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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 hours, 21 minutes ago
First off, that is SO intriguing!! I can totally envision the slick deck and pelting rain. Your descriptions are vibrant and your dialogue realistic. But before I go rattling off, how detailed of a critique would you like?
Concerning description and stuff, your revised version was much better!
Nadia sat relaxed on the…
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 hours, 35 minutes ago
So, last time I did one of these, I got completely overwhelemed trying to critique everyone’s stories. So this go-round, if y’all are okay with it, I’ll just pick two or three to follow so that I can critique those as well as I can instead of giving you hasty and probably inaccurate ideas. Sorry if that hurts someone’s feelings. :/ I think I’m…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic “Escape from Ackerley” a collaborative story in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 hours, 41 minutes ago
Yurp, works for me!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 hours, 42 minutes ago
*salutes* One question though: Ian ISN’T an Elf, right? Or is he? And you do want him in the prophecy, right?
*realizes that was three questions* *shrugs*
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 hours, 44 minutes ago
No worries! I do that sometimes on accident too. 🙂
Erm, personally I like the first two the best. Maybe we can combine them, though? Like have them play a board game without communicating with voices, then one of them accidentally does and they’re shrunk as punishment? XD I have no clue where that came from, but it…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga 5th book RP in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 hours, 47 minutes ago
Ha, I was going to say that! (The “um” thing, that is.) And go straight ahead!
@kylie-wingfeather (and everyone else),
I have no clue what to do with Arundelle & Artham, so I await y’all’s lead! 🙂
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Guardians of Kulmaine Role-Play in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 hours, 25 minutes ago
Uh… *looks at Bekah* I think so?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 22 hours, 11 minutes ago
It’s WIND!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 days, 7 hours ago
Pretty well! Life’s a bit crazy, which is why I haven’t really been on. How about you?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 days, 4 hours ago
(@skylarynn Ooh, I’m so sorry!! My family recently lost our dog of 14 years as well, so I feel for you. ):)
“Oh, I think we are quite alright,” the woman replied breezily. “You have my thanks for the offer, but I must decline.” Something followed her words, a whisper of thought, but just beyond Malvat’s reach. A slight frown dimpled his face. The…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone commented on the post, 2 Ways to Grow as an Author without Actually Writing 4 days, 7 hours ago
Excellent article!! *wonders how many times I’ve stared at the beautiful mountains and tried to decide how to put them into my book*
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Joelle Stone commented on the post, You Need to Define Your Writing Voice Before You Can Refine It 4 days, 7 hours ago
“What fingerprint will you leave on the world?” Loved that!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 days, 1 hour ago
Do you want her to team up or fight alone? Either one works, and if you want Gwendolyn could be on her team (please don’t feel obligated, I was just throwing it out there,).
Either works!! If you want to have Gwen and Riure on a team, I’m all for it (plus it’ll help Riure recognize her better. ;)).
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 days, 1 hour ago
I read your story, and it looks awesome (plus great cliffhanger – and Chapter 56?!? That’s AMAZING!! My longest WIP is 23. XD). I’ll critique when I have time. 🙂
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 days, 1 hour ago
*sheepishly hangs head* Ooh… page three? Was it really that bad? *coughs*
Welcome back, Crazywriter! 😀
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Stories and Fantasies in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 days, 1 hour ago
No problem! I know how moving is. 🙂 Welcome back!
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic “Escape from Ackerley” a collaborative story in the forum Fantasy Writers 5 days, 1 hour ago
Yurp, I’m not sure what I’m gonna do with Ash right now either. *shrugs*
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 days, 7 hours ago
So, is Klein with Riure and Zanar or with Ferran and Dancrow?
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Character Castle 2.0 in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 days, 7 hours ago
Well, for the riddle, sunscreen works. XD It’s white, changes size, is usually smeared all over (including on the undersides of your arms and stuff), but if you toss the bottle it flies. People wear it in the sun, obviously, but I don’t think I’ve seen anyone wear it in rain. The rain would wash it off, anyway. Plus it…[Read more]
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic City Seekers (Seekers of Londima) in the forum Fantasy Writers 6 days, 7 hours ago
Okey dokey! Mind if we just bring your character along for a while?
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