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				<title>Daeus Lamb started the topic archiving the guilds in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81265/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 26 Jun 2020 01:43:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heads up. We&#8217;re moving the guilds to the archives. You&#8217;ll still be able to access old posts, but you won&#8217;t be able to make new&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-81265"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/81265/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Daeus Lamb started the topic Introducing GROUPS in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72157/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 27 Jan 2020 15:42:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey SE people!</p>
<p>We&#8217;ve launched a cool new feature on the forum called groups.</p>
<p>You can find them in the nav bar like so:</p>
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<p>Groups are hubs for writers to gather around something they share in common. They include a Facebook-like feed and most of them also include their own forums.</p>
<p>So far there are three types of groups:<br />
1. Word war&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-72157"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/72157/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Some Thoughts in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 14 Dec 2019 03:47:23 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Parimis!</p>
<p>I just wanted to gather some thoughts on an idea. Would you guys appreciate having short story competitions once a month again? And if so, would you like to have individual submissions, or would you like to make small groups? (note that this will only be taking place within the guild of Parimi Alca. Maybe every now and then we&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-70647"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70647/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic word War VIII in the forum Word Wars</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70522/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Dec 2019 20:47:58 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Submit thy word&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-70522"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/70522/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Ariella Newheart started the topic An Important Change to My Book in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/69969/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 25 Nov 2019 23:57:49 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, Parimis! I&#8217;m currently editing <em>Ashen Blaze..</em>.again. There&#8217;s a reason I call myself an obsessive editor. Anyway, I have a good reason for this edit—a little something called backstory.</p>
<p>Through the years, my beta-readers have often told me that my book begins very suddenly. Readers get punched in the face with the action, so to speak. I a&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-69969"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/69969/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Word War VII in the forum Word Wars</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/68649/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Nov 2019 01:17:19 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Story Embers 2.0 in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/68645/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 12 Nov 2019 00:59:09 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Returning in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/68293/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 07 Nov 2019 22:30:21 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello Parimis!</p>
<p>I vanished off the face of the earth for a few months, it seems. However, I have officially graduated from school, completed exams, and therefore <em>should</em> be free again, like the old days.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m really sorry for the general chaos of me not being around, and not really speaking to anyone at all.</p>
<p>Thank you so much <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/jane-maree/' rel="nofollow ugc">@Jane-Maree</a> for&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-68293"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/68293/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic Word War VII in the forum Word Wars</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/68043/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 04 Nov 2019 20:31:43 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic Guild Master&#039;s End of School Exams in the forum Prayer Requests</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/67176/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 18 Oct 2019 08:51:27 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Ariella Newheart started the topic Character Castle in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 12 Oct 2019 01:38:48 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>At the center of Parimi Alca, where all biomes and genres converge, a splendid structure stands high on a hill. A remnant of ages past, it has remained untouched from the very foundation of the world. The ancient stonework, a medley of different architecture, most resembles a Victorian castle. Enter through a door of weathered green wood and you&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-66773"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66773/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic Word war #6 in the forum Word Wars</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/66523/</link>
				<pubDate>Mon, 07 Oct 2019 20:49:33 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>Emma Starr replied to the topic Azeline&#039;s Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 11 Sep 2019 17:06:44 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> I really liked your poems&#8217; themes! Overall, you had vivid word choices which I appreciate. The second poem had great imagery&#8211;especially the first three lines.</p>
<p>In a few places, something that would help us as readers would be changing the word order or playing around with word choice. I&#8217;m the thinking of &#8220;<em>Are a few of very many/That&hellip;</em><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64973"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64973/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic Word War #5 in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 05 Sep 2019 04:50:52 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for posting this, Catherine! You&#8217;re the best.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64539"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64539/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Jane Maree replied to the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 04 Sep 2019 01:43:02 -0400</pubDate>

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				<title>W.O.Holmes replied to the topic Azeline&#039;s Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 31 Aug 2019 05:03:34 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a>. I am new here and write poetry as a starter. So I will firstly be critiquing and complimenting your work. (Not like I&#8217;m not, &#8217;cause I&#8217;m on here.)</p>
