Hey guys i prolly wont be able to continue writing on storyembers for at least the next three months for football. Know that i’m with y’all in spirit, but i simply dont have the time.

Crazywriter out.

Shoot, it made me send it twice.Sorry!

Those are great stories and songs!

I also like Immovable our Hope remains. Its a great song, and i highly recommend it

All your stories and songs are awesome! I just went on a four mile hike with my dad which was awesome.

I also like Jesus Paid it all, Rock of Ages, and one whose lyrics were written long ago but whose music is more recent, Immovable our Hope Remains. Please listen to this one in particular, it is awesome and christ centered.

So i just choose a scene from my WIP?

So i have a question. Whats your three favorite songs to sing on sunday.

I’ll go first.

All i have is christ (Sovereign Grace Music)

Behold the Lamb(Passion)

In Christ Alone(Getty’s)

@joelle-stone, @obrian-of-the-surface-world, @everyone else.

Just hopped on now. In regard to the whole love at first sight, i think Brian, you hit the nail on the head. Biblically incorrect, logically stupid, it is a notion designed to fool people, especially younger ones, including myself. I think of when Paul tells Timothy, “Flee from youthful…[Read more]

Guys we gotta keep this alive. Anybody there?

@joelle-stone @mischevious-thwapling

Gavin Thunderfoot, light-headed from dehydration, had been stumbling around the tunnels for hours, trying to get away from that dragon creature. Heaven knows where the thing was now.

He stumbled on a rock in his path, and fell to the ground, content to stay there, his dull headache growing by the minute, until he could barely keep…[Read more]

Gavin slowly walked down the hall, listening, and hoping the human voices would return, so he could be sure he was going the right way.

He became aware of a strange smell in his journey through the maze of tunnels, and wondered what it was. He soon found out however, as he came face to face with a dragon.

Thanks for the advice and I will seriously consider it.

And when I said not having the time and money for the stuff you mentioned, I didn’t mean that I don’t have time to write, which I do have some for. I meant more that I may not have the pedigrees and bells and whistles that more experienced self publishers have.

But thanks, and I will con…[Read more]

Ok thanks guys.

The advice was great but guys, as I’m finishing up my freshman year in high school, in the middle of a move, and will soon be tied up in football, I have neither the time nor the money to do all that, with a team, and the other stuff. While I don’t want this to be rushed, I wrote this book so that there would be better Chr…[Read more]

Sorry, i should have specified. At least what i’ve read is that teenage writers have those odds, just cause they dont have as much experience or talent.

Gavin stopped dead in his tracks when he heard his own name being uttered by a dark voice, its words echoing off cold stone walls, that had stood for millenia.

“Gavin Thunderfoot. Halt.”

For a moment Gavin considered doing just that, but deep inside him was a feeling that urged him to run. So without further ado, he started sprinting through the…[Read more]

Thunder coughed, the dust from the old tomes settling around him.

Where am i? What is this place?

He had no memory of entering this dark room, and in fact, he didnt remember much at all, except his name. Gavin Thunderfoot. Or just Thunder.

He pushed himself out of the massive pile of books, old scrolls, and ancient writings tumbling across the…[Read more]

Thunder coughed, the dust from the old tomes settling around him.

Where am i? What is this place?

He had no memory of entering this dark room, and in fact, he didnt remember much at all, except his name. Gavin Thunderfoot. Or just Thunder.

He pushed himself out of the massive pile of books, old scrolls, and ancient writings tumbling across the…[Read more]

Ferguson’s head swiveled when he heard the deep grunt of the funny-antler-thing, which sounded like a gravelly, “Mornin.”

Ferguson stared at him for a long time.

“Enjoy your sleep, bucko?” Ferguson said, with more than a twinge of sarcasm in his voice.

This wierdo is gonna slow us all down. He can’t really fend for himself, and if a bear or…[Read more]

Congrats!

@joelle-stone @this-is-not-an-alien

So when i introduce my character, where in the castle should i start?

Thanks for filling me in! Could you give me a list of the existing characters? I know the names Nithel and Jericho, but details?

my character

Name: Gavin Thunderfoot, or ‘Thunder’

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Abilities: Good swordsman, natural leader, physical strength and speed, and high intelligence

Demeanor: Has mood swings, dep…[Read more]