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Eitan replied to the topic Battle Cry in the forum Poets 2 weeks ago
Beautiful!!
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Eitan replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 2 weeks ago
It was amazing! And encouraging! And beautiful! Thank you for sharing!!!
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Eitan started the topic A poem – I want to weep in the forum Poets 2 weeks ago
I wrote this poem yesterday, and it’s the first one I’ve ever written in English (not including an attempt when I was 13 or so).
I want to weep
I want to weep until I have no power left to cry,
In Your embrace, I want to wail until my eyes get dry.
‘’It can’t occur’’, You said to me, You voice was sad, not mean,
‘’I long for you, My d…[Read more]
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Eitan started the topic Hello, fellow Narnia fans! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 weeks ago
I have been doing a reading diary about The Lion, The Witch, and The Wardrobe, and I struggle to understand the point of the scene when Edmund is afraid of the stone lion. I think it shows Edmund’s bigotry – He tries to find fun and self-worth by mocking others, and it brings him to a sad yet ridiculous situation. But, maybe there’s something I…[Read more]
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Eitan posted a new activity comment 3 weeks ago
Hi,
I re-read ”The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe” for a school assignment. This time, I decided to dive deep into the book, track Edmund’s character arc, and explore the book’s Christian messages. It’s amazing how more I see when I look!!! -
Eitan posted a new activity comment 4 weeks ago
We are fine! Israel is currently locked down, until somewhere in October, because we have the autumn feasts now.
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Eitan started the topic My Homeland Is in Heaven – a Russian worship song in the forum Poets 4 weeks ago
I have a playlist of Russian worship songs, and I love to put it in random orders, This time, this song happened to be the first. It was amazing and gave me a glimpse of Heaven’s joy… So, I hope it will bless you too!
My Homeland Is in Heaven (Heaven Is My Home)
My motherland is in Heaven,
Heaven is my home!
There is my good…[Read more]
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Eitan posted an update 1 month ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer
Hi, how’re you? What’s on in Kentucky? How has it been with sharing the gospel with your friends? -
Eitan replied to the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 1 month ago
Thank you two! (:
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Eitan posted a new activity comment 1 month, 1 week ago
I’m glad to hear it!!!
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Eitan started the topic A poem – Alone in the night of darkness in the forum Poets 1 month, 1 week ago
Hi everyone!
I haven’t been around for a long time… High school and stuff 🙂 It’s a poem I wrote today. It’s a rewriting of something I wrote earlier today, while and after a really hard time. I hope it will encourage, help, or just make you smile 🙂
As always, I’m totally open to any kind of criticism, whether grammatical or artistic…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@daeus-lamb Uh 😅 Yeah, I usually keep up with him.
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Eitan posted a new activity comment 1 month, 3 weeks ago
I’m glad to hear they’re fine. Will continue praying for them. Update me when they find a home, please 🙂
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Eitan replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@daeus-lamb Uhh… I don’t think I understood you. I guess it’s my English. Can you ask again, please?…
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Eitan posted an update 1 month, 3 weeks ago
@beth20 Hi Beth! How’re your friends? Did they find a house? Are you able to meet with them?
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Hey Eitan!
They’re doing fine. They haven’t found one yet, but they have to be out of the one their in by the end of this month I think. Yeah, McCain is actually at my house right now XD
But idk they might move to Pennsylvania.-
I’m glad to hear they’re fine. Will continue praying for them. Update me when they find a home, please 🙂
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Hey Eitan!
They found a rental pretty close! So that’s good! Thanks for the prayers!-
I’m glad to hear it!!!
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How are you and your family?-
We are fine! Israel is currently locked down, until somewhere in October, because we have the autumn feasts now.
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Oh okay.
What are you reading right now?-
Hi,
I re-read ”The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe” for a school assignment. This time, I decided to dive deep into the book, track Edmund’s character arc, and explore the book’s Christian messages. It’s amazing how more I see when I look!!!
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Hey! That sounds fun! I just finished reading The Black Cauldron by Lloyd Alexander! It’s pretty good!
Oh and by the way, I’m gonna be gone for a couple of days, and out of internet, so if I don’t respond to anything on here, you’ll know why!-
Hey, I’m back btw!
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Eitan replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 2 months ago
@zee Thank you!
@kimlikesart Your welcome!
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Eitan started the topic A poem – Your love and Your faithfulness in the forum Poets 2 months ago
So, today was hard… But in the end, God gave me hope and rest. I’m even a little cheery as I write those lines 😉
This is the translation of the original Hebrew. I hope it’ll help, encourage or just make someone smile 🙂 Any critique, grammatical correction, or anything else is welcome.
Your love and Your faithfulness
You gave my heart…[Read more]
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Computer again…
I found this poem. (It has thee’s and thou’s) But has rymne and meter.
It is true.Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
Where JESUS answers prayer;
There humbly fall before his feet,
For none can perish there.
Thy promise is my only plea,
With this I venture nigh;
Thou callest burdened souls to thee,
And such, O LORD, a…[Read more]-
(The poem without thee’s and thou’s)
Approach, my soul, the mercy–seat
Where JESUS answers prayer;
There humbly fall before his feet,
For none can perish there.
Your promise is my only plea,
With this I venture nigh;
You call burdened souls to You,
And such, O LORD, am I.
And such, O LORD, am I.Bowed down beneath a load of sin,
By Satan s…[Read more]
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Eitan replied to the topic A poem – Your love is not imaginary in the forum Poets 2 months ago
@sam-m Thank you!!
Oh, just a typing mistake… Like, I know how to write know 😉 *embarrassed, but thankful*.
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Eitan replied to the topic Ways to glorify God in worldbuilding in the forum Research and Worldbuilding 2 months ago
I don’t work on it currently… Time and stuff. I’ll continue when I know for sure I can invest time and brain cells in it.
Umm… It depends on what kind of world are you about to create. Generally, writing worlds don’t ave to be too complicated and developed – as long as something won’t enter the story, you don’t have to invent…[Read more]
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Eitan posted a new activity comment 2 months, 1 week ago
Thank you!! And thanks for the critique 🙂
Will edit if possible 🙂
(Though grammatically, isn’t it plural?)-
Good question. (I almost didn’t say anything because I don’t have any grammar rule I know to quote.) Then I mentioned it anyway… *wince* My brain, my /self/, why dost thou do this to thyself!!
Anyways…
Yes; it is plural.But ‘is’ /does/ go there. *Knowing I’m doing this horribly…I should ask my mother.*
It sounds wrong with ‘are’. I’ve nev…[Read more]
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(I hope this makes more sense to you, than it does to me…)
‘The subject is “there”.
“There is” is the subject and verb.
“cold and horror” is the direct object(s)’But, at least I know I’m not crazy…. in the complete oblivious sense of the word…
Post Script: It was ‘Tal’ who answered my question…not my mother. (:
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