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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Would Your Character Rather. . . in the forum Characters 3 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-rebekah @dakota @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @banana-peacock-warrior @kayla-skywriter @w-o-holmes @sam-m @esmeralda-gramilton @thewirelessblade
Hey anybody else want to help revive this thread?
Great answer btw
Would your character rather kiss a frog to break a curse, or have to become the frog to break the curse?…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Urwen's Art Gallery in the forum Art Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@the-fledgling-artist @naiya-dyani @veraza-winterknight @banana-peacock-warrior @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @anyone who can help me
Art critique, pls?
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Hope Ann started the topic Those posh sounding charactors in the forum Characters 6 years ago
Another character question, this one from Emma:
I have a main character who comes from a well-to-do family and is well educated. When she is talking to characters who are not wealthy or well educated, she uses normal dialogue. But I want the dialogue between her and her family to sound educated and eloquent without being so wordy that my readers…
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Urwen Starial started the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 6 years ago
Here is a poem I wrote a few days ago, it’s what I was struggling with the other day in real life. But if even a few people would take the time to read it, that would mean so much to me.
Lonely times
I ask myself what I’m doing,
I think that all I’m doing is a waste,
I try and fail to find comfort,
In this lonely place.
I try and I stay a…[Read more]
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Hope Ann started the topic Foreshadowing evil characters in the forum Characters 6 years, 1 month ago
Fun question from Livi today!
How does one go about foreshadowing that a character (who everyone thinks is a good guy) is evil/antagonistic in such a way that, if one is paying enough attention to the little details, one could quickly put two and two together and realize it? So that, if you’re just reading along, you and the other characters…[Read more]
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Hope McClellan replied to the topic Unrealistic Character? in the forum Characters 6 years, 1 month ago
I was not tagged, but I hope you don’t mind if I give some input here. I personally like it a lot! Kaleb has a fun personality. You were able to tell me a lot just in that short excerpt. Overall, really well written!
I would agree with the others that the switch was a little too sudden, but I would like to expand on that…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Unrealistic Character? in the forum Characters 6 years, 1 month ago
Yeah. I agree with @abigail-rebekah and @esmeralda-gramilton. It’s good, it’s just that the transition from grumpiness to niceness is too sudden. 🙂
It is really good though.
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Unrealistic Character? in the forum Characters 6 years, 1 month ago
I think it works fine 🙂 It’s cool xD
The only thing I would say is that you might want to keep him grumpy for a little bit longer, so he doesn’t become ‘nice’ too quickly 😉
That’s just a suggestion tho xD
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Evelyn replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
@banana-peacock-warrior Ahhh. I find Hollywood does that often. And not just with rare people groups, but with real people too! (Especially when working with romances. 😉 ) What book/movie represents your people most accurately?
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
Lol…sorry Gremlin 😉
Oh, that would be hard xD Hacking sounds really cool, tho 😉
That’s good. Ooh…piano…nice 🙂
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic Strength in Numbers in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years, 1 month ago
I’m from NZ btw…except I wouldn’t be able to do a writing group at the moment xD
I think @banana-peacock-warrior is from Australia, and also @august-grace.
Are ya’ll kinda like beta-reading each others work?
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Abigail Rebekah replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 1 month ago
You’re back???? or at least your “evil” writing gremlin 😉
So, how’s your writing going?
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Venusaturn replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
@banana-peacock-warrior (writing gremlin)
Hello there!
You can just call me Mayacat! Nice to meet you! I’m @urwen-starial and @esmeralda-gramilton ‘s older sister and I’m friends with @banana-peacock-warrior as well!
(Also, I feel like I’ve seen you around somewhere XD)
Do you have a favorite or Urwen’s characters?
Talk soon!
~Mayacat
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Evelyn replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
Hello Writing Gremlin! It is a pleasure to meet you. 😀
I’m Evelyn and I love making friends with quirky people. Or gremlins. I guess. I’ve never done it before. Any tips? What is the #1 thing I shouldn’t do to a gremlin? What would offend one?
If you have any specific questions at any time, let me know and I’ll help you…[Read more]
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
(Writing Gremlin)
Hi, nice to meet you!
Kirat: *stares at Writing Gremlin in disbelief* It’s… Actually….furry?
Me: Kirat, will you please close your mouth? You look like a goldfish.
I’m very excited to meet you Writing Gremlin, what kind of things do you like to do?
Jin: O.o
Rhioe: Do you have a name you prefer…[Read more]
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Kenzie Pimpo started the topic The Writing Gremlin in the forum Introduce Yourself 6 years, 2 months ago
Hi, Story Embers community! My name is unpronounceable in English (unless one of you has amazing gurgle/lip/growl abilities), but call me the Writing Gremlin.
In case you’re wondering, which I am sure you are, the owner of this profile and tag has been so busy with school and life that she has not been able to post anything, while she HAS been…[Read more]
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Urwen Starial replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 2 months ago
What side would Judah be on? (is Judah the one . . . wait. . . is Judah friends with @banana-peacock-warrior ?????) *prepares to be amazed or extremely disappointed.
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Esmeralda Gramilton replied to the topic Character Story in the forum Characters 6 years, 2 months ago
@abigail-rebekah @dakota @urwen-starial @naiya-dyani @banana-peacock-warrior @kayla-skywriter @w-o-holmes @sam-m @thewirelessblade @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @mayacat
AND EVERYONE ELSE:
Is anyone planning to do the meeting for the rebels? Because I know I need to get the Renegade Elimination Plan to the rebel leaders and I think…[Read more]
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