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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
When she paled and took a step back, Nithel straightened, eyes concerned.
“Are you – not afraid? This – makes others – afraid. I hurt – with this.” As the heat flicked over her palms, his chest skipped beats. In all honesty, he was terrified. He had no doubt that it made others afraid, or that she had the ability to hurt with those hands.
But…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
“Come,” the boy said to her softly, offering fruit to her.
This boy was testing her limits. And he was looking at her with an emotion that she had not seen in a long time. Was that truly-?
Mayra paled and took a step back. She didn’t want this. She didn’t deserve this kindness, this – compassion. Why? Why was he so good to her? Why was he…[Read more]
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Your profile banner is beautiful Neasa!
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@kimlikesart
Hi Kimmi! Thank you so much, I love red roses so it’s kind of my theme now 🙂 I love your banner too, I like the nature theme. I’m doing okay, thanks for asking though honestly the past few weeks have been hard for me tbh. How are you doing today? -
Allo! You’re welcome, they’re lovely.
What do you like about red roses?
And thank you.I’m sorry. Is there anything I can pray for you about? Or just pray?
I’m doing pretty good. We just got back from vacation early this morning, and now I’m getting some school stuff ready for next week. -
Hello @kimlikesart 🙂
Thanks for asking! Its quite complicated haha but I like red roses because they played a big part in strengthening my relationship with God. You could call it a mystical experience 🙂 but ya I love the colour red and red roses are now my favourite.
And your very welcome 🙂 that sounds lovely, where did you go on your…[Read more] -
Red roses are beautiful.
We went to Disney World, and did stuff there. And we went to a beach! That was really fun. (:
My little sister and I built a sandcastle, and walls and trenches… Finding shells and swimming was fun too.How was the retreat?
What are you studying in college?
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@kimlikesart
That’s so cool! Sounds like you had a lot of fun. I have never been to Disneyland (or world) myself. We went to Paris a few years ago and I begged my family to let us go to Disneyland but they said no haha. I was so upset XD. I love beaches too, they’re so much fun.
The retreat was so good, I really enjoyed myself. It was way out in…[Read more]
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Ooh, France. What are some of your favourite things you remember from there?
The retreat sounds lovely. The mountains, and cnountryside. <3 And meeting lovely people.How long have you been interested in films?
And thank you!
I will be learning how to be an entrepreneur, and how to write quality novels on deadline.…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Nithel glanced up as the girl touches his hands, her touch gentle, hesitant. She shook her head, as if afraid. Not wanting to impose. “You – eat,” She let go of him, and pointed at herself. “Me – fine.”
His brows lifted the smallest bit. He hadn’t expected her to refuse food. He breathed in and out, eyes looking at her face, the blood. His…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Per request, I have updated the Scene Questions below to include Rose’s suggestion (@rose-colored-fancy) …
…AND I have added one additional question that goes to the value of this fun exercise. 😎 12 Disciples – 12 Tribes of Israel – 12 Gates in the Heavenly City – 12 – Eggs in a Dozen… (Okay, I’ll admit I got carried away with this last…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
The boy was offering her fruit. He looked at her hesitantly, then looked away. She wondered what he made of her. She had hurt his friend after all. Yet he was still offering her food. What was left of it anyway.
She stared at him carefully, then pushed his hands away, shaking her head. “You – eat,” she answered. Then she pointed at herself. “Me -…[Read more]
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Fitz replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
@rebekah12 @skylarynn @lonathecat
“I have no doubt that magic of a sort was used to bring us here, but power of this magnitude is beyond any on my world. Unless the nature of magic itself is different on your worlds – which it might very well be – I suspect it to be beyond any there as well. Though…” an inquisitive grin arose on Glenesh’s face,…[Read more]
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Brian Stansell replied to the topic Audio Cinema in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Hi Joelle,
Whew! It has been a long and busy week.
Trying to catch up on responding to posts.So, let me clarify a little. These snippets of scenes are extracted from anywhere in a longer work, so they will often be introduced without context or backstory. We are just looking at the intrinsic value of a single scene, which m…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
Nithel stares a bit at them, then glances to the food, intending to hand it out.
