@eitan
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Beth Darlene posted a new activity comment 3 years, 2 months ago
@eitan hey bro! idk if you still use this site or not, but I thought I’d pop on and say hi
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?! . . .
Okay, it has.
Tell me what you all think of this poem.
Rainbow in Waterdrops
Come down…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
This one is another very personal to me. Critique and enjoy!
Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more] -
Bethany replied to the topic Coronavirus drawings! in the forum Art Critique 4 years, 12 months ago
Those are really good! I really like the first one especially. Do you know Hebrew?
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.
Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!
True North
It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]
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Tasha Van Kesteren replied to the topic Hey Everyone in the forum Introduce Yourself 5 years ago
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Beth Darlene posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
@eitan
Hey!!
How have you been?-
Hi!! Thanks for asking ☺️
I’m doing good! I finished 10th grade a few days ago. Now it’s sumemr and I have lots of time I use for many things… I’ve been having many, many, many questions about many, many, many Bible-related subjects, so I’ve started to find answers for them – though I doubt I’ll find answers for all of them in this summer😅 I…[Read more] -
Hey!
Yay!!! I just finished 8th
Yeah, I get that. I have also. But I have some pretty amazing friends that I can always go to with questions which is awesome. The pastor at the church I go to, Dan, and his wife Brandi are really good at answering questions.
Yeah, everyone here is getting their vaccines also. I haven’t gotten vaccinated, but I…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 1 month ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!
My Morning Song (What you will say to me)
The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Hope you all enjoy!
All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!
Resolutions
I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more] -
Kimmi replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 3 months ago
Whoever sees this, it’s amazing. Please. Take the time to listen.
A Message of Hope from Shannon Scholten – YouTube
And, if you have time, would you share your thoughts?
@rusted-knight @this-is-not-an-alien @eitan @anyone <3
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Merry Christmas!!
My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more] -
Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 4 months ago
@vic @andrew @libby @jenwriter17 @nuetrobolt @ericawordsmith @jane-maree @the-fledgling-artist @urwen-starial @e-b-raulands @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @naiya-dyani @eitan
Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .
Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene posted an update 5 years, 4 months ago
@thedarkninja03 @kimlikesart @claire-h @purpleturtle @olivia Happy thanksgiving to you all!! Love you!
@eitan Not sure when if/when Isreal celebrates Thanksgiving, but I thought I’d wish you a happy one anyway!!-
Thanks! Happy Thanksgiving to you too!!
Thanks be to God, who gives us the victory through our Lord Jesus Christ.
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Happy Thanksgiving!
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Oh, thank you for remembering! No, we don’t celebrate it but thank you anyway! Happy Thanksgiving, though I think I’m a bit late… But I wish you all to be happy anyway! 😀
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Oh okay, I wasn’t sure if you had your own version, or if you didn’t do it at all lol! Thanks! =)
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Haha, thanks! I know I’m super late, but I keep forgetting to check emails and such.
Even though I live in Canada and am totally a Canadian, both my parents are from the States, so we celebrate both Canadian and American Thanksgiving. That way we get double the good food! hahaha
And also because we’re often moose hunting over Canadian…[Read more]-
Cool haha!! Sounds awesome!
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Ya, it’s fun!
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Just curious, are all of you in your profile picture related? If you don’t want me to know, that’s fine, I was just looking at it and realized all of you look related. Your smiles especially look alike.
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Yeah! That’s me on the left holding my nephew who’s the son of the second girl on the right. The first girl on the right is my older sister who’s a Marine and the other lady is my Mom. =)
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Okay, I sorta guessed you were all sisters and that was your mom, but I wasn’t sure. And I wasn’t sure which one was you. 😛 You really all do look a ton alike though! Hahaha
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Haha! Yeah! Did you know Mom is 50% Sicilian?
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I am very late coming to this, but, HAPPY THANKSGIVING!!!!!!!
Thank you Beth. (:
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Haha, you’re welcome!! =)
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Cool! I’m not biracial, but I think that would be awesome! My mom does sorta wonder if there is some African-American blood on her side though, because some of the features in our family look like it. Like my hair. You can’t really tell in the picture, but my hair is really kinky and big, so it sorta looks like a white version of African-American…[Read more]
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Haha that’s neat! My friend Autumn has hair like that!
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic A poem – I want to weep in the forum Poets 5 years, 4 months ago
Nice poem @eitan!!
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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
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Hope McClellan replied to the topic Hello, fellow Narnia fans! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 5 months ago
It’s been awhile since I’ve read it, and I don’t have the book in front of me to refresh myself, but my initial answer would be that this is further showcasing Edmund’s fleshly rebellion to Aslan. The statue reminds him of Aslan, so he wants nothing to do with it. Perhaps also he’s fearful because he subconsciously realizes that what he’s…[Read more]
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Beth Darlene replied to the topic Renner and Erin in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 years, 5 months ago
@eitan @claire-h @purpleturtle @olivia Let me know if you want to be tagged or untagged!
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Sam M replied to the topic I Would Be in the forum Poets 5 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, Eitan! 🙂
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Kimmi posted an update 5 years, 6 months ago
@eitan
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(Hi! Um… here’s something short I wrote….)
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‘A Star’“`
A star. Bright, and wise. His feet have danced on the knee of the handle his whole being. A breath that has lasted thousands of years.
When, over a span of two months, he feels himself getting hotter. His body becomes brighter. His song to the Star Breather comes out stronger…[Read more]
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Hi Gracie, I’m not very active there, so next time, share it with me through email 🙂
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