Personality, friendly and outgoing, but also pretty cautious and world-weary.
Slate: Wanders through the bookstore scanning the titles before he sees the group in the back reading. Walks up to them. “Um, hey, would any of you know where I could find a mystery book about some Christie lady? Or maybe by Christie. I don’t…[Read more]
Sure! Thanks for re-inviting me!
This looks like it’ll be a fantastic discussion. I wish I wrote reviews so I could chime in, but in the mean time I’ll just lurk…
<p style=”text-align: left;”>Sounds like fun! I think I’m going to take a stab at a paranormal fairytale sometime this week. Thank’s for keeping g this going,and I hope I can get more engaged. :)</p>
Oh dear! I just realized I’ve also disapeared!!!
Let’s wake everyone up with a question: what’s your current writing project?
I’d love to do this! Sounds like a blast!
I should rephrase that. I know you wanted to make some edits, and didn’t know if you had done what you wanted to do, or felt you needed to get it done (since yours is pretty good as is).
If no one is able to make up their mind on which story, pick jennythefaun’s. I’ve already had my turn. 🙂
You could even say it was…
A statement that promptly led
To a gold rush excursion
Of eager young wordsmiths mining
For a satisfying conclusion.
So tell me, are you pleased,
To see so much about cheese?
I love it! It’s so cute! In fact, it has inspired me to new levels of artistry…
It might sound cheesy
To call cheese holy
But it has holes, complainers! Please,
I think it’s easy
To mean it fully
When you say you eat holy cheese.
That was amazing!!! Well done. You have beautiful prose and foreshadowing. And you used my disappearing woman! 🙂
The only thing I would do is give Noss a little more initiative. For the most part, I felt like he was merely watching and commenting on the events, instead of actively trying to find the truth out.
The easiest fix is…[Read more]
Hmm, now you’re the second person to say the same thing. Guess that means I need to go re-write that. 🙂
Oh dearie me, that’s a lot to fix. Great suggestion, though! I’ll see if I can alter the story to make that happen. Let’s just hope I can do all that in the word limit. I was already pushing it. I also just took…[Read more]
Good point! I didn’t really mean for the code to be “the one thing” that solved the case, just one of many facts. I changed the order of their conversation around a bit. See if that clarifies things. 🙂
Another thing I could do to make this work better is change the old line when Wayne showed Christian how to open the door. Instead of…[Read more]
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Totally go ahead and wait. I’ll post it soon, but I just figured out I need to cut a ton of words.
That sounds like such a cool idea! I can’t wait to read yours!!!
What’s spec-fic? I’m not as familiar with writing terms as I ought to be. Regardless, I love your idea and can’t wait to see you run with it!
All this is excellent! I’m actually almost done with the first draft. Jenny, do you want me to post it now, or wait until your idea is further along so it doesn’t affect your thoughts?
Also, as a fair warning I’ve been shivering through writing this. It may be too dark to use, but it’s hard to tell from the writer’s…[Read more]
I honestly love these ideas!!! Jenny, don’t feel bad about taking the story if you want too. We could also both write it out and deside which one’s better afterwards. Up to you.
In terms of suspects, we need to have 3 suspects:
- The “obvious suspect” that both the detective and the sidekick soon veer away from.
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