He goes first to Brendin, offering him a loaf of mushed bread. If the man doesn’t take it, Nithel will lay it on the ground before him. His manor is like that of a servant, when facing Brendin.
He then moves to Jericho, manor more relaxed, but still formal as he…[Read more]
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K.M. Small replied to the topic Strategies Outlining Epic Fantasies/Giant Novels? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 10 months ago
@skylarynn thank you!
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Rose replied to the topic Completely Useless Character Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 11 months ago
So pretty! I love that design!
Lemme see:
1) Name: I think something Celtic or Nordic. Caomhain? Ardan? Or maybe Killian or Rowan?
2) Age: Mid-twenties, I think.
3) Career/Role in Story: I think he’s a leader, maybe one of the protagonists, or maybe a love interest?
4) Personality: Serious, determined, responsible, may have a soft…[Read more]
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Emma Walker replied to the topic Completely Useless Character Game in the forum Characters 4 years, 11 months ago
@skylarynn he looks so cool
cant do him right now Sry
and hey y’all my pictures work nowww
so Star Wars peeps I got another fanfic chara for y’all.
since it is Star Wars, I thoughts I’d add a few question things to go with the originals. So here’s the entirety as a list
- Name
- Home Planet
- Age
- Time period of age (first year of the Clo…
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K.M. Small started the topic Strategies Outlining Epic Fantasies/Giant Novels? in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
So, I have a dilemma regarding my 200k epic fantasy novel that I’m hoping to get some thoughts on. But first, a little background:
I wrote the second draft of my epic fantasy last year. Rewrite might be a better word, since it was radically different from the first draft. I outlined most of it, though the plan for the second half of the book was…[Read more]
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Lona replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Elina raised an eyebrow. “Magic?”
Magic was used to heal, and in rare cases, to create. So, she supposed that the castle could have been created through magic, although it would have taken ten people at least, all with an immense amount of experience. However, that still didn’t explain how their little group had been…[Read more]
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Rebekah12 replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.2 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Uhhhhhh hello??
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic “Escape from Ackerley” a collaborative story in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Thwapling told me what’s happening, so I thought I’d come over here and tag some RP peeps. 😉
@this-is-not-an-alien @rose-colored-fancy @irishcelticredflowercrown @rusted-knight @kylie-wingfeather @arindown @skylarynn @kimlikesart @millennium
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Cathy replied to the topic Character Castle in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
*goes through everyone’s names ok Emily’s @millennium and @skylarynn was here for a while so Peter is…@CRAZYWRITER I THOUGHT YOU WERE A GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*
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Cathy replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Before he could think straight Alessio felt himself yanked forward, dizzy with the noise, images, memories, present all jumbled. There was something he…couldn’t rememb–He nearly lost his balance shoved through the hole and darted up disoriented, prepared to fend off a blow.
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Joelle Stone replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Malvat studied the woman.
This is why they call me the Blood Mink.
Her thoughts flitted across her brain, her mind barely registering the words.
“No one – come near,” she hissed, the words slow and forced as she took up a guarded position, powers swirling around her body. “Or – I – hurt.”
People were drawing weapons. The air quickly escalated…[Read more]
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Neasa replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Ah okay sorry about that😬 No big deal, I’ll rewrite it so 🙂
Mayra was being carried. She could feel the sensation of someone holding her with a strong grip.
She opened her eyes to see a man holding her. His face was blurring in her vision. She groaned and weakly shoved at him. She didn’t need help. She needed no one’s assis…[Read more]
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Kimmi replied to the topic Fantasy Character Castle Chronicles n.1 in the forum Fantasy Writers 4 years, 11 months ago
Nithel grabbed the bag with one hand, clutching underneath one of Alessio’s arms with the other. Dragging him toward where everyone else was going. More dust. It was like the castle was coughing, or growling at them in rage…
Nithel shoved Alessio through the hole, and barreled out behind him. The light was so bright Nithel was almost blinded.…[Read more]
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