<p>On the whole, your first poem was very well done and I definitely liked it. One note though would be your last three lines; to some people, they may seem somewhat difficult to read -&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64086"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64086/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64054/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 30 Aug 2019 21:07:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Since I think we&#8217;ve mostly agreed to go with our previous idea (although <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a>&#8216;s thought was very fascinating and one I would enjoy delving deeper into), I went ahead and wrote the first scene, coming up with a bunch of names that you can feel free to change. Personally, at already 969 words, I think it&#8217;s too long, but I&#8217;ve always been bad at&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64054"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64054/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Snack Thief replied to the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64018/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 30 Aug 2019 01:44:47 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&lt;p style=&#8221;text-align: left;&#8221;&gt;<a href='https://storyembers.org/members/steward-of-the-pen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@steward-of-the-pen</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a>  Ok so I like the idea, but like Steward says, it might take a lot more research than we have time for. We could keep that plot in mind for some future war when we have more time to work with it 🙂 Thanks for jumping in!&lt;/p&gt;</p>
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				<title>Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 30 Aug 2019 00:59:28 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> Wow, that could be really cool. I feel quite strongly about that subject (as I&#8217;m sure a lot of us do), so I&#8217;d be pretty open to writing about it. And there&#8217;s definitely a lot of potential there. However&#8230;it is very, very complicated, and I feel we&#8217;d have to spend a lot of time on it trying to get it right. Maybe we could try to go for&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-64017"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/64017/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Banana Peacock Warrior replied to the topic Azeline&#039;s Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63680/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Aug 2019 17:48:02 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a>! I&#8217;ll admit that I don&#8217;t specialize in free-verse, but I think that these are really good! I especially liked Self-Consciousness in how true it really is! I liked this verse&#8230;</p>
<p>Which keeps you from caring outwardly<br />
Since too occupied you are with “me”</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t know about you, but I know that whenever I ask for critiques and act&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-63680"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63680/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War: A Cultural Collision in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Aug 2019 10:26:39 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey guys! As per usual, I am late with this war notification, but we&#8217;ll see how we go. &#x1f60a;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p><strong>Prompt</strong>: Write a story in which two cultures clash</p>
<p><strong>Word Limit</strong>: 2500</p>
<p><strong>Time</strong>: Monday 19th (August) – Monday 2nd (of September)  [Sorry for lateness. &#x1f62c;]</p>
<p><strong>The Judge</strong>: Possibly me? I&#8217;ll get back to you on that. &#x1f602;</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>For those who are new to Parimi Alca Guild Wa&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-63662"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63662/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic I Am Alive, and Apologise in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Fri, 23 Aug 2019 09:55:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey guys! In case you don&#8217;t remember me, I&#8217;m Jess. I&#8217;m actually your guildmaster, and I&#8217;m not dead!</p>
<p>First up, full apologies. A fair few major life things happened, and I was overwhelmed and basically shut myself in my room and just cried while trying to keep on top of things for basically a month. On that, prayer for dealing with deadlines and&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-63661"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/63661/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Azeline&#039;s Poetry in Need of Critique in the forum Poetry Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 22 Aug 2019 17:09:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> These are really cool! LOL I always loved not having to make things rhyme 😆</p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61449/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 09 Jul 2019 23:39:56 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> Yes. XD We have a habit of getting the honorable mention a LOT though, so it&#8217;s become a bit of a joke with the guildmasters, and in the guild.</p>
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<p>And yes guys! Awesome job! *happy claps*</p>
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				<title>Julia replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 04 Jul 2019 23:00:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/j-a-penrose/' rel="nofollow ugc">@j-a-penrose</a> OH MY GOSH WAHT?! WE FINALLY WON?? &#x1f631;</p>
<p>GREAT JOB, EVERYONE!! &#x1f604; I wasn&#8217;t there as much as I probably should have been for the editing process, but I read it just now, and you all did a fantastic job!!</p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 03 Jul 2019 03:00:08 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>GUYS GUYS GUYS GUYS!</p>
<p>GUESS WHAT???</p>
<p><em>WE WOOOON</em>. Not the usual Honorable Mention for a change!  &#x1f61d;</p>
<p><a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1HlocK0KqzrnUU7Ci9F8J-Sm3UCZUrz7J0qa0ZOAGBuk/edit?usp=sharing" rel="nofollow ugc">Here is the doc</a> if you want to check them out.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>Jane was reeeeally impressed. She was super impressed, particularaly seeing that I sent her a message a day or so before saying, &#8220;ACK. THERE&#8217;S A WAR AND I DON&#8217;T EVEN KNOW WHAT THE PARIMIS ARE DOING.&#8221;&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-61113"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/61113/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Mon, 01 Jul 2019 02:15:22 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Guys, I&#8217;m so proud of you!</p>
<p>It was really nice to come back from a week of injections, hospital trips, conferences, and essays (legit. It should <em>not</em> be legal to assign teenagers with thirteen essays to do in five days. *dramatic sob*) and to find that you had gotten on with writing, and had done an <em>a.m.a.z.i.n.g</em> job at it. So proud. You guys made&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60911"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60911/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sun, 30 Jun 2019 01:29:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay guys, I&#8217;m finished! I tried my best, but I&#8217;m still not sure if the end brought out the beauty of the hands enough. I put it at the end of the doc (it starts on page four), so please go ahead and edit and suggest away! I tried to keep a lot of the original in it, but I might have missed some good sections, so feel free to add them back in.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60799"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60799/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 29 Jun 2019 19:55:29 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey everyone!</p>
