@olivia

Hey, sorry for the long wait for the reply, life has been nuts for me lately.

Yep, it should also be noted (though it rarely is from what I have seen) that he also makes special note of food at times. Both food and song are such a large part of a culture that we are blind to it until we go into another culture see how they are…[Read more]

@olivia

Pretty much, unless you are Tolkein, then half of your story is song anyway XD.

Yeah, every few years California decides to spontaneously combust. Never had to evac myself, but I was right below the line that did, and I have seen the fires crawl across the mountains right next to us.

I have a really hard time…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

While I appreciate your concern, your energy here is misplaced. This is a forum for Christian writers to write about characters – characters that can encompass the entire scope of humanity. This is not a forum dedicated to Christian relationship advice, nor was such advice asked, do not turn this into something it isn’t.

@irishcelticredflowercrown

You are very welcome ^_^ I am glad you found it helpful.

haha, fair enough!

Kylo Ren is a good example of how not to write a redemption arc, lol. And I love it when I give people ideas XD

You know, that’s ok. That is what this forum and the editing process are for. We are all human, with our own…[Read more]

@olivia

haha, I’m glad you enjoy it! I was looking through the pictures on my computer to try and find one I liked and I saw this one and knew it was perfect XD

@olivia

Isn’t that what stories are, just with a lot more context? XD

It may sound weird, but I kinda get it. Sun for so long gets boring. I had a teacher in highschool who was originally from New York, and she couldn’t understand how excited and energized her students got when there was rain, lol.

That’s good! Honestly, I am much…[Read more]

@olivia

Writing music is still very much a form of writing. The stories that songs tell are much more compact than books, but that does not make them less valid by any means.

“In the winter here in Northwestern Ontario where I live, we skate and play hockey all the time. My brother and I usually play hockey with our friends at the outdoor…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

“However I don’t want to be put in a situation where the readers have long figured who he actually is or when it is revealed, it doesn’t have an effect on them at all. I guess what I’m asking is can something like this work? I know that there is secrecy and dishonesty between them, which would be a problem for the act…[Read more]

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Thanks. And yeah, I’ve been doing that too.

Testing to see if I can post anything…

@irishcelticredflowercrown

Hey, so here is the last part of my critique 🙂

“Pain rocketed up my spin, through my nervous system, and into my brain. I shrieked, falling to my knees as I clutched my head. Suddenly, I was pulled backwards by a rough force. Agony sliced through my forearms as they were suddenly pinned to the wall on either side of m…[Read more]

@irishcelticredflowercrown

You are welcome, though I don’t feel like I actually answered your question, lol. Now that I know what direction you are going with it, I have a lot of thoughts about it, if you are interested.

@obrian-of-the-surface-world

Wow, that is really cool. I have only browsed a little but that is freaking awesome! Thank you for the link 🙂