-chelyah

There.