<p>Okay, I&#8217;ve changed it to present tense, but with all the confusing edits on the doc I think it will be easier if I work on finishing the draft in a separate doc. I&#8217;ll use what&#8217;s already on this doc and add to the ending to flesh out the beauty of the ordinary hands. I may need to rework some sections that are already written so it&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60782"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60782/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>anne_the_noob14 replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 29 Jun 2019 17:18:06 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>Good points. I like the idea of the kid carrying the grandmother out.</p>
<p>About to head over to the doc and see what&#8217;s going on over there.</p>
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				<title>Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 29 Jun 2019 15:35:30 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> @everyone I think we could just change that exchange of dialogue a bit to allow him to carry her out himself. That would probably be the simplest option, rather than introducing another character.</p>
<p>Also, I&#8217;m thinking that changing the story to present tense like the aforementioned short story winner did might be a good option. That way&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60762"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60762/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60673/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 28 Jun 2019 02:22:09 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/julia/' rel="nofollow ugc">@julia</a> Yay, thanks so much for getting it started!</p>
<p>I think that to be more realistic, the character should help/carry/drag the grandmother out of the building before thinking about her hands. In the adrenaline rush of escaping a fire, I doubt anyone in their right mind would be able to sit and take a trip down memory lane with flames and smoke&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60673"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60673/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60653/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 27 Jun 2019 19:12:35 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay guys. So sorry I&#8217;ve been gone, been dealing with doctors not believing me about my allergies until it was pretty obvious I was a mess, combined with the end of term rush of writing a ton of essays and music reports. *facepalm* But I&#8217;m back now.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m agreeing with Grandmother&#8217;s hands. Also, seeing that it has to be in a dramatic setting, maybe&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60653"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60653/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60642/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 27 Jun 2019 16:52:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Okay, I see what you&#8217;re all saying. Good points, good points. *nods sagely*</p>
<p>So we&#8217;re going with the grandmother hands then? Someone needs to draft it, soon&#8230;I would love to, but I don&#8217;t have a clear vision/path for how I would do it&#8230;</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/ariella-newheart/' rel="nofollow ugc">@ariella-newheart</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/steward-of-the-pen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@steward-of-the-pen</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/julia/' rel="nofollow ugc">@julia</a> <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> @everyone</p>
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				<title>Steward of the Pen replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60613/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 27 Jun 2019 01:34:03 -0400</pubDate>

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<p>That is a good idea, and I hate to bring this up now because we&#8217;re so short on time and should start writing very soon, but I&#8217;m a little concerned about it. First, writing fiction about Bible characters can be risky because of the potential for misrepresenting the true biblical account, especially&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60613"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60613/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Elisha Starquill replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60586/</link>
				<pubDate>Wed, 26 Jun 2019 19:52:53 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I know this is kind of last minute, but I have a suggestion. I really like the idea of hands, because as Sherlock would say, hands are often ignored, but they tell you a lot about a person. What if, instead of a grandmother&#8217;s hands, we did Jesus&#8217; hands? From since he was a baby, to doing carpenter work, to healing people in his ministry, to the&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60586"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60586/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Ariella Newheart replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60368/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 23 Jun 2019 18:54:06 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> I really like the snippet you wrote about the leaf! The description and word choices are just lovely. And the girl in the snippet reminds me of myself, strangely enough. xD I think the French would be &#8220;vous êtes belle, érable.&#8221;</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/steward-of-the-pen/' rel="nofollow ugc">@steward-of-the-pen</a> I love the idea of focusing on a grandmother&#8217;s hands and her sacrificial service. I&#8217;m j&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60368"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60368/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60358/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 23 Jun 2019 03:11:18 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I also really like <a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a>&#8216;s idea of the elderly patients hands. I was thinking about it some more today, and I had an idea.</p>
<p>What if the story was a string of short scenes, each maybe 1-5 paragraphs long, that shows snippets of things a granddaughter is doing with her grandmother. Each scene would skip a little farther ahead in time, with both&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60358"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60358/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Julia replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60351/</link>
				<pubDate>Sun, 23 Jun 2019 01:42:39 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>*cartwheels in* HEY GUYS! I&#8217;m a bit late, since I closed my email during finals week <em>(it kept distracting me when I was trying to study 😛 )</em> bUT I&#8217;M HERE NOW! YAY!</p>
