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Poetry Critique Wanted

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    Bethany
    @sparrowhawke

      Hi guys,

      I just finished a mini collection of five poems inspired by The Scarlet Letter. I am submitting it to a young authors contest for my homeschool group, but the contest isn’t that intense or anything (as far as I know, only a few other people have signed up). Still, I would like to get some feedback on it. I mainly want to know if the poems make sense whether you’ve read the book or not, and how I should order them. I have them in a certain order right now that I think makes sense, but I’m not the reader so I don’t know for sure.

      I’ll need all feedback by the 13th.

      If you’re interested, just request access to the doc below and you can make comments on the doc. And (I don’t know how important this is with a 170 year-old book) there will be spoilers.

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pHYHb5pGSTzQqT01vySzjZuxmXgZZVJj6zmVn0n1XeU/edit?usp=sharing

      Thanks!

      "Can't have dirty garbage."

      #128702
      Dakota
      @dakota

        @sparrowhawke I really enjoyed reading them all! Hope you win the contest. 🙂

        Psalm 119:11
        Your word I have hidden in my heart,
        That I might not sin against You.

        #128749
        Bethany
        @sparrowhawke

          Thank you @Dakota!

          "Can't have dirty garbage."

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