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  • Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 4 years, 11 months ago

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    This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

    Twenty-One
    Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
    For twenty-one
    Weighed down by the times I have to try
    I’ve never won
    With frayed ends and too much weight, I sigh
    Doubt I could fight
    For the Holy One

    Twenty-one years, not gettin’ any younger
    Twenty-one times I could have been stronger
    And all the tears I cry at my failure
    And all the prayers my cries to be more pure
    Over all twenty-one

    Sometimes paths cross, confusion ahead
    I come undone
    Sometimes I’m spun around my own head
    I come undone
    God, I need trust, not give up instead
    Trust in your plan
    You’re the Holy One

    Every time I think that I have failed
    Every time I’ve fallen and flailed
    I can stand right back up and brush off my soul
    I’ll be thinking on You, for You made me whole
    Overhaul twenty-one

    Set by step, walked over twenty one years
    Truth by Truth, You are allaying my fears
    Inch by inch, and gaining strength as I grew
    Piece by piece, I will become like You

    Twenty-one years, not gettin’ any younger
    Twenty-one times I’ll try to be stronger
    And all the songs I’ll sing as on I journey
    And all the prayers, to trust until the heav’nly

    When it’s all been said and done
    I’ll go home. Good-bye, twenty-one

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