[omi]

Hello! I’ve been writing some poems and it’s my first time to share some of them. Here’s one that I’d love to share. This is my first time and attempt to write a sonnet and I hope I can learn and improve in the future. 🙂

 

Lonely Sonnet

 

The moonlight brushed up across his pale face

As his trembling soul could not recover

He dreamt about her voice for days and days

The sweet voice of a beautiful lover

She reminds him of the sweet green grasslands

And of the lively noises of nature

Nothing is more nostalgic than her hands

Wrapped around his so crinkled and mature

Many nights has he been chasing some sleep

With his pillow tear stained every night

Because the pain in his chest digs down deep

The hope of his life was out of plain sight

Nothing can heal him from this pain again

Except this lonely sonnet and my pen

[Kimmi]

That was beautiful @omi .

Jominkreesa

'Forth now! And fear no darkness!'

[omi]

Thanks so much!! Is there anything I can do to improve more? I’m willing to learn anything to improve in my craft. 🙂 @kimlikesart

[Dakota]

@omi This is just lovely!! I don’t see anything I would change in it. Good work. 🙂

Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.

[omi]

@dakota Thank you!! I’ll try to post more of my other works here as much as I can 😀

[Dakota]

@omi Cool! I look forward to it.

Psalm 119:11
Your word I have hidden in my heart,
That I might not sin against You.

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