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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 7 months ago
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 7 months ago
Thanks!
Charging them head on at night is too dangerous. We can’t see well in the daytime, (why not?) let alone night, and we don’t know the terrain.”
I think the reason I had put in was there was a great amount of fog that had descended in the plateau and the lowlands it overlooked, so daytime visibility had been shot.…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks so much! I’ve got Chapter 5 finished, so when you get done with chapter 4, I’ll send it over. It’s a real tearjerker!
Sorry, if this is overloading you, but I can’t thank you enough.
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
@joelle-stone here you go!
Chapter 4
In the morning, a gray fog had settled over the fort and the surrounding terrain, minimizing visibility, and giving the land an eery look. Abner woke early, and patrolled the walls, straining his eyes for any sight of the enemy, but the stubborn fog kept them blind.
Lieutenant North joined him,…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic How far is too far? in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
Hey Jared!
Its an interesting idea, and the skeleton of the story is great. I think something you would need to ponder, however, is the biblical themes you portray. Now I know no novel, written by a Christian or not, is imperfect, but it would do Christian authors well to portray biblical truth as best they can.
Now maybe you…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
Thanks! Chapter 4 is almost ready!
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
For me it’s how Lewis ties them all together at the end. It’s a beautiful picture of a valiant end, while still correctly portraying the sovereignty of the lion over it all, and his power of Tash. Perhaps it awakens in me longing for the culmination of all Christians battles, and the final sight of our king.
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
It was technically a high ankle sprain, and that’s why we thought it would be so much worse cause there usually pretty bad.
He’s a Puritan, but a modern guy put the book into modern English.
The last battle. By far. Not a reflection on the others being bad, which by no means they are, but the last battle is just SO good
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
So mine wasn’t just the twisting your ankle going down the stairs that goes away after a half hour. It was during a football exercise and it rolled outwards an popped. It’s dramatically better than it should be, a testament (again) to Gods Grace, but I’m still wearing an ankle brace and it still is tender.
I’ve been reading…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
Im doing well! All that’s been of consequence recently is a rolled ankle and rainy skies.
There is a family in our church, and the husband had a brain tumor that by medical evaluation was incurable. However there’s a holistic experimental treating facility in Scottsdale AZ that they went too, and it really was an act of God, who…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 8 months ago
Im not sure. I don’t think I’ve heard of that before. What is it?
Yes, I believe we probably have a lot more of common beliefs, but it’s very hard to communicate just through words on a screen. Yeah, anytime you have questions I’m just here, and I’ll prolly think up some for you. XD
Anytime! It looks lik…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
Thanks a ton Joelle! I can’t count how many grammatical errors I face palmed myself over. I really can be airheaded sometimes. XD.
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
@obrian-of-surface-world
No, I don’t think God created people for the exclusive purpose for hell. I think Romans 1 puts it quite well in that he ‘turns them over’ to their evil desires. However, I think it is dangerous to say that he is not sovereign over that. He may not create his creatures for that express purpose, but when they break his l…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
And this is by no means a perfect illustration, but I beleive it portays the situation somewhat accurately
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
Your post disappeared but here’s the response I wrote.
So I’m tight for time right now, but just in response to some of your stuff, I don’t think I completely understand the illustration of the billion dollars. I think it would be better illustrated by a very rich man going into the city streets and saying to him w…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
Agreed. May man be fools, only let God be glorified. And yes, without scripture, we are blind men in the dark. Thanks be to God for his Word.
In response to number 1, yes i do believe they were saved. I think Hebrews 11 makes it clear it is by faith they were ‘counted as righteous.’ But i think the emphasis is…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
@joelle-stone @denali-christianson
Here’s Chapter 3. Just work on it at your leisure. Thanks again for helping!
Chapter 3
Abner entered the private stables reserved for royalty, urgency in his every step. Bedecked in battle gear, the moon glinted through the narrow windows of the stables, glimmering off the cool metal armor. Having…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Friendly debates here! in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
First of all, excellently made argument! The use of scripture is great, as it should be the only thing used in primary theological debates.
So when you address God limiting his atonement, also known as ‘limited atonement’ I think we disagree. Also, it should be noted that the use of limited is a poor rep…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
We definitely should!!!!
Yeah, we loved filming. It’s funny tho, cause whenever you show someone your movie, it never really means what it meant to you and the other people who made it cause it’s the experience that’s just as much fun as the actual work.
Now what did you do for music? We could never post our works just c…[Read more]
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Crazywriter replied to the topic Talk room in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, maybe one day we can do a joint project 😂😂.
Yeah basically we just had a camera and put it together on IMovie. You sound like you got more specialized stuff. Once you got it on YouTube send me the link!
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