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Dakota replied to the topic Lyrical Poems are Welcome here! in the forum Poetry Discussions 5 years, 2 months ago
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Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!
My Morning Song (What you will say to me)
The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still yawning
I will say ‘Good Morning’
And open my ears to hear
What You will say to meThe sun climbing higher
Ringed by gold, amethyst and fire
As I sing hallelu
And extol Your name to honor YouUnto the hills so high
Bathed in light from the golden sky
To You I’ll lift my eyes
And put all of my life into Your handsThe sunlight is dawning
And though I am still yawning
I will say ‘Good Morning’
And open my ears to hear
What You will say to meOpening up Your Word
Is the only way for Your voice to be heard
To start this day off well
I must gather truth and never sellYour words are pure and clear
Every humble prayer You’ll hear
So I will humble me
And open my eyes to truly seeSo I’ll quiet the hour
So my life isn’t turned sour
I will say ‘Good Morning’
And quiet the hour to hear
What You’ll say to me
Before I go about
All the daily routine and route
I’ll stay upon my knees
Long enough to lift my heart’s pleasHelp me quiet the hour
So my life isn’t turned sour
I will say ‘Good Morning’
And quiet the hour to hear
What You’ll say to me










