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@parker  @ajaj2000

You’re welcome!

@andrew, Thanks! I’ve made up lots of strange creatures that live beneath flat earth.

I hope it all works out for you ok, @caleb-e-king

@caleb-e-king, I’m sure my stories are much slower than yours. I know I will hate having to go back and rewrite lots. Does your Beta Reader have any advice as to how to quicken the pace? If he does, try to use them. If he doesn’t, well then I don’t know what you do.

Do you have multiple beta readers? Do they all say that it is slow, or just one?

Hi, @katthewriter! Vip (my tiny dragon) and I welcome you to Story Embers, or Emberia, as I call it.

@caleb-e-king, its good that he is being free to criticize. Even if only a few readers think it is slow, you still want to appeal to even them. I’m sure it would be hard to go back and change everything (I can see myself having a hard time with that), but I guess that’s what you need to do. I hope you can fix it easily!

@ajaj2000, parker tagged you wrong above, so I thought I would tag you so you see.

@ajaj2000, ok good!

@bigideaskc, you’re welcome.

@itisastarrynight, you’re welcome!

@bigideaskc, cool!

Vip, my tiny pet dragon, and I welcome you, @itisastarrynight!

@kayla-joy, I don’t see anything bad about that. It sounds good.

@andrew, your forest sounds really neat!

@steward-of-the-pen, your story sounds cool!

@the-fledgling-artist, you’re welcome!

@evelyn  @wordsmith

It is cool!

@the-fledgling-artist, yep. I might draw some more some time.

@wordsmith, ok cool. That’s probably what I would post on mine.

@thetessinator  @the-fledgling-artist

I’ve made two small comic books. They were very dumb, and not really funny at all.

@wordpress, what do you post on your blog?