@mischievous-thwapling

Thank you! I’m glad I didn’t sound like that 😉

He he! Thx! I just have a hard time writing sternly, if you get what I mean 😛

Sure! You can have her wake up! It doesn’t matter how long or short your posts are — I’ll still read ’em 😉

Um, I know I’m not Cathy, but I don’t think they got separated. I might be wrong t…[Read more]

And I forgot to say the reason Ahab was moving for the door was because he figured now was a good time to get away from all the others and to find a way out while a stun-stick wasn’t being jabbed in his chest 😉

Ahab was knocked out quicker than he’d expected, if he’d been expecting it, that is. He had watched as the fluorescent lettered wall shattered in a blue flame. It was mesmerizing, and then all went quite black. Only a few times in his life had he ever been knocked out cold:

When that bully Briminy Hinge at the play-ground at school had conked him…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Yes! The trash compactor! I just couldn’t remember what it was called… And I get the long explanations! Sometimes it’s fun just to hear them, like (sorry, I just HAVE too) when Vizzini in The Princess Bride couldn’t make up his mind, lol 😛

And I know! Why does crushing things always appeal to me? Unless it’s a large bug…[Read more]

@this-is-not-an-alien

Let me just say, no matter how dumb you think that is, it was HYSTERICAL!! Mr Look-At-My-Fabulous-Muscles Villain I am especially fond of, and the fact that you included the fact that the weakest is used for the test.

Now, of your two suggestions, I think I like the second. I don’t really see Ahab trying to rescue Colma,…[Read more]

Ok, I’m only on here again because I had an idea for the castle’s trap: what if it starts to push it’s book-laiden walls upon the characters?

Ya know, in an effort to squish them? Like the trash thing in A New Hope (sorry, only comparison I could think of)?

@this-is-not-an-alien

Your ideas sound great! I will probably make Ahab grab a book or two in a spur of inspiration — if he remains calm enough to have any, that is 😛

@mischievous-thwapling

I hope you’ll be able to get back on soon! But don’t feel pressured (just because I do at some times) 😉

And I am sure glad the nicer characters will…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

AHHHH!!!!! In fact, that is the exact reason that I am writing this folk tale! I know what I have to write, and even if I change that part later in my book, it needs to be written out for that to happen; but I am just not wanting to write it because I was having issues (I seem to have a lot of them…).

I know where my…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

Thank you! 🙂

@joelle-stone

Thank you! And I’m glad you caught those things — I would never have noticed, ’cause ya know, it’s me 😛

And yes! Davion just seemed to work for me!

And I understand the busy! Don’t worry ’bout it. 😉

@winter_rose

Man, that looks great! And the bubble was an awesome idea — we get the round aspect we were looking for, yet it doesn’t look like the Death Star and more like this amazing techy space-ship built by a gatrillionaire! It’s huge, right? I mean, big enough to sorta be like a planet itself; it’s gotta hold people from every planet’s…[Read more]

FENWICK’S TALE CONTINUED

(If you have any advice, please tell me! 😀 I hope it isn’t too long)

“Davion crested the knoll a few minutes before sunrise. He stood there, his robe billowing behind him and his hair whipping in the breeze — he had long brown hair, past his shoulders. It was then that he heard it. A soft, trilling sound. And i…[Read more]

@mischievous-thwapling

@joelle-stone

Thank you so much! I’m so glad you liked it 😉 And I’m afraid answers will have to wait — if I ever finish this book 😛

Kinnan: LOVE the descriptions, you make everything so vivid and real. Please post more soon! I know I’m rather late, but I finally made it back to this topic, lol.