Crazywriter

@annabelle-batie

Hi!!!!! I’m so sorry it took me this long to get back to you… summer…

Anyway, I would love for you to join!

A list of people:

@crazywriter = Janner

@mischievous-thwapling = Kalmar/Tink

@arindown = Leeli

@wingiby-iggiby = Artham & Maraly

@backwardslivewriter = Sara (Cobbler)

@valkyrie-falk = Thorn (I believe that’s…[Read more]

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I have found…*gasps* a language room?! I might have babbled incoherently about grammar structure when I found this place 😂. I think the phrase is “geek out”? If so, that’s what I’m going to do.

I’ve been working on a language for about ten years, but it’s been really getting refined in this past year or so. Thing is, I’m the only one who’s s…[Read more]

I recently joined SE. Time to resurrect some rooms, bwahaha! 😇😂

Would fire breathing turtles be classified as dragons, turtles, or something else? If the turtle is a dragon, and dragons aren’t turtles, could I still call it a fire breathing turtle or would it be a shelled dragon?

On a more serious note, do y’all understand villains better if y…[Read more]

@crazywriter. I am, for a little bit.

@crazywriter,

Of course!

Ahhh, that makes sense! Fog tends to disperse with light, though. You might want to add a bit of something to make it clear that the fog is what causes low visibility, not something else. 😉

*fp* I have this sinking feeling that it’s going to be one of those love/hate relationships where the author side of me is like,…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

Alrighty, time to finish this up!

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As night fell, and the sun slipped beneath the horizon, the fort bustled with activity. Various measures were being taken to maximize it’s security, and breastworks were being constructed about twenty yards from the walls. No plan had been decided on, but Abner, Major Maguire, and Commander W…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

The plan is to be done with Ch. 4 by next week! 🙂

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With shouts of triumph, the fort’s defenders welcomed the reinforcements. It took the company of almost 500 men more than an hour to get inside the fort, simply because of the narrow gate, and the many wagons of supplies.

Major Maguire led the column, but broke away to s…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

OH NO IS IT THAT ONE YOU MENTIONED?!

Sorry, if this is overloading you, but I can’t thank you enough.

Hey, no problem! I have time specifically set apart for critiquing, so it’s just a matter of whether I’m diligent or not. 😛

@crazywriter

Sorry it took me so long to get around to this. *fp* Life is nuts. 😛 Anyway! Same format:

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In the morning, a gray fog had settled over the fort and the surrounding terrain, minimizing visibility, and giving the land an eery eerie look. Abner woke early, and patrolled the walls, straining his eyes for any sight of the enemy, but…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

Swaggy!! Send it over whenever you’re ready. 🙂

@crazywriter,

Ok, let’s get this puppy finished up!

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Abner wiped sweat off his brow, and examined the horizon. The detail had been riding for much of the day, and Abner suspected the fort to be somewhere nearby. Dusk approached, and darkness was settling over the land. The men strained their eyes to see anything so much as a light or torch,…[Read more]

@crazywriter

OK, well, all the more reason to be glad you’re doing well.

Ah, yes! That’s good; I’m glad people do that.

Huh. I’ve never heard someone say that. It is an amazingly written book! Do you like the writing, the story, the allegory, all of it? I have trouble choosing. I might have to go with The Magician’s Nephew or the Horse and His…[Read more]

@crazywriter

Eesh, ugly. Sorry about that! I’m glad you’re feeling better. So is a rolled ankle between a twist and a sprain? (Sorry again, though not sorry: I never grew out of curiosity. :P) Oooh, let’s talk about God’s grace: my brother was in a car accident which probably should have killed him, and 6 months later was completely well and able…[Read more]

@crazywriter Oh, wow! Yes, we certainly do serve a great God! I’m so happy for that family. Uh-oh, though: a twisted ankle. 🙁 (is there a difference between rolled and twisted?) How’d that happen?

Hi Rebekah! I don’t think I’ve had the pleasure. 🙂 Nice to meet you. Fantasy is cool, do you have traditional or non-traditional creatures, or…[Read more]

Hello folks! and by that I mean @joelle-stone and @crazywriter, since Denali is gone for Lent and I can’t see that anyone else is very active here:

How’s writing? How’s life?

Hey Peter (@crazywriter ),

Are you going to participate in this year’s Resonant Themes Summit?

Just wondering what your plans were.  My wife’s birthday is on the 22nd, so I will miss part of it, but I bought the set that allows me to go back later and catch up.  Hope to get to see you there.

I think we are more aligned in most aspects of this t…[Read more]

@crazywriter,

Here we go again! I’ve set aside Tuesdays for editing/critiquing, so I should be able to get through your chapters a lot faster than before. 🙂

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Hours later, Abner was riding southeast, Breanon’s hooves pounding the cobbled road. A group of ten cavalry officers rode behind him, all seasoned veterans with grim faces. Cold air b…[Read more]