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@sam-m

Thank you for the feedback. I do see ways I could foreshadow the kidnapping a little more, because it is such a big part of the story.

Hmm, Zrorar… I put him into the beginning as a brief example of how adored and desired Phoenix was. He isn’t really supposed to have an actual role beyond that, and I think that expanding on his character would begin to distract from the main characters.

The theme of this story is that immortality (cursed vampiric immortality, not eternal life in heaven) is not as awesome as it initially sounds, and that you have to find something -a cause or a person- that is worth the stretching eternity. But Innolan is definitely a gray area when it comes to whether he’s a ‘good’ person or not.