@Dakota, thanks!!!! 😀 😀 😀 😀 😀

@Dakota, well, here’s another poem. Its name is Sunflower of Valor. Feel free to critique!

Sprouting amongst the garden is a Sunflower.

Legends claim that he is taller than a tower.

His petals are bright, happy, and yellow.

 He bellows in a friendly voice “Hello!”

To each little and tender flower;

Never doeth he grow sour.

The Sunf…[Read more]

@Dakota: wow, I like it! A great poem once more!

My next poem I am writing is about a Sunflower – the second poem of Botanical Tales, (but I might end of changing that title for the collection of poems). Also, the poem collection-to-be, Botanical Tales, sorta kind of takes place in the same world… so, you may meet certain flowers and so forth…[Read more]

@Dakota, thank you so much! 😀

@nuetrobolt, you’re welcome!

@Dakota, well, I guess the tale about the Rose and talking flowers turned out as a poem… I don’t have a name for it yet, though. And please tell me if you think this is too long. Anyway, enjoy!

Once there bloomed a Rose.

Her petals are beautiful and scarlet.

As the lovely garden grows,

The flowers sing cheerfully.

High, high, high in a…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt @naiya-dyani

Thank you for reading, you writers!

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @anne-of-lothlorien @e-b-raulands @naiya-dyani @all-you-other-amazing-writers

Okay, finally! Sorry if I kept you waiting for a while, but with school and all, I’ve been a little busy. But anyway, Chapter 8 is out!

Also, side note: I know somewhere on this thread where I had talked about the theme being on the lines of…[Read more]

@Dakota, I really like the description, especially that one line… “Glistening gems of rainbow and sunlight”

@naiya-dyani, and nice poem as well! Good job.

Thank y’all for your poems! 😀

@Dakota: If they turn out at poems, yes, I will post them on here! I haven’t wrote poems in a while, so… my poetry writing styles ought to have changed much since last time I posted poems on here.

@Dakota, great job!

Recently, I’ve been writing a poem/story kind of thing. Its about talking flowers… I’m planning on having a collection of them, but I’ve only started writing the first one; of which is about a Rose. I’m not sure if they will end up as poems, or really short stories for children.

@Dakota: The story is about a rat who is always hungry. It’s really short, so for each stanza I have a picture to go with it.

Good job again!

I have a story, Fritz, it is called. It’s a kid’s book. At first, it was so short it seemed more like a poem than a story… but not anymore now that I’ve edited it.

@Dakota: I love the colors in this poem!

“The embers of color burn down the bank” “Snowflakes whiten the winter wind” “Springtime meadow sprinkled with color” “Stormy days charged with power” “Gentle waves of a tropic ocean” “Misted mountains in shrouds of gray”

These are all really cool sentences. This entire poem is cool! 😀

@candide: I like the emotions and feelings you portray in your poem. 😀

@Dakota: You should build a collection of poems.

*Observes thread from afar off*

Alright, here goes mine.

Aretino:

“Art is a world in itself.”

“I am not insane!”

“Supposedly, there were several burglary attempts on my paintings this week. How amusing.”

@naiya-dyani

You’re welcome!

*scans the horizon for Bad Habiters of the Kingdom of Authoria*

@naiya-dyani, and speaking of bad habits… sorry, I just spelled your tag wrong too! And that was not on purpose! *stares through fingers*

@naiyah-dyani: The thread is on General Writing Discussions. But last time I checked (today) it was one Page Two. Also, I named the thread “Chloe and Zoe.” If you want, I could tag you every time I write the next chapter.

Oh, and about the tags… that’s really okay! I have a bad habit about that.

Thank you for yours answers about this topic as…[Read more]

‘Also, he has had traumatic experiences in the past.’

Ahem. Sorry, I meant “she” not “he”.