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Battle Cry

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    Kimmi
    @kimlikesart

      A poem I wrote today. @rusted-knight , because I’m interested in what you think. I’m sorry, if you didn’t want to be tagged… Let me know, and I won’t again. (:

      And @anne-of-lothlorien , because you asked to read some of my poetry, and I denied you. Here is something I feel brave enough to share. (:

      -=-

      Battle Cry

      -=-

      Flags being torn,
      & flags going up.

      .

      Red and blue,
      lines drawn across
      the field of brothers.

      .

      Words of hate,
      and words of pride. Pushing, shoving,
      hearts moaning a battle cry.

      .

      This is us, we the people. Of different blood, but one family.

      .

      United we stand, divided we fall. In God we trust, our All in all.

      .

      But do we?
      The gods, ourselves,
      we serve.

      .

      Our hearts ache, our hearts cry.
      /Why, oh why?/

      .

      It is our own fault.
      It is our own fault
      that we die.

       

      -=-

       

      Soooo, yeah…

      Jominkreesa

      'Forth now! And fear no darkness!'

      #119887
      Beth Darlene
      @beth20

        Hey, I love that!!

        Jominkreesa! For the weirdos who know what it means! 😉 I love you guys!

        #119894
        Kimmi
        @kimlikesart

          Thanks Beth, 😊 .

          Jominkreesa

          'Forth now! And fear no darkness!'

          #120575
          Eitan
          @eitan

            Beautiful!!

            You don't need to see the wind itself in order to hear the rustling leaves.

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