So, I’m really busy these days you guys. I’m not going to be able to post on here a lot. I’ll come back, but for now I’m on hold. Keep it up, though!! 🙂

Nice brainstorming y’all! (I’ve been reading it all even though I haven’t actually been posting, lol). And I really stink at worldbuilding, so Aleck’s planet is going to be pretty bland and stuff. :/ Good thing he’ll mostly be on The Resilience!!

@writergirl101,

Nuts. But I get it! Thx for starting this; it’s been great fun.

@melodyjoy,

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Ooh, well done Wingiby!! That was really good. 🙂

I did notice that you called the Bird of the Waning Dawn a “she” and an “it”. You might choose one or the other. 🙂

Also, I noticed that you said that the Indians had spears and bows with poisoned arrows. You said that the Indians readied their spears, then a few sentences later Davion had…[Read more]

The stairs led to a hallway, which in turn led to a massive cavern. Majestic stalagmites reached for the floor with stony fingers, falling short twenty feet. Rocks bordered the dark walls, and behind many of them Lytt could see passageways leading off to who knew where. She shivered. How could she and Dharin keep an eye on all of them at once?

A…[Read more]

@wingiby-iggiby,

Ooh, good idea! That way, people think that the meek Judge Andor is a totally different person than the power-hungry villain, Neromiro Drake. I like it! (I think the Nero name is best as well, BTW).

Yeah, I think we should allow more than one character per country. I mean, people think Vika’s from the same country as Melody’s…[Read more]

@melodyjoy,

I love your ideas! And I think your brainstorming is very helpful. I haven’t come up with anything as of yet!! 😛 As for the separate doc, that’s a wonderful idea!

Maybe a spy for her country of Rushka. She’s spying on Sinoraus for the Rushkans. There’s a lot of border disputes and stuff, right? So maybe that’s why she’s there, and…[Read more]

Ooh! May I be Gammon? I love his speech, and I’d love to act him. He’s one of my fav. characters; can’t believe I forgot about him! And then we’d have someone in Skree…

@melodyjoy,

I like your planet a lot. Do you mind if one of my characters is from a different country on it? Vika, maybe? She could be a spy or something cool. 🙂

What if those who lose the Culling mysteriously disappear? Maybe there’s something sinister with the games that the judges don’t want let out, so if someone loses, they’re either “disposed of” or sold into slavery or something like that where they’re never seen again. Then maybe our characters can try and figure that out.

Could someone explain…[Read more]

@melodyjoy,

Great ideas! And like Wingiby said,

I especially like the thought of your planet’s water core.

@wingiby-iggiby,

Hope the moving goes well! I’ve only ever moved once that I remember (twice in my life), and it was exciting but stressful. Have fun!

@mischievous-thwapling,

Yes! You should totally be Kal. I mean, he’s a major character and you have the sense of humor needed to portray him as close to right as possible. I vote you go for Kal. 🙂 Then we have Janner (crazywriter), Kat (you), and Leeli (arindown). Yes! The major characters are taken if you decide to use Kal. But if you don’t…[Read more]

Nice posts, y’all!!

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Underground. For Lytt, that was a synonym for torture. She shivered a little. Dharin seemed to notice.

“Are you okay?”

Lytt swallowed, and forced a smile, nodding slightly. She could do this. “I’ll be fine. Is that another door?”

Another open door stood directly ac…[Read more]

Here’s Livi’s post:

Dharin paused before stepping through the door. He pulled his dagger from its sheath and handed it to Lytt behind him.

“Here. You have a bow, but this will be better for close-range. Quicker, too.” As an afterthought, he said, “And hand me the candlestick.”

If she ended up having to fight, he didn’t want her to catch her…[Read more]

@anne_the_noob14,

Sorry for not being here! I was really busy today. 🙂

That’s great! I can post it on the other forum. 🙂

As for you previous question, yes, that’s what I’m trying to decide with Lytt. I kinda want her to get into a romantic relationship in my book, and I’m testing her to see if that’ll work out. So yeah, thanks for going along…[Read more]

Sounds good, you guys!

@wingiby-iggiby,

Exactly!! I made a character in my book with wings just so I could experiment with that… 🙂

Thwapling,

Right? So much thought… 😛

There are pros and cons about leaving stuff vague like that.

PROS:

• I don’t have to live with an ending I don’t like. I can make it up.
• It leaves room for more to be written if he decided to write more.

CONS:

• I don’t know what happened.
• It’s too vague!!

😛

So I’ll take votes. Who should I be?

• Arundelle (ex-cloven queen)
• Oskar N. Reteep (Appreciator of the Strange, Neat, and/or Yummy)
• Nia (Queen of Anneria)
• Owen (book-bindery guidling)
• Sara (I can’t remember if she’s taken or not)
• Someone else I can’t think of…

I can’t decide!! 😛

@mischievous-thwapling,

Yeah, but I mean if the Water took away his wings and stuff, I think it’d take away Leeli’s injury, and visa versa. Then again, I suppose the wings weren’t a physical injury, just a change. Leeli’s leg is an injury. So I guess it might be healed. IDK! 😛