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It was hilarious, but I think that it ended too quickly. I’m not sure that it needs much action, just more dialogue. I’m not saying that action wouldn’t work (the author making orcs show up just to scare Lucas would be pretty funny), just that the main theme was about an argument between author and character.

Is this scene taken from a larger project? It is funny to imagine taking a serious scene from a serious story and turning it into a hilarious spin-off.