@banana-peacock-warrioractive 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Another character question, this one from Emma:
I have a main character who comes from a well-to-do family and is well educated. When she is talking to characters who are not wealthy or well educated, she uses normal dialogue. But I want the dialogue between her and her family to sound educated and eloquent without being so wordy that my readers…
Urwen Starial started the topic Does anyone want to read this slightly depressing poem? in the forum Poets 3 months, 2 weeks ago
Here is a poem I wrote a few days ago, it’s what I was struggling with the other day in real life. But if even a few people would take the time to read it, that would mean so much to me.
I ask myself what I’m doing,
I think that all I’m doing is a waste,
I try and fail to find comfort,
In this lonely place.
I try and I stay a…[Read more]
Fun question from Livi today!
How does one go about foreshadowing that a character (who everyone thinks is a good guy) is evil/antagonistic in such a way that, if one is paying enough attention to the little details, one could quickly put two and two together and realize it? So that, if you’re just reading along, you and the other characters…[Read more]
I was not tagged, but I hope you don’t mind if I give some input here. I personally like it a lot! Kaleb has a fun personality. You were able to tell me a lot just in that short excerpt. Overall, really well written!
I would agree with the others that the switch was a little too sudden, but I would like to expand on that…[Read more]
I think it works fine 🙂 It’s cool xD
The only thing I would say is that you might want to keep him grumpy for a little bit longer, so he doesn’t become ‘nice’ too quickly 😉
That’s just a suggestion tho xD
@banana-peacock-warrior Ahhh. I find Hollywood does that often. And not just with rare people groups, but with real people too! (Especially when working with romances. 😉 ) What book/movie represents your people most accurately?
Lol…sorry Gremlin 😉
Oh, that would be hard xD Hacking sounds really cool, tho 😉
That’s good. Ooh…piano…nice 🙂
You’re back???? or at least your “evil” writing gremlin 😉
So, how’s your writing going?
@banana-peacock-warrior (writing gremlin)
(Also, I feel like I’ve seen you around somewhere XD)
Do you have a favorite or Urwen’s characters?
Hello Writing Gremlin! It is a pleasure to meet you. 😀
I’m Evelyn and I love making friends with quirky people. Or gremlins. I guess. I’ve never done it before. Any tips? What is the #1 thing I shouldn’t do to a gremlin? What would offend one?
If you have any specific questions at any time, let me know and I’ll help you…[Read more]
Well if you are a friend of Banana Peacock Warrior. . .
Do you like music?
Hi, nice to meet you!
Kirat: *stares at Writing Gremlin in disbelief* It’s… Actually….furry?
Me: Kirat, will you please close your mouth? You look like a goldfish.
I’m very excited to meet you Writing Gremlin, what kind of things do you like to do?
Rhioe: Do you have a name you prefer…[Read more]
Hi, Story Embers community! My name is unpronounceable in English (unless one of you has amazing gurgle/lip/growl abilities), but call me the Writing Gremlin.
In case you’re wondering, which I am sure you are, the owner of this profile and tag has been so busy with school and life that she has not been able to post anything, while she HAS been…[Read more]
AND EVERYONE ELSE:
Is anyone planning to do the meeting for the rebels? Because I know I need to get the Renegade Elimination Plan to the rebel leaders and I think…[Read more]
Is anyone going to use Beta 7.9? Cause I been really thinking about making them be Cade. But I didn’t want to take it if anyone was else was planning on using it.
If that’s okay with you?
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