<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> I love that idea of an elderly patient&#8217;s hands. It immediately struck me as something very deep, and as something that could really meet the prompt we have. 🙂</p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60256/</link>
				<pubDate>Fri, 21 Jun 2019 00:05:25 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a> Hey, nice to see you back!</p>
<p>Ooooooh, some interesting ideas there. *nodnod* That&#8217;d be very feelsey</p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Guild War : It&#039;s a Beautiful Day in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60109/</link>
				<pubDate>Tue, 18 Jun 2019 10:16:39 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It seems like literal aeons ago, but once upon an Annual Theme of Pacing and Suspense, we looked <a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/lesson-4-the-object/" rel="nofollow ugc">creating a sense of suspense and atmosphere through objects</a> in writing. And then more recently, we had a post from Martin about <a href="https://storyembers.org/forums/topic/writing-life-what-to-do-when-youre-not-writing-2/" rel="nofollow ugc">The Artist’s Eye</a>, and to seek the beautiful in the ordinary everyday.</p>
<p>For the next two weeks, that’s exactly what we’&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-60109"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/60109/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Writing Life: Self Publishing vs Traditional Publishing in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Jun 2019 10:28:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>Final post until we&#8217;re caught up! *cheers*</em></p>
<p><em>So, this one is written by Jane, with the input of Faith and Daeus who are two of Story Embers&#8217; self-published writers, unlike Jane who is very much neck deep in working through the traditional publishing world.</em></p>
<p><em>So you know from the start, both have their benefits and disadvantages. Particularly&hellip;</em><span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59766"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59766/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Writing Life: Typing vs Writing by Hand in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59765/</link>
				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Jun 2019 10:15:14 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>Hello all!</em></p>
<p><em>This week’s (or more, last week&#8217;s) lesson is from Martin, and is looking at the pros and cons of typing, and writing by hand. </em></p>
<p><em>So, without any further rambling from Jess, let’s see what Martin has to say about notebooks and keyboards!</em></p>
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<p>Things I’ve learned from my own experience with both mediums:</p>
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<p><strong><em>Typing:</em></strong></p>
<p><em>Pros:</em></p>
<p>Typing is fas&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59765"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59765/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Writing Life: Why Write? in the forum Weekly Theme Discussion</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 13 Jun 2019 10:07:15 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><em>Hey guys!</em></p>
<p><em>If you hadn&#8217;t noticed, we&#8217;re three weeks behind! *hides face in shame* However, I&#8217;m just going to catch it all up tonight so that we&#8217;re back on track!</em></p>
<p><em>This particular post was written by yours truly on why we should even write in the first place.</em></p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>
<p>If you’re reading this, the chances are pretty high that you’re a writer. But how oft&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59764"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59764/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Word War that Your Guildmaster Forgot in the forum Announcements</title>
				<link>https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59479/</link>
				<pubDate>Sat, 08 Jun 2019 21:09:17 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Results are up! We didn&#8217;t do so well this time, but we <em>did</em> know that. 😉 A fair few people didn&#8217;t get their counts in on time, and those of us who did, didn&#8217;t write a ton. Myself well and truly included.</p>
<p>But guess what, guys? There&#8217;s a good chance that we&#8217;ll have a word war in July when we&#8217;re Camp NaNo-ing to absolutely thrash the other guilds!&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59479"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59479/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 06 Jun 2019 04:35:11 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello all, and welcome to the month before July, or more specifically, the month before a lot of writers go completely mental and write a heap. 😉</p>
<p>If you are new to the vast quantity of writing forums out there, April and July are Camp NaNo seasons. Camp NaNo is an online writing &#8220;camp&#8221; where you and up to 19 fellow writers band together to try&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59364"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59364/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>Evelyn replied to the topic Fantasy Biome in the forum Parimi Alca Writing Discussions</title>
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				<pubDate>Wed, 05 Jun 2019 13:38:31 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><a href='https://storyembers.org/members/azeline-d/' rel="nofollow ugc">@azeline-d</a></p>
<p>Oh cool! I had no idea that had a name. Thank you!</p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic Word War that Your Guildmaster Forgot in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Tue, 04 Jun 2019 22:06:51 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Last day for word count submissions! Daeus is tallying&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59303"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59303/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose replied to the topic You Have Arrived at Parimi Alca! in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Sat, 01 Jun 2019 00:16:01 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Parimis to attention! After just over a year of being a guild, we have two brand new guildlings!</p>
<p>Welcome Elisha and Simeon Shedd! (Also, if any of you know their tags, please tag them! I can&#8217;t find the tags.&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-59096"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/59096/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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				<title>J.A.Penrose started the topic Celebrating a Delayed One Year Birthday in the forum Announcements</title>
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				<pubDate>Thu, 30 May 2019 02:38:16 -0400</pubDate>

									<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Guys, guess what??</p>
<p>Parimi Alca is ONE YEAR OLD! *flails* It was announced to the world on May 28th, and Steward reminded me of this the other day. Unfortunately, I then totally ran out of time to actually say anything. 😛 But I just wanted you all to know this exciting fact, and get excited with me. 😀</p>
<p>So yay,&hellip;<span class="activity-read-more" id="activity-read-more-58987"><a href="https://storyembers.org/activity/p/58987/" rel="nofollow ugc">[Read more]</a></span></p>
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