@h-jones, I know I had to go back and look at how I even got in this thread and then had the “oh duh” moment. I created this thread because I needed people to talk to.

I agree with you I DO NOT think that Loki is really dead. One person I talked to thinks that Loki shifted into Banner and that is why Bruce cannot turn into hulk because he isn’t…[Read more]

@princess-foo, @i-david, @scarletimmortalized, @pursuewisdom.

I totally forgot about this thread. I had to watch the trailer THREE times just to understand that the trailer had come out!! I was really happy with my prediction about the title. I took what Strange said in the last movie about them being in the end game and figured that to be the ti…[Read more]

@morreafirebird, interesting. I noticed that my chapters seem to hang around 2-300 with a few being more. I’m trying to set a 600 word per chapter goal just to lengthen it a bit, because my chapters are really kind short

@jenwriter17, thanks. I’m actually deleting some chapters. (This is like my 10th draft.) I find that my chapters tend to just naturally end. and it’s like each break is kinda like the commercial period.

On the side, I can’t help but notice you are an INFJ too!!!! And a Marvel and Star wars person! Ready for questions?? 1) how do you as an INFJ…[Read more]

@taylorclogston, amazing story! Or the start of one. I really like the detail you give in the beginning. Can’t wait to see how it turns out.

@taylorclogston, “A quiet person who talks too much.”  that sounds like me. My sister says I talk too much and it isn’t even important stuff I talk about.

Again thanks for the input and I will work on these changes when time finds me. (School and a job do become such a black hole.)

@taylorclogston, yeah I wasn’t always an INFJ or I never took the test before, but being an introvert is relatively new. I enjoy being with people, but I tend to hang towards the outskirts of a group or stick to myself. Thanks for the factory info, I guess I did go a bit far with it. I probably could cut a lot of the minor characters like you…[Read more]

@taylorclogston, What are ways that I could fix the whole inspection scene, attack, and world building? Using futuristic America I kinda thought I could get by that one I guess.

Alos, I am concerned about my word count. It is so small and I am afraid that if and when I reduce the chapter size the word count, and thus the book will get smaller a…[Read more]

@taylorclogston, WOW thank you so much! this is exactly the kind of critiques I need. I could see and tell that there are things that need to be fixed, but it’s hard for me to see them. I have not really had someone, other than myself as a writer, edit it. How coincidental is it that you work in a factory. On that note, how did I do with the whole…[Read more]

@scribbles thanks that definitely helps

@taylorclogston, just anything in general. My novella has only been edited (partially) by my siblings and a friend. I am totally open for any critiques that may be found.

thanks @scribbles, I think I got it. I reposted it in General writing. I don’t know how many people I can tag, so I only tagged a few.

@scribbles

@scribbles, gee thanks. I have no idea how to work with my computer. I will repost it in general writing. and I will fix the issue, I may need help…

@elizabeth, I am an INFJ-T. As of late (last fall) I have become more of an introvert. I also had a thread about this running a while back. Check it out here

@katthewriter, thank you for starting this thread. I keep forgetting to ask questions of my own about publishing. I thought I had it all, but today proved me wrong. I will keep looking. You know I remember reading once that there is this great big writers market book that can only be found at the library. that has lists and lists of agents. I…[Read more]

@jane-maree,

does it help that the only books on my shelf are LOTR, Wingfeather, Narnia, and Little House on the Prarie?