@Dakota: I love the colors in this poem!

“The embers of color burn down the bank” “Snowflakes whiten the winter wind” “Springtime meadow sprinkled with color” “Stormy days charged with power” “Gentle waves of a tropic ocean” “Misted mountains in shrouds of gray”

These are all really cool sentences. This entire poem is cool! 😀

@candide: I like the emotions and feelings you portray in your poem. 😀

@Dakota: You should build a collection of poems.

*Observes thread from afar off*

Alright, here goes mine.

Aretino:

“Art is a world in itself.”

“I am not insane!”

“Supposedly, there were several burglary attempts on my paintings this week. How amusing.”

@naiya-dyani

You’re welcome!

*scans the horizon for Bad Habiters of the Kingdom of Authoria*

@naiya-dyani, and speaking of bad habits… sorry, I just spelled your tag wrong too! And that was not on purpose! *stares through fingers*

@naiyah-dyani: The thread is on General Writing Discussions. But last time I checked (today) it was one Page Two. Also, I named the thread “Chloe and Zoe.” If you want, I could tag you every time I write the next chapter.

Oh, and about the tags… that’s really okay! I have a bad habit about that.

Thank you for yours answers about this topic as…[Read more]

‘Also, he has had traumatic experiences in the past.’

Ahem. Sorry, I meant “she” not “he”.

@naiya-dyani,

Well, I have several stories I’m working on right now. But the main one I am focusing on right now is Chloe and Zoe. I actually posted that one on a thread to get feedback on it, so that I can learn how to write better. It’s around 40 pages, (and I’m not trying to make it too long) but I’m getting around the mid plot point. This is…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer, well, not that the character doesn’t act as the MC, but that the character doesn’t always move the plot forward in the ways I need for the theme to make sense and all.

A lot of my current stories are more action-oriented, and a lot is going on in the plot, but I was wondering if there were any tips on how to motivate…[Read more]

@Dakota: Sorry, I don’t have any currently edited poems about. And the ones that I do have aren’t that good.

@Dakota: This poem is so good… Thank you once again! Keep writing! 😀

@nuetrobolt: you’re welcome! And thanks! 😀

@kari-karast, thanks!

@kari-karast: Thanks! Yeah, my middle name is Justice.

And, once everyone was aboard, the bus disappeared to another world.

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @everyone

Alright, the tale is told. I hope you all enjoyed the Game of Characters. Because it is officially over! 😀

Thank you all for taking your time to be a part of this adventure!

– Andrew Justice Schmidt

@kari-karast

Delton glanced over his shoulder at the knight standing atop the tower. That must be the new ruler, he guessed. He faced the rest of the people.

“Well, if anyone needs a ride to their own world,” Delton paused between his words, “I believe we got a ride coming right up for you.”

Suddenly, a big red bus appeared out of thin air. He…[Read more]

@kari-karast: Okay! I will be working on adding more subtle hints and so forth to the characters.

And, thanks for the critique. Again.

@kari-karast, thank you. I’ll change that part more. Thank you for pointing it out.

But Chloe, after learning that Nicholas had ended her mother’s life, was… very, very angry. Her feelings were a mixture of fear and anger, and she wasn’t thinking quite straightly at the moment.

@nuetrobolt: Sorry if I worded my sentences weirdly, but I wasn’t talking about the ruby being for the dragon. Just letting you know.

Oh, and thank you so much for partaking in this Game of Characters!

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @everyone

They all watched, and waved, as Aleck vanished into the sky.

Delton smiled at his friends. “Well, I…[Read more]