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Hi, @azeline-d! I’ll admit that I don’t specialize in free-verse, but I think that these are really good! I especially liked Self-Consciousness in how true it really is! I liked this verse…

Which keeps you from caring outwardly
Since too occupied you are with “me”

I don’t know about you, but I know that whenever I ask for critiques and actually only get compliments it drives me totally insane- so I’ll add a little thing in here… 😊 Again, not a free-verse poet, but some of the wording in a few of the verses seemed a little bit confusing; primarily the last verse in the 1st poem and the 7th in the 2nd. 😉

But anyway, I like them! They’re so true.