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@crazywriter,

Of course!

Ahhh, that makes sense! Fog tends to disperse with light, though. You might want to add a bit of something to make it clear that the fog is what causes low visibility, not something else. 😉

*fp* I have this sinking feeling that it’s going to be one of those love/hate relationships where the author side of me is like, “OY THAT WAS BRILLIANT!!!” and the reader side is going to be like, “OY I HATE THIS MAN WHYYYYYYY!!!” XD