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Per request, I have updated the Scene Questions below to include Rose’s suggestion (@rose-colored-fancy) …

…AND I have added one additional question that goes to the value of this fun exercise. 😎  12 Disciples – 12 Tribes of Israel – 12 Gates in the Heavenly City – 12 – Eggs in a Dozen… (Okay, I’ll admit I got carried away with this last one 😜)…Why shouldn’t there be a full dozen questions?

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Audio Cinema – Scene Questions (Updated August 1st, 2021)

1. Is there anything that stood out to you as intriguing about this scene?

2. What would you say the mood was of this scene?

3. What character(s) in this scene would you like to know more about?

4. Which character, if any, do you feel the most empathy toward in this scene alone?

5. Which of the following, as a reader, do you wish I had developed more fully in this scene?

a. Setting

b. Character thoughts and motivations

c. Character appearance and/or mood expressions

6. Do you feel that the dialogue in this scene flows or is mechanical and stilted?

7. Did you learn something in this scene that you wondered about in a previous scene?

8. Did this scene make you want to read more scenes? (Why or why not?)

9. Is there any part of the scene that you personally felt did not belong?

10. Is there a particular part of the scene that stood out to you as your favorite? (Why?)

11. What, if anything, would you change about this scene to make it more interesting to you?

12. Is there something in the author’s audio reading of the scene that you picked up on that you might not have noticed if you had just read the text alone silently to yourself?

————————– Audio Cinema Entries So Far ——–

Rose [tagged above] (27-July) submitted “Liorah’s scene from Bk 1: Ch 3, Sc 1” (See Post #136514)

@sparrowhawke – (25-June) Bethania submitted “Malar and Crin’s Scene” (See Post #135107)

@joelle-stone (12-July) Joelle submitted “Seen” (See Posts #135859 for Link and #135792 for text)

@bclarke – (13-July) Bronte submitted “Jade’s Side Story” (See Post #135900)

I am not including my own 3 entries in the above list. Y’all have, perhaps, heard enough from me… 😊😋 …at least for a while, anyway.

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