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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 9 months ago
Just some heads up! Daeus announced that they will be archiving the guilds; he didn’t say when. So I figured I should let you two know and also ask-do you want to relocate this thread to somewhere else?
Hope you have a good day!
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Daeus Lamb started the topic archiving the guilds in the forum Announcements 5 years, 9 months ago
Heads up. We’re moving the guilds to the archives. You’ll still be able to access old posts, but you won’t be able to make new ones.…[Read more]
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Selah CJW started the topic Summoning Beta Readers! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
Hello, all! It seems like ages since I’ve last been on here, and I’m sure I’m missing some tags for my former beta group…if so, I’m sorry. ::P I’m tagging what I hope is all of you who currently have access to my book even if you have not read it yet, and probably some of you who don’t. I know there’s gotta be a couple of you tagged who haven’t…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 11 months ago
Megyn lay still, her eyes still pressed shut. Slowly, she drew her knees up to her chest and curled herself up, whispering faintly “I can’t . . . I can’t give up.”
But she lay still. Slowly, she drew a heavy breath and swallowed hard against a rising sob. Reaching over her shoulders, she feebly slid the cello from her…[Read more]
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 11 months ago
@esther-sears @pensword Coolio! 🙂
Straightening her back, Megyn stumbled on. Her teeth gritted as she stepped on another stone.
As she grabbed a limb for support, her eyes caught a flicker of light through the trees. What was that? she thought as she caught her breath. Hesitantly, she took a step forward, eyes ahead on the tiny flame of…[Read more]
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Esther Sears replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 11 months ago
@pensword @esther-sears I’ll just us off where we left off I suppose! 😀
Moira stood at the door, heart thumping. Who would be standing outside her door this time of night? But it was a terrible night, maybe it was one of the neighbors and they need help…
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 11 months ago
@pensword @esther-sears okee, dokee. It looks like we’re all ready then. How shall we continue?
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PenSword replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 11 months ago
Whoops sorry. Life got away from me. I’m good with starting again. @esther-sears @dakota
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 11 months ago
@esther-sears @pensword I’m all for starting it up again.
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 11 months ago
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 12 months ago
I am comfortable with email, though wouldn’t you just post the content here or on your blog?
I would love to read more like this! All of the brief examples sound fun. Keep at it!
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 5 years, 12 months ago
@esther-sears I’m doing fine. Staying home and staying healthy.
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Dakota replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 12 months ago
Sorry I’m late to respond to this!
It was hilarious!!! But I really have no critiques that hasn’t already been offered, other than great job! 🙂
That would be interesting to read! 🙂
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 12 months ago
@esther-sears Heck yeah! At the very least I would be interested to see what it looks like.
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Emberynus The Dragonslayer replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
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Thank you so much for tagging me to this!I loved it! Very funny and I can sympathize with the debate with characters LOL!! They can be very persuasive sometimes 😉
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
It was hilarious, but I think that it ended too quickly. I’m not sure that it needs much action, just more dialogue. I’m not saying that action wouldn’t work (the author making orcs show up just to scare Lucas would be pretty funny), just that the main theme was about an argument between author and character.
Is this scene taken…[Read more]
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The Inkspiller replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
It was, in a word, fun. 🙂
I really enjoyed it for all of its silliness – and especially the tragicomic realization by Lucas that he’s not the chosen one. It was so enjoyable I kind of actually want to see the theoretical rest of this story that this would have been excerpted from (unless this is actually an excerpt (parody?) from…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 years ago
Hello again, Esther! Thank you for tagging me. First of all, I would be interested in being a core beta-reader. I really love reading stories, but also helping writers hone their works!
Now I am off to read the flash fiction (it already sounds fun).
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years ago
@pensword Hey! Glad to see you’re okay! 🙂 And it’s okay, don’t worry about it.
Do you think we should keep going even though @esther-sears isn’t here or should we wait for her?
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Dakota replied to the topic Moira needs to be a more developed character RP XD in the forum Character Development Corner 6 years ago
@esther-sears @pensword (Hey! Just wanted to check on you guys! How are you doing? Hoping and praying everything is ok!)
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