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WHOA!! Has it really been THREE MONTHS since I posted in this thread?!  . . .

Okay, it has.

Tell me what you all think of this poem.

Rainbow in Waterdrops

Come down…[Read more]

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This one is another very personal to me.  Critique and enjoy!

Twenty-One
Sometimes I don’t think I qualify
For twenty-one
Weighed down by the times I have to try
I’ve never…[Read more]

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Okay, I guess I’ll post in this thread when I remeber too! LOL.

Here is my latest poem. Critique and enjoy!

True North

It seems that all the world has lost it’s…[Read more]

@nuetrobolt, that sounds like an ambitious goal! Good luck!

@erynne, thank you so much! I appreciate it. Also, excellent goal!

Sorry for not responding soon; I forgot to check my notifications on SE.

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Don’t really know what to say about this one. Any and all critiques welcome!

My Morning Song (What you will say to me)

The sunlight is dawning
And though I am still…[Read more]

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Hope you all enjoy!

All of the Pieces
All of my pieces I’d scattered o’er
The cracks in the surface of my stone heart floor
All of my days were lost so empty
Then You came and…[Read more]

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This one I have been trying to finish for over a year now. Critque and enjoy!

Resolutions

I wrote my list of resolutions
Not to create my own solutions
I want to live like my…[Read more]

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Merry Christmas!!

My Christmas Prayer
All the lights are hung, twinkling
Like a million stars glittering all over the walls
By the window the tree is shining
Crowned with a…[Read more]

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Oh, wow! I keep forgetting about this. I am a bad thread-up-keeper . . . if there is such a word. . .

Anyway, this week’s is rather short. Just something I started singing to…[Read more]

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This one is another very personal one to me. As always, critique and enjoy!!

Rest in Him

I know where there is a hushed abode
If in my life the longings are heavy load
A…[Read more]

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Here’s this week’s.

Along the lanes and the country road
Through these rugged hills the landscape comes alive
Such vivid hues of scarlet and wine

Blown on the wind of a stormy…[Read more]

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Another more personal peom, but I hope that you all enjoy it! 🙂

Thank You for Forgiving Me

Once my life was wasted with lust, aslant in a downward slide
Once I lived like a…[Read more]

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Oh, dear! Sorry I forgot about this!

This week’s is one that I wrote more recently.  It’s a little more personal to me than most of the other poems I have written.

As usual,…[Read more]

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Here is another revision of one of my older poem/songs. Enjoy and critque! A

And if you have written any poetry you’d like to share, please feel free to post it here. 🙂

My…[Read more]

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This week I have another revision of an older song. Enjoy and critique!

Bloom (Where you are)
Flower, you’re crowned with a jewel-like bud
But all you think about is that…[Read more]

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Okay, so I know some of you (uhem, @parker) have encouraged me to publish my poems as a book. I have really appreciated the encouragement and critique you all have given…[Read more]

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Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please…[Read more]