@esther-sears
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 4 years, 7 months ago
@pensword @esther-sears I’ll just us off where we left off I suppose! 😀
Moira stood at the door, heart thumping. Who would be standing outside her door this time of night? But it was a terrible night, maybe it was one of the neighbors and they need help…
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 4 years, 7 months ago
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@dakota Thanks so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it! 😀
@vivian-grant Actually a lot of people beta-reading for me aren’t on Story Embers, so I thought it would be easier to just do the same thing for everyone, since everyone has email 🙂 And I’ll post to my blog after the beta-readers have it 😀
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@vivian-grant @emberynus-the-dragonslayer @the-inkspiller
Thank you all so much for reading!!
Yes, it did seem a little short to me too. I like the idea about adding more with the sharks so maybe I’ll try that!
And nope, this was not taken out any other projects 😉 This story is all there is! It’s an interesting thought to turn it into a…[Read more]
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
@vivian-grant Great!! You’ve been very helpful so far so I’d love to steal you for my core group!! 😀 I’m trying to figure out how exactly to communicate exactly… Would you be comfortable/willing to use email?
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Esther Sears started the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 7 months ago
Hey guys!!
So I have a super short, fun little piece of flash fiction that I’d like some feedback on! It’s only about 500 words, about a character who argues with the author about his death 😀
(I’m tagging people who have critiqued for me before… If anyone is interested, I’d really like to form a core group of beta-readers to proofread for me…[Read more]
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 4 years, 7 months ago
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Aww thank you ^_^ I wrote it wanting it to be moving, to have the message of how an honest person can be changed for the worse through hatred and envy.
Yes!! That’s so cool! I love Dakota! 😀 😀
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
@emberynus-the-dragonslayer Thank you so much!!! 😀 I’m so glad you liked it ^_^ Were there any parts in particular that moved you? (Or would have changed about the story?)
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Esther Sears replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 4 years, 8 months ago
Okay, first of all, I’M SO SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG 🙁 🙁 The last couple weeks have been rough ones, and in all the chaos I somehow forgot all about this 🙁 But I just finished reading the second part!! 😀 (And I KNOW I gave you my comments from the first part, but when I went to look I couldn’t find them? Did you ever get…[Read more]
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 8 months ago
@vivian-grant It already sounds super cool!! 😀 I’m excited to read it!
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
@vivian-grant Those are sooooo helpful, I appreciate it so much!!
I’d love to read your story! What’s it about?
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
@vivian-grant Thank you sooo much!! It means so much to hear you say that ^_^ I’m glad to hear you didn’t know what was going to happen right away 🙂
Yes, you are pronouncing Bjorn correctly 😉
That’s a very good point about the ships! Thanks 🙂
Would you mind commenting on the grammer mistakes in the document? I definitely want to get those…[Read more]
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
@vivian-grant If you can pay special attention to setting, and the girl character (Moira), that would be super helpful!! Although anything you notice and can give me feedback on is great 🙂
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
@vivian-grant Yaaaayyy!!! Thank you so much! 😀 Now, it is more or less a tragic love story, so as long as you’re prepared for that… 😉
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Esther Sears started the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Hey all! I’m really struggling to find beta readers at the moment 🙁 I have a short story that needs some critique. Would anyone be interested in reading it for me? It’s about 8000 words, a bittersweet story about two boys and a girl in a small fishing village set in a fantasy world ^_^
Let me know and I’ll post the google doc!! 😀 😀
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Esther Sears posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago
Hey @deeprun 😀 Do you happen to know of any other people who would be willing to beta read the short story that you read for me? I’m really struggling to find beta readers :'(
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 4 years, 9 months ago
Nono, you pop in whenever 😀 I’m making up things as I go along so I have no plan 😉
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Esther Sears posted an update in the group Romance Writers 4 years, 9 months ago
Hey guys! I’m still not entirely sure how this group thing is supposed to work but I’m gonna give it a shot 😉
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 4 years, 9 months ago
Moira squeaked and shut the door.
Who is that??
Hands trembling, she pulled down the bar across the door.
“That is NOT my parents.”
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