Zachary Holbrook

@toklaham-veruzia Congrats! 🙂

And great job, everybody!!

@toklaham-veruzia *facepalm* Why am I not surprised? *claps* Well done, Zachary.

And great job, everyone! 😀

@hope-ann

Ooh, perfect! I’m doing some of this in my own story (which is fantasy, granted, but does have other races in it).

I think the first thing to keep in mind is that you will almost never be able to avoid offending everyone. There’s always going to be someone who takes something the wrong way. So don’t freak out too much to start with,…[Read more]

@taylorclogston I would have expected most of the book to take place in ’72, which @toklaham-veruzia confirmed. I think I’ll have to watch the rest of the story play out before I can say for sure whether I’m a fan of that technique (starting the book on the edge of the climax) or not. Like Daeus said, it did get me involved right away. The…[Read more]

@caseybold @taylorclogston @toklaham-veruzia @allertingthbs @jennythefaun

I’ve honestly never thought about the pros and cons of revealing or hiding aspects of a character early on in a story. As I’m thinking about it, it seems the one thing I’d avoid is the completely mysterious character.

In Six of Crows, all the character are introduced with…[Read more]

@toklaham-veruzia I’m ashamed to say I wasn’t expecting much when I saw it was fantasy flash fic, but that was great. Good job evoking worldbuilding without making me feel like you were just using this as a teaser for a full book.

This is @toklaham-veruzia:

Dilemma: I’ve got conflicting feedback on my blurb. Some say I should change it, others that I shouldn’t.

I’m in search of opinionated people to help clear me out of this muddle.

Here’s what I had:

In the beginning, the Songkiller sang chaos into the fabric of the world. Now, he’s returning to finish his dark symphony…

Exton hunts to red…[Read more]

@toklaham-veruzia Yeah, I found out how to make a link to a signup right after asking most people I know if they’d like to subscribe…the joys of being a beginner XP Do you want to guinea pig this one? http://eepurl.com/gV_jbr

Lol, yep! I’ll put that on my writer resume.

@toklaham-veruzia Congrats on your repeated publishing! (and I’m happy I finally got to one of these before it was too late).

Your story made me chuckle, so points for that =P It feels exactly like the kind of stuff I wrote in high school.

@toklaham-veruzia @kr-lalonde

Hey. . . are we still even alive?

@toklaham-veruzia

Yeah, revising can be difficult!

Hey guys! Check this out. This might help fill some of the voids some of you have been missing in the guilds. Be sure to sign up for a word war group if you plan to continue participating.

@samantha-pen @hgm_barnes18 @heather-drabant @kb-writer @inspirewrite @duskflower @kjames0813 @ireneadler
@kari-karast @i-david
@donna-darling @kr-lalonde…[Read more]

Hey guys. I’m sorry it’s been so dead around here. Definitely a large portion my fault. Kind of hard to keep a guild running when the guild master falls off the face of the earth.

However, it has come to my attention recently that this is not relegated to Knaphollow only. A couple of the guild’s are completely without leaders, most are floun…[Read more]