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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Prologue feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 weeks, 4 days ago
Thank you both for the feedback.
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Prologue feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 weeks, 6 days ago
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Prologue feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 weeks, 6 days ago
Thank you. I really don’t know how this keeps happening. 😛
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Vivian Grant started the topic Prologue feedback in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 weeks, 6 days ago
This is a one-page prologue to a larger story of mine, and I would like some feedback from anybody on whether it has a large enough hook. Would you continue reading after this introduction?
https://www.dropbox.com/home?preview=Prologue.docx
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Thank you for the feedback. I do see ways I could foreshadow the kidnapping a little more, because it is such a big part of the story.
Hmm, Zrorar… I put him into the beginning as a brief example of how adored and desired Phoenix was. He isn’t really supposed to have an actual role beyond that, and I think that expanding on his…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Thank you! I’m glad you liked it.
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 months ago
Thank you! I would greatly appreciate it.
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 months ago
Next weekend would work great, but again, you can come to it whenever you have time.
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 months ago
I appreciate the reply. I don’t have much of a deadline, and hopefully at least one person can critique it for me, so we’ll just see what happens.
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Vivian Grant started the topic Short story for beta-readers in the forum Fantasy Writers 2 months ago
Hello, all! I have a short story that is in need of critique. I will tag those who have already beta-read my work, but anyone else’s opinion would be appreciated.
@urwen-starial @anne_the_noob14 @taylorclogston @sam-m
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Vivian Grant commented on the post, 3 Ways a Biblical Doctrine of Sin Should Revamp How You Create Characters 2 months, 1 week ago
Thank you for this article! I sometimes make my characters flawed, but not to a satisfying extent. Hopefully this will prompt me to be a little more daring.
I recently read a book called The Thief, and the main character is so unique and differently flawed that he truly seems like a real person.
I also read The Girl with No Name! I love that book! -
Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 1 week ago
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
I am comfortable with email, though wouldn’t you just post the content here or on your blog?
I would love to read more like this! All of the brief examples sound fun. Keep at it!
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
It was hilarious, but I think that it ended too quickly. I’m not sure that it needs much action, just more dialogue. I’m not saying that action wouldn’t work (the author making orcs show up just to scare Lucas would be pretty funny), just that the main theme was about an argument between author and character.
Is this scene taken…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Flash Fiction-Beta Readers 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 2 weeks ago
Hello again, Esther! Thank you for tagging me. First of all, I would be interested in being a core beta-reader. I really love reading stories, but also helping writers hone their works!
Now I am off to read the flash fiction (it already sounds fun).
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Vivian Grant started the topic Hello! …And vampires in the forum Fantasy Writers 3 months ago
Hello, Fantasy group! I just joined, and I thought I would introduce a topic right away.
Vampires. They’re dark, they’re bloodthirsty, they’re— emo? Well, that does seem to be the favorite trend nowadays. In literature and on the screen, vampires are portrayed as chisel-faced drama-queens. Hopefully most of us know that wasn’t how vampires…[Read more]
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Vivian Grant joined the group Fantasy Writers 3 months ago
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic Tragic love story (with hints of fantasy) in the forum Romance Writers 3 months, 1 week ago
Which story are you talking about?
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Vivian Grant replied to the topic And so it begins! in the forum Introduce Yourself 3 months, 1 week ago
That’s alright, we all have busy periods.
I’m glad you liked the second half! I do not use GoogleDocs, but I do use Dropbox now whenever I need it. -
Vivian Grant replied to the topic Beta-readers enter here in the forum Horror writers 3 months, 1 week ago
I’m more amused than worried, but that is good to know.
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