Knowledgeful Butterfly

Hey everybody, this stuff looked really fun and cool and I would love to join in.  Could someone tell me where it’s moved to now?

@kari-karast @scarletimmortalized @i-david @countryboy77 @e_elaine_soup5

@e_elaine_soup5 Cool poem! 🙂 I especially like the images in the last stanza. “Broken lightning” and “whispered thunder” = perfection.

For feedback… “We alone did face” seems a little awkward to me, unless you’re trying for an old English type of vibe. “We faced the dark alone” is a lot easier to read/follow.

Here are the word war results!!

We didn’t do so hot, but I know I needed a break after the intense NaNo effort. We’ll do better next time! We got this!!

And congrats to the awesome…[Read more]

Um, @e_elaine_soup5, what just happened? Your post was a little unclear…

@e_elaine_soup5 I love the song lyrics one. Sun-split clouds is a great image! The haikus were great too, especially the line “we light stuff on fire.” 😀

@e_elaine_soup5 I see! That’s really interesting.

@e_elaine_soup5 Wow, I really like them all.

I’ve heard of poetry magnet sets, what are they like??

@e_elaine_soup5

Nice!

Depression as of the rain, to some

Where others would take, decorant hues.

Petrichor and chrysalism, taken as of the withered weed;

Brought and chained unto the air,

Depression of aught, this of the brain.

To Him we look, and see the light,

Of Him we read and comfort, have

To set the sun within the sky…

This of…[Read more]

@kari-karast @nuetrobolt @e_Elaine_soup5 @everyone

Ash handed Delton the rubies, which were now stuffed in a little brown fabric sack. He hopped off the dragon’s back.

“All we need to do, after we split them up, is make a wish. But, we must all agree on the same one wish. And if the wish is too big, there are always consequences.” Delton…[Read more]

@andrew, sorry, I haven’t been on much either!

“I’m sure he can fit us all in a pinch. Come on!” Aleck threw a precious gem at a bat flying over his head, knocking it out of the air.

He ran through the darkness towards the dragon.

“Now where has Ash got to?”

@kari-karast @bookcrazygirl @e_elaine_soup5

@nuetrobolt @kari-karast @bookcrazygirl @e_elaine_soup5

“Aleck, is Spadewick big enough to fly us all out of here? Before that psycho lord comes chasing us?” Delton asked, glancing around. “Wait, where did Ash run off to? She has the rubies. Its magic will set the slaves free.”

“I don’t think so.” Lord Deathrock was deadly silent in the…[Read more]

Oh wait a minute, Aleck doesn’t have the rubies anymore, he gave them  to Ash. I forgot about that. Xd

The bats dived downward. Julius grumbled something, and slashed the bats in half with his sword as they transformed into bits of broken glass and dust.

“Alright, I guess we should get going now,” Delton said. “Quickly.”

They all rushed out…[Read more]

Hi, all you writing peoples!

Sorry, I’ve not been on the Forum lately.

Tagging again: @nuetrobolt @e_elaine_soup5 @kari-karast @bookcrazygirl

Okay, where were we? Hmm. Aleck trying to run away with the rubies, they’re trying to free the slaves, they’re being attacked by Lord Deathrock… Alright, well, I’m back now.

Delton pried the rope…[Read more]

@e_elaine_soup5 wow! I can’t believe I haven’t found this thread before!

@anne-of-lothlorien I love it!!!

I love romances