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Lonely Sonnet

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    omi
    @omi

    Hello! I’ve been writing some poems and it’s my first time to share some of them. Here’s one that I’d love to share. This is my first time and attempt to write a sonnet and I hope I can learn and improve in the future. 🙂

     

    Lonely Sonnet

     

    The moonlight brushed up across his pale face

    As his trembling soul could not recover

    He dreamt about her voice for days and days

    The sweet voice of a beautiful lover

    She reminds him of the sweet green grasslands

    And of the lively noises of nature

    Nothing is more nostalgic than her hands

    Wrapped around his so crinkled and mature

    Many nights has he been chasing some sleep

    With his pillow tear stained every night

    Because the pain in his chest digs down deep

    The hope of his life was out of plain sight

    Nothing can heal him from this pain again

    Except this lonely sonnet and my pen

    #133586
    Kimmi
    @kimlikesart

    That was beautiful @omi .

    Jominkreesa

    'Forth now! And fear no darkness!'

    #133590
    omi
    @omi

    Thanks so much!! Is there anything I can do to improve more? I’m willing to learn anything to improve in my craft. 🙂 @kimlikesart

    #133591
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @omi This is just lovely!! I don’t see anything I would change in it. Good work. 🙂

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

    #133613
    omi
    @omi

    @dakota Thank you!! I’ll try to post more of my other works here as much as I can 😀

    #133616
    Dakota
    @dakota

    @omi Cool! I look forward to it.

    Psalm 119:11
    Your word I have hidden in my heart,
    That I might not sin against You.

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