GabrielWoods

@bigideaskc thank you! I think I need to find a time to just sit down and talk to him about it, maybe even talk for like, an hour each week at a specific time. And obviously keep in touch about it in between.

@taylorclogston thank you. I will try to keep him updated and tell him to keep me updated about ideas and stuff.

@taylorclogston I think that you should mention more of his surroundings, and maybe something about the service. Perhaps have him think that something the pastor said would contradict his secret.

but I think that you wouldn’t necessarily have to add anything. It’s up to you

@naiya-dyani thanks, I think he wouldn’t mind me writing the ruff draft, but I will check

I think your story was good, maybe you could add a little bit more to the scene at the funeral, it was really short but beside that, I thought it was pretty good. In a really sad way.