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Sorry I’m a little behind! This week’s is a revison of one I wrote some time ago. As always, I hope you enjoy, and please critique. Also, if you’ve written any poetry you’d like to post, feel free! This thread it’s just a showcase for my material. I would like to see what you have too. 🙂

Captain of Me
The storm is raging
The waves are caging
There’s no way I can stay afloat
I’m alone in my little boat
I need someone who can be
Captain and navigate this sea

I hear You calling
Through wind’s a squalling
Call me, I will come take the helm
I will guide out of waves that whelm
Just let me have the control
I’ll be the Captain of your soul I cry for lifeline
There’s no way I can stay alive
I need Him divine
I will drown if life takes a dive

Lord, be Captain of me tonight
You will be faithful
Storms might strengthen and may affright
I may be woeful
Lord, Your hands are able to steer
Through these tides to Your sturdy pier
Lord, be Captain of me tonight

I surrender to
Him who needs no crew
To survive this stormy ordeal
Put Your hand on this broken wheel
I need You to ever be
Captain and navigate this sea

You will pilot me
Safe to heaven’s shore
You will pilot me
You I will adore
Lord, my Captain forevermore