Wingiby Iggiby replied to the topic Anyone in the mood to critique someone? I gotta little story! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
Thank you so much!!!! 😀 And thanks for reading it! 🙂
Good job. I can almost feel the fire burning in the hearts of those men and women. May they never be forgotten.🤧
I’m so glad you found it so vivid! It was just what I was aiming for. 😉 And I totally agree.
Wingiby Iggiby started the topic Anyone in the mood to critique someone? I gotta little story! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months ago
So, I don’t know if this would be considered a flash fiction (I think it’s too long) or a short story (I think its too short). Maybe its a hybrid! 😛 Anyway, I wanted critique on it — uplifting critique, of course. Anything grammatical, but mostly having to do with the story as a whole. I don’t really know how to paraphrase what I mean, LOL…[Read more]
I’m so sorry to leave you hanging!!! Please excuse my extreme lack of participation! And @kylie-wingfeather , I think a two-day hiatus sounds totally fine! Also, @everybody, I might join back on after that hiatus; I’ll have to see. I’ve been a bit busy lately, so it all depends. Anyway, TTFN!
Pacing is NOT weird!!! In fact, y’know, in like all movies when someone’s thinking, they’re pacing. I think it probably helps stimulate you, and I’ve found that I like to walk in circles until I’m dizzy when I’m reading a poem or reciting memory verses. Also, I use “like” way too often, ha ha, so I get the “literally” thing. 😉 And YES!…[Read more]
@rose-colored-fancy (@and everybody else)
Aw man, Liorah and Dan would have been awesome together!!! Seriously, we’d have had “unusually high levels of sass.” 😛 But I’m afraid I am little too busy right now to get back involved 🙁 I’m so sorry! Thanks for tagging, though.
Also, I have been peeking in (not being creepy! Not being creepy!) every…[Read more]
LOL, blame Liorah! I planned to make it a standalone, but Liorah refused to cooperate (as usual) and I had to change more than half of the book.
XD! Liorah’s more trouble than I initially thought! 😛
XD, Thanks! My first draft of my first book was 72k, but I have way, way too many filler scenes, and I skipped over a bunch of…
Hi Wingiby! So awesome to see you here again!
I love that story idea! I’d totally read it! I like how you have a sort of jungle-ish setting, that would be so cool to read about!
Howdy! And thanks! I really liked the jungle idea too; in fact, the idea came about after I and my family watched a video about Nepal’s sherpas on Y…[Read more]
Aw, thanks a million (‘specially ’bout the Tiger-Madman, LOL)! I’m glad you’d read it, ’cause why’d I bother writin’ somethin’ nobody’d read?
^Ok, that’s how I actually talk in real life, LOL. Do you? I’ve noticed I tend to cut words short and add contractions, and now I’m eager to incorporate that into my writing more, ha ha.
Hi y’all! I’ve been absent from the forum for a little bit, but I decided to make a reappearance! 😉 I saw this topic and thought, hmmm, this would probably be a good place to test my new fantasy idea on before I decide I’m not going to write it actually.
So, here is my blurb/synopsis/whatever! Btw, all of y’all’s stories sound amazing, and I’m…[Read more]
Hey y’all! Sorry, but I don’t think I can do this “write” (get the pun? 😛 ) now, bc I am cutting back on screen time (screens!! AHHH!) and have other stuff that needs attending to . . . anyway, I might drop in at some point! Oh, and Thwap, you could post your chapters in snippets if that would…[Read more]
Your profile picture is AMAZING! Did you draw it?
Thank you!! And yes, I drew it — but I do have to admit that I can’t draw realistically without a reference photo, XD
Ah, yes. Welcome to my world. I can’t listen to music like a normal person anymore XD But, I have gotten attached to songs I don’t even really like because the…
As if it were happening in another world, a dream in my subconsciousness, I felt the arm pull away from me, and I realized I had been squeezing it so hard my knuckles were white. As my mind slowly got over the shock, I noticed that the bullet had come to a rolling stop. Gavril stood up next to me, and I carefully got to my…[Read more]
Haha, I “randomly insert myself” into conversations SO OFTEN. XD Sometimes I wonder if it gets annoying to have someone hovering over your shoulder waiting for a chance to talkatively take the stage. 😛
I never even thought of it in that way, LOL! But yeah, I was sorta waiting for a chance to jump in, XD *awkward pause*
Do you hav…
Thank y’all so much! I got the basic idea from… somewhere? I don’t remember, but I read the basic idea somewhere and expanded on it. I think it may be a lot of fun. *Evil chuckle*
Totally! I think I need to actually go through all my characters with that question: would you give your life for a bunch of strangers?
LOL! I’m us…
First to come to mind is Tiree (or Tyree, still figuring out how I want to spell it . . . )! She is a jack-of-all-trades, you might say: decoder, code-maker, intelligence agent, cook, manager, and secretary, XD She also naturally likes to stay busy.
Who, if they were splitting a bagel with somebody, would take the thickest half for…[Read more]
*Bangs head on table* Thank you!!
Oh, and how many are here still?
Did I forget anybody? Please forgive my slow mind!! If this is right, we actually have an even number. It’s four and four.
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