Banana Peacock Warrior

@kari-karast: s’all good. 😉

And BTW, if anyone else is interested, I’m going to put down the premise/plot here so that you don’t have to really open it up and skim the whole thing or anything to figure it out beforehand.

Also, The Clefs is a fantasy.

THE CLEFS:
 Cadenza is the greatest dancer on Harmony Island, the most beautiful of all the…[Read more]

Hi, @bree-dawn! I’m Kenzie(Banana Peacock Warrior- trust me, the nickname’s a long story…) Welcome to Story Embers! Do you have any current WIP’s and are you considering joining a guild? 🙂

@bama-rose, @emberynus-the-dragonslayer, @evelyn: Thanks! Yeah… it WAS crazy…

@w-o-holmes: LOL not really… I like peacocks, but not ecstatic about them, and the same with bananas. I got stuck with the nickname in dance class about 4 years ago. It’s a long story. 😉

Hi, everybody! Wow, I’ve been off of here for way too long… 😬 Let’s see if I can answer the questions I missed without being overwhelming…? 😂 (a few minutes later…) OKAY…. I just put all the new questions I’ve missed in the past week on here and… I’m gonna pick and choose and alternate between my two WIP’s ’cause this is a lot. 😁

Hieee…[Read more]

Hi ‘people on this forum’! Wow, there are so many interesting stories on here! And holy cow, those family trees are cool- how in the world do you find the time to go so far back?!

I don’t have any super interesting stories (except for some awesome stories from my mom when she was a kid- oh boy, did she get in trouble often!) But I saw at the…[Read more]

Hi, @azeline-d! I’ll admit that I don’t specialize in free-verse, but I think that these are really good! I especially liked Self-Consciousness in how true it really is! I liked this verse…

Which keeps you from caring outwardly
Since too occupied you are with “me”

I don’t know about you, but I know that whenever I ask for critiques and act…[Read more]

@k-a-grey @bama-rose @valtmy @olivia @kari-karast

These are all awesome! I especially love that one from David Schlosser- I’ve never heard of him, before! And LOL I like a lot of your signature quotes too… 😏😂

I randomly found these ones online…

“You can always edit a bad page. You can’t edit a blank page.” -Jodi Picoult

“The best books…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: WOAH! I just looked at that link for Hector’s backstory, and… POOR HECTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!! My goodness, the poor kid! And his poor sister! And his poor life! Oh, he must have so many mental scars… but he sounds really developed. I love him so much now! *finds Hector, reaches over, and pats his hand- then squeezes…[Read more]

Hi, @candide! It’s awesome to meet you and welcome to Story Embers!

That’s really cool that you’re from Brazil and speak Portuguese as your first language… I have friends who study Portuguese for their foreign language in school and my old dance teacher went to Brazil to do some professional stuff. From what she says, it seems great!

I had the…[Read more]

Hi, everyone on here! I know that it’s been, like, months since anyone has commented on this thread, and I’m not really a super incredible artist myself and just a copyartist, and I’m not going to tag EVERYONE on this thread, but I just wanted to comment in case anyone sees it that I really enjoyed all these Psalm illustrations! They were all so…[Read more]

@thewirelessblade: I can’t say I’m totally sure what you mean. Is the problem giving your character a believable character arc that flows with the plot/theme? (I love character arcs… :D)

With ‘combining character flaws with theme’, I mean- a character flaw is one of the best things you can use, I think, to express a theme. Example (I guess): In…[Read more]

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: How cool! Yes, I’ve heard of them; that’s super awesome! And your first autograph?! That’s so cool! (LOL, more cool than my first autograph… I was, like, 6 and I got an autograph from the lead in my cousin’s school play…)

@emberynus-the-dragonslayer: No prob! 😉 XD